Mortal: Afk at the Beginning on Jiyin Island

Mortal: Afk at the Beginning on Jiyin Island

by Wrote The World

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861Kwords399chapters
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About This Novel

Traveling to the world of mortals cultivating immortals, you are in the cruel trial of Jiyin Island. Activate the [Hang-up Cultivation System] and you will continue to become stronger while you are alive! But his first priority is to survive the three-day life and death trial on a deserted island~ ... [Hang up and complete, get 3 points of mana, 1 point of physical power, and 1 point of spiritual power! [Hang up for the first time and get the Golden Rock Technique! After hanging up for a year, the art of refining weapons... I have been idle for ten years... Hundreds of years... Mu Fan: "Actually, I would rather hang up and become stronger in peace, and the years will be quiet. But... Now, I am a giant in the magic way, you have to call me old devil!"

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Specially Used for Complaining5mo ago

The fourth level of Qi training cannot kill a wild wolf. . Stupid and funny. A little bit of magic can be used to knock down beasts on fists or rocks.

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🔅᭄ꦿsunset ঞৣঁꦿ᭄. I.5mo ago

You have no brains. Wouldn't it be better to escape and build your own power and become the leader of the clan? You will die at any time here.

If Jiyin comes out of seclusion and summons you now, what do you think your fate will be? "Why should I run away? If I run away, I won't get a large increase in my elder status. What does Sun Chen, the alchemy-forming monk, have to do with my small foundation-building period?" "Jiyin Island has lost so much, and it still depends on me to make it back!" "The point is, why would I get involved in such a big event that has nothing to do with me and cause trouble for myself?"

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Kakapo 🦜2mo ago

One, a pure puppet, with almost no learning. After reading dozens of chapters, he still learned basic weapon refining skills, spells, common sense of the world of immortality, cultivation knowledge, and knowledge of the various arts of immortality... The protagonist has hardly learned much. Second, the author actually thinks that tool refining is just processing. Your high-end machine tool does not have machine control? Can your spaceship fly just by stacking materials? Which equipment above the magic weapon does not have runes or formations? Third, with such a big hang-up, you hesitated for a long time whether to leave Jiyin Island. Damn, if you spend time after running away, you won't be able to gain status. Anyway, you only need to hang up for about 10 times to build the golden elixir. What are you afraid of? To put it bluntly, the protagonist is useless. He doesn't study, doesn't think about the future, has no talent, and is basically just a puppet. He can hardly see any efforts and progress. He has no expectations for the subsequent plot. Even defeating Han Li can only show that Goldfinger is awesome and has nothing to do with the protagonist. Illiterate protagonists are really not popular anymore! ! ! ! !

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Specially Used for Complaining5mo ago

A gambling game in several foundation building stages will require the magic weapon of the Danjie monk. The ancient treasure used by Yuanying? ? ? ? And high-level magic weapons actually cost thousands of spirit stones to buy? ? ? ? What the hell, the author wrote it himself and didn't read it

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Let it Go5mo ago

At the beginning of my battle royale, people with demonic spiritual roots are resources who will waste them. Isn't it okay to raise beads?

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༒ℳ๓₯㎕3mo ago

The writing is actually pretty good, but the comments are a bit embarrassing. Even the female protagonists are not from the original novel. There are a bunch of original female protagonists, but only one Shi Die. It makes people's heads hurt when they read it. Fan authors should stop doing those fancy things, and if you want to be original, don't write fan fiction.

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Return of All Calamities4mo ago

Specifically writing about bad luck is a failure.

Except for sadistic stories, there are very few stories where the main character is very unlucky. For 9-1, I even found someone who was incredibly lucky for comparison.

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Sunny Day. . U3mo ago

Jiyin earns hundreds of thousands of spiritual stones a year. It's funny. Your math is worse than Wangyu. Hundreds of thousands of spiritual stones can buy hundreds of demon pills. If Ji Yin can be as rich as he wants, I'll let you say whatever you want.

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✎ℳ๓₯㎕ Heartbeat3mo ago

After reading Chapter 13, no one read it, and it's all bad reviews, which is not unreasonable.

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My Heart is Colder Than a Butcher's Knife3mo ago

Stepping on the stone will reward the emperor's cultivation level

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