The Yang Clan of Mortals

The idea is good, but cultivating immortality in a mortal family is too much of a drag. As far as Tiannan and Luan Xinghai are concerned, the Leisure family has basically reached the top of the Core Formation. No matter how high it is, they will be suppressed and Yuanying will take action. Especially in Chaos Xinghai, the Xinggong family is the dominant one, and both good and evil are restless. It is not suitable for the survival of a cultivating family at all. If a family of cultivators really develops, they will eventually become nourishment for the demonic forces like Jiyin Island. In the original work, weren't the Miaoyinmen and Kiriginmen destroyed by Jiyin Island because of their forces' resources?

In the Honghuangliu novels, innate spiritual treasures come with their own laws and innate restrictions. People who have innate spiritual treasures will not only listen to the sermons of big men, but also understand the laws and restrictions in the spiritual treasures to create techniques or magical powers. Or formation. The innate spiritual treasure can also be used to kill three corpses. It is recommended to complete the Pangu flag in front of the pig's trotters. (As for which way to go, Pig's Knuckle thinks for himself) Then there are the exercises. In terms of supernatural power, I hope that Pig's Feet can learn from the Three Treasures of Kaitian, instead of looking for exercises everywhere like ordinary people. (For example, when it comes to foundation building, you need to change the foundation building method, the golden elixir to the method, and the Nascent Soul to change the method. It will be very troublesome.) In terms of weapon refining, you can also understand the formation prohibitions in the Three Treasures of Kaitian. In terms of storage, I hope to refine a larger storage ring or something. Then you can create a small portable space. Can be used to plant spiritual roots. Then the weapon refining can also be used to refine the hair crown to prevent attacks from the soul and so on. Fairy clothes, fairy shoes. Used for self-defense. For reference, Taishang Laojun always wears fairy locks in his belt. The bracelet you carry with you can store weapons. For reference from the ancient cultivators, Sanqing, alchemy, weapon refining, and formations are all very strong. Then the heroine must also make arrangements. Cultivation of immortality is not a journey alone. Disciples can also consider the mode of not being a mortal disciple, but a prehistoric disciple model. The rest comes to mind and will be mentioned later.

As title. This is a family novel, not a eunuch novel.

The protagonist's setting is so high and there aren't many battles, but they drag on. And time travel does not mean time travel. The development family does not develop well either. You're jumping left and right here, wanting and wanting. How to write well.

I would like to give some advice to the author. It is best not to accept so many female protagonists in the mortal world. If you write about immortality properly, don't stop breeding. Just accept one or two that are helpful to you. Don't be like those, accept only women, those who are about to die, those who have given birth to children, and those who come. That's disgusting.

There is a provision in the original work that stipulates that if any of the spiritual consciousness, mana, and physical body reaches three times the same level, a forbidden heavenly tribulation will be triggered. If you survive, people from the fairy world will be killed in the lower world.

Is there more heroines? Is there more heroines? Is there more heroines?

Writing a family story in "Mortals" is just a drag on the protagonist who has a problem. It has flaws and it is not fun enough to write a family story. For ordinary mortals, it can be written with more words.

Guess why the innate is in the front and the treasure is in the back? Even in this resource-poor world of mortals, even the Great Luo Jinxian dare not think of it.

This novel is actually well written, but it shouldn't be about a family. Group portraits like a family are difficult to write, and most authors don't have a good grasp of it. Another thing is that the author, who travels back and forth, is not suitable for the family and is easily exposed. There is also the mortal world, Tiannan is not suitable for developing a family. If there is an invasion of demons, the readers are from the perspective of the Jade Emperor. It is useless to know that your development is useless, and there is no sense of immersion.