Mortal's Strengthened Immortal Cultivation

I have read almost 20 chapters. The writing is okay, the plot is okay, but the golden finger setting is useless. It feels like it is rubbing the reader's IQ into the ground! [Emot=default,12/] First of all, the golden finger setting is to strengthen, even spiritual stones can be strengthened. This setting means that there is no shortage of spiritual stones, and I see that what the author has been writing about now is the lack of spiritual stones! I don't know if other readers have thought of this. Anyway, I feel that my intelligence has been insulted and I am ready to abandon the book

How many spirit beasts does the protagonist want to collect? Just have two or three that are more powerful. You have to want to collect everything you see. In the Bloody Forbidden Land, you can also see bats and ink dragons that want to collect. You have a golden finger to eat spiritual stone resources, and a lot of spiritual beasts also want resources. Can you raise them?

I was completely influenced by third-rate Chinese comics, and I don't know what the author was thinking.

Can you write it well? It doesn't cost money to read money. When someone fights, just throw hundreds of talismans. I won't talk about you in the early stage for low-level ones. Those who ride on horses can be crushed by magic weapons. You have to throw in middle-level and high-level ones. Throw hundreds or hundreds like waste paper. You write it well, right? Every mouthful is short of spiritual stones. In a fight, you throw tens of thousands of spiritual stones first.

Basically, for ordinary people, if you accept Chen Qiaoqian in the early stage, you will definitely be defeated. In the early stage, besides being a woman, Chen Qiaoqian was useless. Don't talk about a family with a family that can't even build a foundation. What's the use? It's not just that you're greedy for other people's bodies. You don't need to look at the rest of the story to know that it's a harem of women. If you write a fanfic, you have no goals at all. Oh, the reason why you write fanfic is to have a lot of beauties, but at least it has some sentiment, so it's different from others. You didn't even have any foreplay. If you don't wither, who will wither?

Bad reviews, bad reviews day by day, they don't pay attention to the Taoist Master of Time. Han Laomo came to time and space to shoot the time traveler you wrote. I laughed happily that he just opened a small account to play, but you made a joke on his wife and trashed this book.

I have read ten mortal fanfics, but none of them have a human flavor. This one is the meanest. I read Chapter 91. I saved her, she killed me, I saved her again, why did she kill me again? Later, I slept with her just to fall in love. Mortal is such a good template. There is a lot to be done in writing fanfics according to this framework. The themes that can be written are all about women or daydreaming. Basic rules are broken at will. There is no imagination at all. I wonder if good writers won't take advantage of the popularity of Mortals. Those who write Mortals fanfics are all novices and are not ready to read Mortals fanfics anymore.

This author has not figured out what type of people ordinary readers are. Are ordinary people the kind of lively readers? In the mortal world, the weak and the strong prey on each other, but Han Li cultivates immortality calmly and cautiously. If you don't get scolded for adding so many messy jokes in a novel, use your brain. Will mortal readers like this kind of fanfic?

It is recommended to take a look at this picture for the number of words on the gold finger panel.

Is this mortal fan fiction? I've read the original work and there are many other fans, but I've never seen anyone throwing talismans at the stage of forming an elixir. Aren't those above the stage of forming an elixir a magic weapon for magical powers? Are you still throwing charms here? Not to mention this, there is still the elixir formation period and there is still time to buy talismans? No matter what kind of talisman, even the Nascent Soul stage talisman you wrote about cannot be as powerful as the real magic weapon in the Dan formation stage. Did you look at the original novel and see if anyone still uses talismans at the stage of pill formation? Even if the power of your Nascent Soul stage talisman is comparable to that of a complete talisman in the Core Formation stage, if you just get a talisman and strengthen it, doesn't it mean that your consumable talisman is stronger? In the early stage of Qi training and foundation building, you can throw talismans and use talisman treasures, but it's still the same even if you form elixirs. Originally, I personally thought it was okay!