Mortal: I, Qing Wen, Make Friends and Cultivate Immortality!
About This Novel
Lin Yun was reborn in the world of mortal cultivation and immortality, and awakened the most powerful friendship system. As long as the other person is a friend, he can get rewards. "Fellow Daoist Han, I hit it off with you and made friends." [Ding, the host added Han Li as a friend and obtained the innate magical weapon: Xuantian Gourd! Ding, the host has added friends, the Twin Saints of Heaven and Star, to control the divine light of Yuanci! Lin Tianzun's famous saying is circulated in the world of immortality, "There are only two kinds of people in this world, one is someone who is willing to be my friend, Lin, and the other is a dead person!" Someone cried and said: "Lin Xianzun's long sword cannot kill his friends, but he also has a short sword!"
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Official(99)Scraped 23d ago
Come, the author reads with me, and I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I. Will not play games, not hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating excellence, striving to create brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and being tempered to become steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day by day and night by day.
You can try it without thinking
Practicing Qi to injure pill formation, rubbish talisman makers are as bad as formation masters. There is no shortage of talisman makers, but high-level talisman masters are lacking. Unfortunately, they have skills but no materials. Also, what is the difference between killing sects and building foundations and slapping them in the face, or is it better to do it in front of everyone?
I saw that there are many problems in Chapter 21. It is too pretentious and not as stable as the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. In addition, the Foundation Establishment Pills are given in bottles with five pills in each bottle. You don't bother to reward yourself. A Chen family gives you two bottles of ten Foundation Establishment Pills and you want to eat them. I don't know if a Chen Qiaoqian is worth ten pills.
So well written
One star is deducted for the plot and one star for the writing. One star will be deducted for the protagonist's likability, and one star will be deducted for the supporting character's IQ.
There are so many treasures, and you don't do anything. If you get 100 favor with Han Li, you can directly reward the protagonist with a Dao Ancestor.
With this level of plot, you can't reach the Chaos Star Sea in a thousand chapters, and even if you have the most precious treasure, you can't reach the level of forming the core. This is the author's fault.
What a nonsense. What a mindless piece of writing.
The core of mortals cultivating immortality is completely gone, all characters have facial makeup, and all members are blessed with aura of mental retardation.
The dialogue is too ridiculous. You are not writing a modern urban novel. What the characters say does not fit the personality.
Not only is the character creation unreasonable, but the specific details are also inconsistent with the original setting. Instead of being so contradictory, the author might as well write a new novel. Not only does he not have to pay the copyright for the same text, but he can also write according to his own ideas.
I can't stand it anymore, it's even more naive than the writing
Author, please don't mess up the plot of the anime. The anime was changed beyond recognition by a trash writer. The character settings have been changed to the point where I can't stand it, and I don't know if it's the self-righteous screenwriter.
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Official(99)Scraped 23d ago
Come, the author reads with me, and I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I. Will not play games, not hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating excellence, striving to create brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, and being tempered to become steel, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark and the guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding, day by day and night by day.
You can try it without thinking
Practicing Qi to injure pill formation, rubbish talisman makers are as bad as formation masters. There is no shortage of talisman makers, but high-level talisman masters are lacking. Unfortunately, they have skills but no materials. Also, what is the difference between killing sects and building foundations and slapping them in the face, or is it better to do it in front of everyone?
I saw that there are many problems in Chapter 21. It is too pretentious and not as stable as the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. In addition, the Foundation Establishment Pills are given in bottles with five pills in each bottle. You don't bother to reward yourself. A Chen family gives you two bottles of ten Foundation Establishment Pills and you want to eat them. I don't know if a Chen Qiaoqian is worth ten pills.
So well written
One star is deducted for the plot and one star for the writing. One star will be deducted for the protagonist's likability, and one star will be deducted for the supporting character's IQ.
There are so many treasures, and you don't do anything. If you get 100 favor with Han Li, you can directly reward the protagonist with a Dao Ancestor.
With this level of plot, you can't reach the Chaos Star Sea in a thousand chapters, and even if you have the most precious treasure, you can't reach the level of forming the core. This is the author's fault.
What a nonsense. What a mindless piece of writing.
The core of mortals cultivating immortality is completely gone, all characters have facial makeup, and all members are blessed with aura of mental retardation.
The dialogue is too ridiculous. You are not writing a modern urban novel. What the characters say does not fit the personality.
Not only is the character creation unreasonable, but the specific details are also inconsistent with the original setting. Instead of being so contradictory, the author might as well write a new novel. Not only does he not have to pay the copyright for the same text, but he can also write according to his own ideas.
I can't stand it anymore, it's even more naive than the writing
Author, please don't mess up the plot of the anime. The anime was changed beyond recognition by a trash writer. The character settings have been changed to the point where I can't stand it, and I don't know if it's the self-righteous screenwriter.
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