Hui Shuo Guangnian

Overall, it started out pretty good, but gradually it became a lot more toxic, so I still couldn't watch it anymore. Poisonous point 1: Without explaining the protagonist's life experience, he just passed through? ? ? How can a person with unknown family background and no background enter the government system? ? ? ? Poison Point 2: A county magistrate's family has an orchid girl. This does not mean peacekeeping, but a magistrate's daughter will marry an unknown person. The county magistrate's son will just like a low-level person at will, without explaining the core support for the protagonist. It is also very poisonous and brainless. Poisonous Point 3: From the explanation, spirit hunters should be in a very dangerous profession, and in such a dangerous profession, some of the protagonists easily agree to risk their lives to save a beautiful girl with too many melons and no profit support. Is it appropriate? And rescuing Uncle Zhao's son over and over again, is it so cheap? Just rely on Zhao Shucai to help the protagonist? What a great kindness. Are the character of the protagonist, the Virgin, and the character of the spirit hunter suitable? Poisonous point 4: The cultivation system is very unclear and vague. A person who has only started practicing for half a year, does not know much about the cultivation system, has not even formally practiced, and does not have many extraordinary means that are different from ordinary people, but just joins the world of martial arts for many years. Is this appropriate? If it is reasonable to rely on the raised ghost of the tree fairy to kill the enemy, but the protagonist did it with a sneak attack, how can a mortal do this with his stealth technique? ? ? Is it reasonable? Poison point 4: This super is poisoned and cannot stand it. An ordinary villager, an ordinary ghost, a person, and a ghost. Both parties are ordinary people. If they get together, they can still get pregnant and give birth to a normal ordinary boy. Moreover, an ordinary villager is very afraid of ghosts. When ghosts see ordinary villagers, they will only treat people as food, okay? ? ? The two are not the same species, right? ? ? If you say that ghosts become ghosts and immortals, and people become immortals, and they get together and give birth to a boy, this is quite reasonable. It is a bit too poisonous for an ordinary villager and an ordinary ghost to give birth to a normal child. It is not easy to write three stars. I hope that the author can insist on writing less toxic novels in the future. Before writing, write a brief outline, improve the background and personality of the characters, and consider the world background and social environment you set.

I read Chapter 150 attentively, and skipped the rest of it, which was all trivial. More than a hundred chapters later, Zhao Xiaohu is still 13 years old. The protagonist has a life-or-death feud with several major forces. The protagonist's enemies who have not entered the level are level 89, the protagonist's level 9 enemies are level 78, and the protagonist's level 8 enemies are level 67. Let me ask all readers: When you have a life-and-death enemy in a fantasy story, who wouldn't just go to the strongest killer and crush him directly? If you have level 4 or 5 in hand, don't use them, and then send level 9876 to kill people in order? Wait for the protagonist to come and destroy the family in the end?

As long as it's well organized, there's no clouded Riddler, there's no random spending, there's no nonsense, and if you can ignore everything else, just ignore it! It's not easy to find instinct to chase. The Song Dynasty is really bad.

Could it be that I am cold-blooded? Why do I look at this pig's foot as a virgin and a nanny?

It's a good book. I've read more than ten chapters and it's very good. The author's writing is strong enough and the story is told eloquently. It's not the kind of novice Wudi who doesn't know who I am or where I am, but only knows that I'm going to kill people. The protagonist is flesh and blood, neither a virgin nor cold-blooded. Even if you can save people, you can't beat them, and you don't have to be brave. As for those who commit suicide, their personal choices can also be respected. Recommend.

The beginning was okay, but the further it went on, the more rubbish it became. From the time I joined Xiuxian, I didn't want to read it anymore. The more I wrote, the more wasteful it became! The protagonist is in an improved state and doesn't know how to hang around? It wasn't so good when I went to Yue County, but I couldn't bear to watch it, but I ended up going to Xiang County again a few days later! It would be understandable if the protagonist was in a bottleneck period and couldn't break through, so he went out to seek breakthroughs. However, the protagonist in this book obviously has no bottleneck and can make rapid progress in double cultivation every day. I really can't think of why he would go out to join in the fun for a fairy treasure that he doesn't know if he can use it?

You have to say that the overall author can still barely justify himself, but in fact there are many problems with the details. First of all, the writing is weak and the plot is a mess. It's the kind of book that I can read on, but I can't study it deeply. There is a sense of fragmentation when reading many plots, that is, you can feel that the author is trying to write a plot in these pictures, but many times the dialogue, including some plot designs, and the characters' reactions, are sometimes a bit inexplicable. It just feels a bit like vernacular. For example, the normal ones are time, place, people, and events. But you can't tell it in a straightforward manner and just finish it in one go. However, you can see it in this book. The filling in of details is poor, and the connection between the context and context is also poor. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I can feel an obvious thing. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I don't know what plot I read? What's there? Is there any character growth? Nothing to feel. What did the character do? I don't seem to feel anything. It's like Zhang San asked Li Si that Li Si was going to eat, Li Si said yes, and then disappeared. There was no growth and change in the characters at all, or I didn't see it. Even if a protagonist ignores the initial period of traveling to another world, there will definitely be subsequent growth, psychological changes, and character transformation. But this point was ignored by the author. Logically speaking, when a person is promoted or becomes stronger, there will be some changes in psychology and behavior. Even if there is no change, there should be some side manifestations to express this aspect. You can't say that you just got promoted and what do you do? It's still the same as before. It has become stronger. How much stronger is it compared to before? Alas, there is no difference at second glance. There is no plot at all with no contrast or growth, so it feels a bit boring. It's the kind of collection of short stories that are very fragmented and spliced ​​together. The protagonist doesn't have much growth. The author's macro-control ability has some problems and needs to be improved. Just one big event interspersed with several small plots to match it. Every plot is connected to each other. It feels like the author just writes whatever comes to mind, and it feels like there is no outline. There is a missing main line connecting in series in the middle.

It's too overwhelming to fight with a bunch of people at the ninth level. Why don't you read the book Wuji. The protagonist has cheats and just slowly upgrades. That's how you level up at a higher level and fight at a lower level. You, the ninth level, are running around everywhere😰

The authors of Yuewen are really hopeless. They have repeated their routines for several years without changing them. Recently, the writing level of a large number of authors has dropped significantly.

It's too high-level, and it's uncomfortable to watch. It keeps saying that the protagonist's cultivation level has improved, but he doesn't say it out loud. It's vague and annoying. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger is clearly the golden finger of Gou Daoliu, but he still has to run around. There is obviously a hard background. I don't know if Gou will be invincible, 🤧🤧🤧🤧