Above the Mage!

At seven years old, you enter primary school. On the day you enter school, you are bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. At thirteen years old, you are at the peak of your sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the air of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet the strong people in the junior high school level. Even the weakest junior high school strong people, their strength is by no means comparable to yours. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy strips! So scary. So you make up your mind to enter junior high school. At the age of sixteen, you have reached the state of junior high school, through years of study and hard work. You already look down on your classmates who are at the same level. The usually elusive high school realm is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the test of the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the university realm. Received blessings from higher education institutions. Those who fail to pass will lose this opportunity and become adults. In the ancient times, some of them could also become the most powerful and obtain the great path. But in the current world trend, where the vitality of heaven and earth is so thin, it is almost difficult. If you go with it, you will be ordinary, if you go against it, you will become an immortal. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. At this time, your girlfriend of four years actually belongs to a huge family power. In their eyes, you without financial resources are like an ant. The family promised their girlfriend to a young master of a large family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You just remember that Lihua Daiyu's girlfriend made a three-year contract with you. You recall the shame, the powerlessness, and the pain you experienced that day in elementary school. The heart of the house is roaring and roaring. The veins on your hands are popping up. When I come back, I will dye the sky with demon blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you chose the Internet. From then on, you enter a big company and get the guidance of a big boss. Even the time spent sitting on the toilet is used to study. As he continued to grow stronger, he discovered a shocking secret. From then on, he started his own business. I have encountered despair and encountered danger. From Beijing to. From Shanghai to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the guidance of a mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. They all become your strength to move forward. Three years later, everything was calm and peaceful at the woman's home. Do you think he will come? Hearing this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter in her heart. In the past three years, she had refused many blind dates arranged by her family. Now it's almost reaching its limit. The sun is almost setting. Is it just a disappointment after all? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's home. The mother-in-law's expression changed slightly at the sound of the mount. Their family had been in business for many years, but in the end it was just a small branch of the family. She had seen Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, from afar, and she would never forget that voice in her life. But this sound is real, but this sound is different. The father-in-law suddenly thought of something, his face suddenly turned pale and he started to tremble, this was impossible. How can you do it. No matter how hard I try for half my life, I can't overcome it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are well. A man's voice sounded. Sure enough, a golden dragon Rolls-Royce came down from the doorstep. Suddenly there was silence in the house, and the mother-in-law asked cautiously. Where is the mansion? Answer day. In the magical city of Taiyi Xianfu (urban area), the mother-in-law lowered her head in shame and arranged for the wedding, and the young couple needless to say. Another year passed, and on this day a man named Ma wearing glasses rode a penguin to visit. After some pleasantries, you are invited to enter the new map Zhengdao Alliance (Internet Conference). As soon as you enter, you find that there are about dozens of people present, and their strength is unfathomable. Among them, you can hear that I have no interest in money and I have not received a salary for a month. Set a small goal and earn one hundred million first. I am face blind and don't know whether it is beautiful or not. Things like that. You can't help but be stunned for a while. Recalling what I saw and heard along the way, it feels like a lifetime ago.

When I saw another so-called "What are the people from the other world, build a magic model and use any coordinate system to beat the people from the other world" (that's not what he wrote, but the plot is similar, the above is my expression) I knew it was time to leave, tell a joke, magic is the foundation of the mage, and the magic model is the foundation of the magic. The entire mage civilization is built on solid geometry, and then the coordinate system cannot be developed after the development of solid geometry for tens of millions of years. The protagonist is highlighted through the intelligence world. Sorry, I can't accept it.

Which good person would kill the bad guy to save himself, and then tell others that I saved your life. No wonder capitalists consider themselves philanthropists because they provide jobs for ordinary people and bring income to survive. Are these not reborn parents? The second weird argument of the author is: if the protagonist does not count the other apprentices who survived because they saved themselves, then the protagonist does not count them as a life-saving favor, then the protagonist does not count the apprentices who were unlucky because of the protagonist's self-rescue as harming them. It made me laugh. It turns out that killing the mage to save the protagonist is not a good intention. But running away without saying a word even though you know that someone else is implicated is an evil intention. There were so many advanced numbers at the beginning, but the end result is this shitty logic? The author owes life to many people for his survival, including farmers, vegetable sellers, hospitals, and police stations. Although they are all doing their jobs, the author is indeed alive because of them. Should he repay these countless kindnesses?

You can completely skip the plot, and it won't affect the reading experience at all, because you will find that 3/5 of a chapter are the protagonist's inner one-man show, which does not advance the progress of the plot at all. Skipping to Chapter 20 made me stupid. It seems that the protagonist has no understanding of his own environment and his own problems, and the author probably does not understand either. Do you think it is too far away? Let me walk you through the possible consequences of this matter. Let those three gangsters run away - tell others about this - it is possible that a pharmacy apprentice knows about this - and then think of the protagonist mastering several spells in just a few days - think of the protagonist having a big secret, OK, the protagonist is finished. Otherwise, if you tell the protagonist about this to a teacher, OK, the protagonist will probably have his brain dug out and made into a brain in a vat to read the memory. Especially in a situation where the world view is extremely collapsed. Before writing, the author probably didn't even know how terrifying the world view he wrote was. He would arrest orphans at will and use children to experiment with human medicine. With your worldview so cruel, you can still write such a brainless protagonist who is also a talent. Doesn't the protagonist understand that if there is a one-in-a-million chance of exposing himself, he will be irreversible? Or did the author not think of this problem? How can we create such an abstract protagonist?

It's a million words. The protagonist is just a little scumbag. He keeps changing maps. Now he's running to hang out with the barbarians in the North. I don't know how long it will take for the second ring. And the fifth ring is just a dog to the entire big force. I feel like I'm frustrated after a few million words. Then I can achieve something with the eighth and ninth rings. After a hundred thousand words, it ends. I feel that farming in the novice village is good. Going to the royal capital for further study is just fine. I finally stabilized and ran away again. A newbie keeps changing advanced maps

Assume that in a world, spells exist, and many people can release spells in the same or similar way, which means that spells exist and are reproducible, then at this time, spells are scientific, not metaphysical. When magic exists, studying magic through experiments is tantamount to doing scientific research, or scientific research for short. If you summarize a general theory of magic based on experimental results, magic at this time will become a scientific discipline similar to physical chemistry. Whether it is scientific or not has nothing to do with right or wrong, and has nothing to do with authenticity. It only has to do with whether it can be falsified.

Why only Samsung? There is a reason for this. The book currently has 152,000 words, and the protagonist has just reached the second level. According to the mage system written by the author, there are nine levels. Gaining blood from a pig's trotters can quickly increase the level to the fourth level. It should be about 2 million words in writing. If this book is like the author's previous book, which has more than 3.4 Million words, it will undoubtedly be written in detail at the beginning level. After reaching the 7th or 89th level, it will probably be completed in a "whoosh💨". Most books do this now, but I hope this one doesn't. "The Witcher's Journey" is very good, at least the early and middle stages are very good. Although there are some flaws in the later stages, the flaws are not hidden, and the author can learn from it.

The free chapter has wisdom and planning, although the fighting is not very exciting! The number of words in the paid chapter data, Yi Shui's skill description is written twice (this is not called detailed, you will forget it after writing it in front and adding a dot at the end?), Learn well and do not read novels if you are not good at it (more than forty skill models are crammed into your brain, infinite? The most outrageous ones are skills, such as lighting, making fire, fetching water, etc. What's the use of writing a lot?), I died once in the beginning and don't have a long memory. We all know that it is similar to medieval Europe. After paying, the academy is pretentious (the academy only has knowledge (without contract) + spirit gathering array, a poor group, what are the conditions of the academy?), And the hospital even knows that the protagonist has something in his hand and the protagonist lets it go after a few words? (Every link, the dean is his own person, how can you find a corner to let someone control the protagonist and just get it? A short play?), This plot is ridiculous (I didn't even look at what He Xi gave you, suddenly the heart of the mother burst into flames, and then the nonsense plot couldn't die and was released, this airship ultrasound (Hurry...), I chose a book that requires two hundred chapters to practice (cannot be called water, one by one, looking for trouble everywhere, the Virgin, everywhere, being jailed, being rescued, and dying, just to plant a tree and water two hundred chapters), the place is so big as you wrote, but you are running around the world, and you are still a small character There is such a big difference between free and paid styles. Why hire someone to write for you? And then collect money?

The protagonist is an exploited apprentice➕a little white mouse. He died while testing the medicine. He understood that he was framed, so he was the one who tested the medicine. He came to the first illogical place here. After he took the position, he killed the person who framed him at night. The black-hearted slave owner did not punish him, but just tortured him. Why did he say that he passed the magic test for survival (similar to a lie detector) and then asked him to take over the dead man's work to run errands and trades. And was he the only one among the 8 or 6 apprentices who knew how to make potions? He secretly made medicines and saved money to buy spells and build up his strength. There is no mention here of where his raw materials came from. They were from slave masters and mage. Doesn't a slave owner know how many materials he can refine and how many medicines he has? He also lets you refining and selling them for free. To learn spells and use a plug-in as the origin to set up a coordinate system, he can learn spells as long as there is a spell formula (I won't go into what the author set it like this). His plug-in is to kill a unique leyline (magic) creature. 7 Of them only include humans. There will be a charge that can add one point to the spell to strengthen the spell mutation. He used the strengthening spell to earn money to learn spells and missed a level 1 prop. At the same time, the black-hearted slave master asked him to test the medicine for the second time, so he used this prop to ➕ The flour deflagration explosion in the confined space killed the black-hearted slave master. The mage had a defensive magic robe, but he only had a common spell. He did not die. Because it was located in the suburbs, he took over the medicine garden to make money and spent money to buy a spell book and open the slave owner's inheritance (it contains several apprentice-level spells and slave owner story letters, plus an academy introduction spell that will be used later). However, because of the money he made, he took drugs. The upgrade revealed flaws and the city's environment changed (it was understood that a beast tide was coming). The drug store found out that the owner of the medicine garden was gone and wanted to buy it forcibly. But because he was a talent, he signed a contract with him and made him work illegally as 007. The 30-year contract has a huge penalty. And he originally wanted to run away (letter of introduction) plus this factor, he decided to cheat a lot of money to run away, so he signed the contract and donated 300 gold to the run away contract. He left 5 gold and a note to remind the person who saved his life to run away. You heard me right, 78 apprentices all saved him at the time. He only reminded him that he was familiar with the one. A magic world took 300 gold (equivalent to 3 million) to sign a contract with him. The contract was not magically binding but an ordinary contract, so he donated money and ran away. According to the world background he wrote, The remaining apprentices are most likely to be implicated and dead. The pig's trotters are purely Tang San's behavior. He flipped the table when he was full and tricked a bunch of people to death. He just ran away like this. This is what I saw. I don't think I need to read more.

Unsophisticated: You can read the chapters where his mentor died, as well as the chapters where he delivered letters and helped others save Wutong and Jinmai. It was simply mindless, especially the chapter where he helped others save Wutong. It was simply stupid. A rare treasured magic pet like Flora actually took it out to help others see what problems there were with Wutong. Don't you know that you walked over to look and let the magic pet hide it in your sleeve? If I have any questions, can I just tell you no? Do you have to let the demon pet come out? I am the mother of war and you can't explain it even if I don't kill you? Like to test human nature?