Day and Night Wandering God

There was once a book about a wandering god day and night. Unfortunately, he is gone. Good night.

Brothers, I am just an old author who has not written a book for more than three years. I am not a master of southern and northern accents. I write the book seriously every day. Please give me your support.

It's a faster novel than Fast Food. As long as you don't think about Twilight Divide and think you're smart, Fast Food can be read. However, I've only found that I have no brain after reading a hundred of them. If I don't look back carefully, I'm not sure if it will get worse in the future.

I just finished reading the latest chapter. I couldn't sleep at night and quickly wrote a book review. The Chinese-style folklore suspense sequence, using incense instead of levels is very creative. When I saw that one stick of incense equals a skill, I was so impressed. I originally thought there would be a battle of wits with my sister, but it didn't happen in the end. It's understandable, but I always felt that something was missing. Maybe it was just not thrilling enough. The two small suspense stories in the early stage are very interesting. The author lays out the protagonist's career arrangement step by step, and finally reverses the protagonist's career. The story system of the first volume is complete and continuous, but Grandpa's thoughts have not yet been explained clearly, but it is a long novel after all, so we will see. But the shortcoming is that the author's writing skills are slightly insufficient. After the two early stories, neither the blood well nor the mini-boss at the end of the first volume seem scary enough or deterrent enough. He just said harsh words, but the blood well that induced people to commit suicide was not as crazy as imagined. As for the enemies I encountered, starting from Money Dart, I felt that they were not very established. Even the image of fortune-telling seemed to be just a stereotype and not "wonderful" enough. The stereotype needs a little but not a lot. Once there are too many, everyone will think that books can only be used as food and not as fairy goods. If a book wants to be famous, it must have characteristics, it must be "odd". The first professional storyteller was a bit shallow, which greatly reduced the sense of curiosity. It was also understandable that it was like splitting one skill into nine small skills, because the eighty-one skills in the later version of Jiuzhuxiang were too complicated. In short, as a reader who can't write and can only read bb, I still like this book very much. I am also waiting for the further development of the world view. I can't sleep at night, so I will update it quickly!

Overall good The background is just too dark. He is the only surviving god and ancestral tree, the strongest ghost blood well, the master of seven incense sticks, the unfathomable sister, the younger brother who is a senior member of the ancient society, and the mysterious and unpredictable figure in the painting who is half human and half ghost. With this kind of background, everything is smooth sailing, with at most a few twists and turns, and a touch of pretentiousness interspersed in between. In terms of spiritual practice, if the quality of Jiudatangkou's spiritual practice is really good, then this book can be really long and beautiful. But in the nine major systems, if one person has learned the skills of others' nine-axis incense, the protagonist should be invincible by the time he reaches 5-pillar incense. The next 4-pillar incense seems to be difficult to write, so he must either advance invincibly, change the map and go to heaven, or severely suppress the combat power and take advantage of the settings. The background is too deep, which makes it very relaxing and enjoyable in just over 100 chapters, without some tension and excitement. The practice at the entrance of Jiudatang makes people feel a little bit stained

There are a lot of bugs. It's outrageous that only the protagonist can fight against the villain. People from the Jing Kingdom seem to be more talented than the people from the Buddha Kingdom, but there are no geniuses to discover the empty mirror and spread it. The secrets of the classic villain Buddha Kingdom are shared by everyone, but the Jing Kingdom hides its secrets and is backward.

How should I put it? The story is very novel, but the writing method is old-fashioned. The protagonist always doesn't care about his own affairs. He doesn't care at all about diary and learning skills. If he wants to love being a Riddler, he won't say it half-way.

One chapter, I can't stand it anymore. Hair space burger

It's so nagging that the literary disease is embarrassing.

I'm jabbering, I don't know what I want to write, there are dozens of chapters with ink, no plot progress, it's like a running novel.