Hogwarts Natural Magic

I have never really liked Dumbledore. Maybe he is competent as the Demon King, for the greater good! But he is so incompetent as a school principal

This book is quite good. Can there be more chapters? It's not enough.

I can tolerate the rest, but Voldemort, Tom Riddle is a pure bad breed. Even if the first Horcrux is still young and sensible, he still kills people to make a notebook and then kills his father to blame his uncle. I don't think he will really be good to the protagonist, even if he thinks that the protagonist is his son created by the alchemy of life. Voldemort is a pure bad breed and has no love. It is estimated that the product of the love potion does not understand love at all. Dark Dumbledore can tolerate it, but Tom can't tolerate it. It distorts the character too much, is too deviant from the original work, and doesn't look like fan fiction at all.

There is a storyline, but the writing is too dry. There are many places in the first twenty chapters that are difficult to understand, and you have to read them several times before you understand the meaning.

Recently, according to feedback from some book friends, the problems in chapters 8-9 have been clarified, and the author also revised it many times at that time. It has been revised now, and I hope readers will accept this intensity (contradiction). The author has always been committed to serving readers. If there is a plot that is not appreciated by most people but is hated by some readers, then it needs to be revised. If you have any new questions, you can leave a message and the author will modify it as appropriate according to the outline.

Author, do you have a legendary physique? Hermaphroditic Otherwise, how would you run a family without a heroine? Are they all fertility tools? How else would you run a family? Or do you want to work for others and join another family? No, you're writing about the Creation Family Creation means oneself, creating oneself, creating but without a heroine It's simply an endless loop, unless you have the legendary physique! Hermaphroditic Otherwise, how can you run a family if you are the only one? Have you seen it? How did he get into the family?

This is the best one among all the fics I have read. There are many details. The author is very thoughtful, logical and immersive. Especially the dialogues between the characters are all in English accent. This is a very detailed story. I found it very immersive. It suits my taste.

There is no record of the Magic Academy in Briod's memory, but the world is different, so he quickly accepted this setting.

A protagonist who pursues magic and longs for freedom is thrown into a snake courtyard that is similar to a basement by the author. It is really as strange as adding a world of cultivating immortals to a fantasy world.

I hope I haven't removed the original CP, otherwise it will feel weird.