The Almighty Master of Immortality
About This Novel
Huang Yan, an orphan, was accidentally reborn into another world while playing online games. He closed himself up to practice and improved his skills. He went down the mountain to experience fierce battles with old enemies and snakes in caves to obtain treasures. He came back domineeringly to rule the Thousand Feathers Clan, exorcised corpse poisons and fought zombie evil spirits to save the people of the world, and walked on the path to immortality to rule the roost.
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Official(300)Scraped 26d ago
Don't like the first person, it detracts from the story!
Rubbish. The first one I saw was in the first person and I decided to abandon the book. No explanation.
The first person of evil
Alas, first person, I'm drunk too
When I saw the first person in the first chapter, I remembered the composition I wrote when I was in the third grade of elementary school. I got up at 6 o'clock today, my mother made a meal, I washed my face, then I finished the meal, then I walked on the road, and then I finally arrived at school, and finally when I came back, I picked up 10 cents on the roadside, and I bought a spicy stick, which was delicious. I will come here to pick up money next time
The reason why I can't stand it
The first-person account of all evil, I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters! I'm really not used to it!
If it is written in the first person, it will affect the readers' evaluation of the work if they are not used to it. It is not bad at first, but if it is written in the first person, they will not like it. . . .
I'm your sister. I've never seen someone write a novel like this. She seems to be talking to herself.
Rubbish
This protagonist is fucking mentally retarded.
First person, can't stand it, can't find the feeling of immersion
Rating
Community(0)
Official(300)Scraped 26d ago
Don't like the first person, it detracts from the story!
Rubbish. The first one I saw was in the first person and I decided to abandon the book. No explanation.
The first person of evil
Alas, first person, I'm drunk too
When I saw the first person in the first chapter, I remembered the composition I wrote when I was in the third grade of elementary school. I got up at 6 o'clock today, my mother made a meal, I washed my face, then I finished the meal, then I walked on the road, and then I finally arrived at school, and finally when I came back, I picked up 10 cents on the roadside, and I bought a spicy stick, which was delicious. I will come here to pick up money next time
The reason why I can't stand it
The first-person account of all evil, I couldn't stand it after reading a few chapters! I'm really not used to it!
If it is written in the first person, it will affect the readers' evaluation of the work if they are not used to it. It is not bad at first, but if it is written in the first person, they will not like it. . . .
I'm your sister. I've never seen someone write a novel like this. She seems to be talking to herself.
Rubbish
This protagonist is fucking mentally retarded.
First person, can't stand it, can't find the feeling of immersion
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