Choose a Day to Soar

It has been sealed back and forth, and this alone has written at least more than 200 chapters. Doesn't it look boring? There are many details in this that are illogical. Moreover, there are many things that make people complain about this book. After reading two chapters, there are flaws. The gap is too big. For example, martial arts here feels very one-sided, and practicing qi in the Nuo method must be about resisting power and nature? Otherwise, it would violate the origin of martial arts? So stiff and embarrassing. And suddenly, someone gave up practicing Qi and Nuo, and realized a martial art, integrating Nuo and Qi training. In fact, it is to train one's Qi and blood, isn't it just to train one's body? How can it be more powerful than the Nuo method and the magical power of the Qi practitioner, and also combine the two? Then he was sealed and thrown into a martial arts world. I almost want to vomit this. There is also a martial arts innate weighing a million. An awkward group

When I first read it, I thought it was a new system of Nuo method developed by later generations, but in the end, it got further and further away from chapter to chapter, involving the Qin and Han Dynasties, and the Shang and Zhou dynasties. So many great things have happened in such a powerful system. Why don't experts like Zhuzi and Qing know anything about it? Chapter 104

What are you writing about? In Chapter 13, the giant gods were being beaten in the village. They had just beaten the world upside down. What tree roots and rocks were exploding? A 10-year-old girl was eating chicken legs and watching a movie? Don't hide or be afraid, and then ask the little girl to help look after a 3-foot venomous snake? Hehe. . Why don't you call a village dog to help look after you? Do all books nowadays have this kind of thinking? Even primary school students nowadays can't accept this garbage plot!

This can be regarded as the worst book for Zhai Zhu. The previous books were mediocre in the early stage, exciting in the middle stage, and rushed in the late stage. This book is wonderful in the early stage, hasty in the middle stage, and is poor in the late stage. There are so many maps later that the characters are not well developed. Apart from the protagonist, the thing that impressed me the most in the book was the first boss Zhou Qiyun. What are the characters in the back? The master of Niwan Palace who said he wanted to cause trouble in the Immortal Realm showed no performance after ascending to the throne. The fool Ah Fu just regained his composure and said that he would help Xu Jing establish the Immortal Dynasty and has never found this person. The portrayal of the protagonist Xiao Ruan is also very problematic. I feel that the first life of Master Ying was not mine, so why should the memories of all subsequent generations be regarded as mine? Shouldn't it be that you either accept them all or only accept this life? Moreover, he clearly has an image of resisting power, but in the end he let go of the master of Niwan Palace, the most evil person in Yuan Shou. If the master of Niwan Palace really caused trouble in the fairy world, then there would be no problem in letting him go. But in fact, the master of Niwan Palace did nothing after his ascension, so his stance of resisting power is called into question. Moreover, Xiaoruan is not good at practicing. He relies on copying and pasting to upgrade. Others have practiced martial arts for tens of thousands of years. Xiaoruan improved by leaps and bounds in a few days. Later, he learned whatever he heard. There was not even a process. He was better than other people's system writing. Anyone who writes about the hard work of learning will not be so empty. What makes me most unhappy is that even the multi-party arena game that Zhai Zhu was good at in the past has not been written much in this book. Since the fairy world, it has basically been a battle between two forces, with the protagonist as a third party taking advantage of both sides and finally taking the advantage. The plot advancement is too streamlined. I've really been reading this book for so long in vain.

Let me talk about the advantages first. The language and writing are humorous and ironic, making people smile. But that's all. The plot was written as I thought, trying to show the protagonist's agility and intelligence from the words of others. However, the protagonist's actual actions showed him to be mentally retarded. His actions were completely unplanned, and there was no plan before taking action. He could only hit things here and there casually. Every time he survived, he relied on others to save him.

All of them are praised by sailors! If you dare to say something bad at the starting point, it will be a proper little dark room for 50 years...

It doesn't feel like before. It's boring. It doesn't feel like it was written by a nerd.

This is the first time I've seen it written like this. Why don't you stick a sword in your mouth and nose?

It's very exciting. The plot constructed by the author is very rich, the character description is just right, and the branch lines and main tasks change naturally. In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go! Book shortage, do you have any good book recommendations?

From Ye Xu and Ye Shaobao to Jiangnan Jiangzichuan, to the Emperor Zhongshan Zhongyue, to the cowherd boy Qin Mu This is the fifth book. Of course, I read every one for free , but Pig's writing is really good. There is also a book I read before that seems to be written by Manzi.