Journey to the West: I, Sun Wukong, Don't Want to Cause Trouble in the Heavenly Palace

But I feel uncomfortable knowing the plot and being played like a clown. I don't want you to reach the sky in one step, but you need to have an anchor that won't drift with the crowd. It's a pity that I didn't see it, but it still progresses the plot in a staggered way. If you want to travel to the West, you must go to the West. Whether you want to or not, do you want to travel to the West? ? Just like those ancient texts. No matter how powerful the pig's feet are, how unreasonable the golden finger is, how many things it has done, and how many people it has influenced, 99.9999% Of prehistoric novels follow the original plot line. It's been more than ten years, and it's time to change. Using the original work as the background, wouldn't it be nice to deduce your own prehistoric story, the story of the earthly and immortal world, based on the pig's trotter's ability and influence? ? I really like books set in the world of Prehistoric and Journey to the West. My impression is that 60% of the books I have read do not take into account the changes made by Pig's Feet at all and force the original context. All that's left is to carefully, skillfully and playfully stir up a little bit of the original veins. Only a handful of them dare to use the original work as a pure background and write their own stories influenced by the Pig's Foot Butterfly Effect.

The imagination is great and perfect, but I personally feel that the description of the scene is not enough. If I could pay more attention to the environment and scene. And the more delicate sighs in the characters' hearts must be more immersive, and it can make people indulge in the world of fairy tales! !

In the theme of Journey to the West, this book is considered very good, not only the plot, but also the author's understanding of Journey to the West, but the number of words is too few! The author will update soon!

The ancient works of the past were often written over thousands of years, but as soon as I traveled to the West, they were written by year, and there were too many starts and ends. Compared with this work, it is far from enough. This book deserves strong recommendation.

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Let me talk about the disadvantages. 1. Where did Nezha go? The Jade Emperor did not give an answer. 2. Since Tathagata and the Jade Emperor put in so much effort, they didn't explain anything in the end, which is too hasty. 3. The role of Zhu Bajie, whether he is a Buddhist or a Taoist. The author should have laid a foreshadowing in Zhen Yuanzi. I don't understand that this hole has not been filled. 4. Who was the original owner of Sun Wukong's armor? How did he die? What happened to Zihe? 5. Where have the saints gone? Since they are puppets, they must be allowed to appear. 6. Taishang Laojun, who has been hiding his strength throughout the text, is he Jun Hong's chess piece or clone? 7. The matter between the Queen Mother of the West and the Demon Ape has not yet been explained clearly. 8. The key point of this article is that since the power of the merits of the Westward Journey is in the hands of Tathagata, it will definitely increase. Tathagata has only made a few moves, but his strength is unknown. Guanyin Bodhisattva has more ink than him. 9. The final point is that Jin Chanzi's reincarnation has ruined so many writings, so he won't talk about it. At least it has to be an important part, being a chess piece to stop the monkey. In the end, Tang Sanzang awakens his consciousness and sacrifices his body to help the monkey's body become a saint. 10. Who is Master Monkey? He should have the strength of Tathagata Jade Emperor, why didn't he come out in the end? 11. I didn't expect that the Ruyi Golden Cudgel would break into pieces in the end. As a treasure of acquired merit, it should first go to that merit pool in the west to absorb the merit evolution, and then fuse the Suixin Iron Soldier with the Optimistic White Jade Pillar and the Purple Gold Beam of Jiahai, and then be broken into pieces and then stand up. 12. The Three Pure Ones and Two Saints should at least come out for a moment. Alas, one breath can transform the Three Pure Ones into nothing. I can't think of the other ones at the moment. The fairy starts, but there are so many holes left unfilled at the end. The monkey is just the peak of Daluo Jinxian. I understand crushing the quasi-sage. I agree with the tough saint. It's too outrageous to directly crush Jun Hong. At the very least, he has to suppress it first and then rise to death or something. I was so angry that I re-wrote it after I made the outline. I started writing from the moment I saw the Zhiqishan Mountain. I was so angry that my stomach ached in the middle of the night. [Emot=default,56/]

A good book. It should be considered the best among the Journey to the West themes that I have read.

Why do I feel that making trouble in the Heavenly Palace is a good thing for Sun Wukong? To put it bluntly, if there were not those golden elixirs and flat peaches, Sun Wukong might not have the same strength as when he journeyed to the west. The monsters on the journey to the west who have the backing and strength have not been practicing for much longer than Sun Wukong. If no one opens a small stove, how can he chase him? In fact, Sun Wukong doesn't have any special skills. He knows what others can, not even treasures. I can only talk about it. The strength of cultivating immortals is still short. How can you play without taking some golden elixirs and flat peaches? So these people are very clear in their calculations for Sun Wukong. First, let's recruit a disciple and give him a standard skill for a big power. Then borrow a similar weapon from the Dragon King, but the mana is still low. After all, if the training time is short, then give him some golden elixirs to help him digest it. By the way, with a little strengthening, he can add piercing eyes to the indestructible body of Vajra. After all, his strength has improved too much in one go, which makes him a little arrogant. Tathagata will imprison him for another 500 years to stabilize his strength and calm down his mentality. Then he will get a good fighter, disciple, and subordinate. All are good. 6.

The ending is a bit sloppy, and some holes are not filled in, but it is considered a top-notch short story, but it feels a bit unfinished.

The beginning of the book is very well written, with the momentum of a classic, and the idea is very unique. I feel that I should have consulted a lot of literature. The middle is a bit of a modern online novel, similar to the one of Fighting to Break the Sphere, which is a bit different from the previous one. The end is unfinished and has the feeling of Douluo Dalu. It seems that it is really difficult to write, which is a pity.