Human Beings Are in a State of Deception, and Immortality Begins with the Secret Book of Origami
by Mountains And Rivers Ghosts And Gods
About This Novel
Paper swords, paper horses, paper men, paper dragons, paper cities, white paper heaven... Hell is empty, evil spirits are in the world. Let's see how in this world where demons and monsters appear frequently and gods and ghosts appear, Mu Lin started from making paper figures and built a heavenly palace and a prosperous age!
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Official(182)Scraped 23d ago
The background frame is not bad, and the descriptions of people and events are also okay.
The next chapters should be as realistic as possible and not too brainless.
The so-called emmmm emotional drama is just a slap in the face. It is an emotional drama that has no emotion in the first place. It will be embarrassing for people watching it. It is better to delete it.
There are some blemishes on the front, but overall it's in good shape. But the sudden emotional scene was so messed up that I was a bit disgusted. . . . .
At one point, I almost want to give you a star directly.
The protagonist has no power or influence in his family, so he still has to be picky about choosing his exercises! And since my family has inherited martial arts, I am so worried about being labeled a villain! Still not afraid of death (Don't say that the protagonist has a golden finger, you can choose advanced skills! I only heard Chapter 5 at the time, and there is no mention in these chapters that the protagonist has a golden finger)
Can you make the protagonist smarter? After all, this is a troubled world where weird things are rampant.
The protagonist is like a brainless person. He swallows the essence and blood earlier and later later. In the end, he gets nothing and wastes 70% of the efficacy of the medicine. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is still poor. I am really speechless. Stop being so mentally retarded, okay?
Not very good. Chu Lingluo's setting is too stupid. She has no brains at all. As soon as she met the protagonist, the protagonist's halo became effective.
It was okay at first, but then it started to get more and more toxic in chapters 20 and 30, the characters' IQs dropped rapidly, and one brainless plot followed another.
The writing in the front is quite good, but the emotional scenes in the back are a piece of shit. There are all kinds of stupid operations. If it weren't for what was written in the front and the lowest settings, I would have given negative points.
If the character of the protagonist in a novel is not well developed, what kind of novel would you write?
If you can write, you can write, but if you can't, you can cut it off. Every day is like squeezing out toothpaste for the plot. Do you have to let us wait until the end to watch?
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Official(182)Scraped 23d ago
The background frame is not bad, and the descriptions of people and events are also okay.
The next chapters should be as realistic as possible and not too brainless.
The so-called emmmm emotional drama is just a slap in the face. It is an emotional drama that has no emotion in the first place. It will be embarrassing for people watching it. It is better to delete it.
There are some blemishes on the front, but overall it's in good shape. But the sudden emotional scene was so messed up that I was a bit disgusted. . . . .
At one point, I almost want to give you a star directly.
The protagonist has no power or influence in his family, so he still has to be picky about choosing his exercises! And since my family has inherited martial arts, I am so worried about being labeled a villain! Still not afraid of death (Don't say that the protagonist has a golden finger, you can choose advanced skills! I only heard Chapter 5 at the time, and there is no mention in these chapters that the protagonist has a golden finger)
Can you make the protagonist smarter? After all, this is a troubled world where weird things are rampant.
The protagonist is like a brainless person. He swallows the essence and blood earlier and later later. In the end, he gets nothing and wastes 70% of the efficacy of the medicine. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is still poor. I am really speechless. Stop being so mentally retarded, okay?
Not very good. Chu Lingluo's setting is too stupid. She has no brains at all. As soon as she met the protagonist, the protagonist's halo became effective.
It was okay at first, but then it started to get more and more toxic in chapters 20 and 30, the characters' IQs dropped rapidly, and one brainless plot followed another.
The writing in the front is quite good, but the emotional scenes in the back are a piece of shit. There are all kinds of stupid operations. If it weren't for what was written in the front and the lowest settings, I would have given negative points.
If the character of the protagonist in a novel is not well developed, what kind of novel would you write?
If you can write, you can write, but if you can't, you can cut it off. Every day is like squeezing out toothpaste for the plot. Do you have to let us wait until the end to watch?
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Very nice book
Abandon books Gold Finger: Proficiency Board Girlfriend: many As the protagonist travels through the mysterious world, he can see his skill proficiency, and one certificate will last forever. Chapter 187 abandons the book. One is procrastination in writing, explanations, and too much mental activity. In addition, the protagonist becomes more and more proud as he goes forward, mocking the halo to dominate all passers-by, and the protagonist's halo to dominate all female characters. This book made me dream back to more than ten years ago.
I like the setting and upgrading part. The protagonist's panel abilities, and the underworld will be built later. Personally, I don't like the part about accepting girls. There are many descriptions of aristocratic families wanting to give away girls as soon as they see the protagonist Niu.
The training flow of Origami Yinhamen is well written. Recommendation index three stars
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