The Predecessor is Unparalleled

Lin Yuan～Protagonist Overlord ~ One of the Thirteen Demons Julie~Reporter Qin Yi ~ President of the Qin Chamber of Commerce in Buque City, the richest woman in Buque City Bai Linglong～Assistant Qin Yi Luo Tianhe~Buque City Lord, Teacher Nanru Luo Ankang ~ the original giant spirit guardian Yang Zhen~The number one war god in Xianting Hengtao ~ Hengtao, the general affairs officer of Buque City Qin Dao Bian Qin ~ the former richest man in Buque City, president of the Qin Chamber of Commerce, Qin Yi's father Nanru ~ Lord of Kunguang Immortal Domain, Zhang Liechen ~ the owner of the first-class restaurant Mysterious Man~Master Lin Yuan There are still some shortcomings that need to be supplemented.

It's wonderful. Fatty can always write the brain-burning plots I want. I like this kind of detective-style plot. Fatty is suitable for writing this kind of story. Please write more.

After reading the content of this novel, I don't think so. In the world of cultivating immortals, it doesn't matter if there are cigarettes, cars, motorcycles, etc. Are all out. It's like an urban novel. You might as well write an urban novel like this, a shitty immortality novel. Isn't it okay to write about urban immortality? You want to write about the world of cultivating immortals, and you also have cars, motorcycles, and cigarettes. How did you come up with it? And that Kun, said he met him in such and such a place, how difficult it was to get to that place, what was the result? A spiritual beast was caught in such a difficult place and used as a carriage for mortals. I felt that the cost of such a ride was not enough for Kun. There are also character descriptions, which are proper urban novels. I don't understand. Isn't it good for you to write urban novels? I want to write a novel about cultivating immortals, so forget about cultivating immortals. Can I do urban cultivating as immortals? Mixed in between the two, they look like four different people.

May I ask the author, who is the protagonist? If you keep writing like this, I won't read it. Please give the author a clear answer! To be honest, the author's Daojun is the best novel I have ever read, and this one, I also came here for the author of Daojun. However, the protagonist in this book is like a portable grandfather, and Luo Kangan is like the real protagonist. So I would like to ask the author to make it clear that the protagonist is really Luo Kangan in the end, and the protagonist Lin Yuan we think of is indeed a portable grandfather. Then after reading this novel, I will only regret reading it.

I like the style of writing, but leave it aside if you don't like the plot. I've read novels for 10 years and haven't read any. Now I'm chasing novels for the writing style. I support it!

I don't know if it's because I don't know how good the writing is, but a lot of books that have read for less than 100 hours are given full stars, and the reasons are inexplicable.

I can't even see the top ten in the monthly vote list last month. I don't know why it came up on the first day of this month and the score is still so low

Is this a bad score? If you can't write this kind of suspense, don't write it. It's full of loopholes. What kind of thing is it really written? The current novel ranking is too fake!

I'm speechless. I don't understand what I'm talking about after reading five chapters. It's completely unattractive and I can't keep reading.

I beg the author to write less about Luo Kangan. It's okay to write more supporting characters, and it's okay to have the protagonist be unknown and look like a coward. After all, Lao Yue's books are never in the style of slap-in-the-face pretentiousness. I also like protagonists who are smart and thoughtful. But Luo Kang'an is so disgusting. When I open the update every day, I see Luo Kang'an pretending to be bad again, Luo Kang'an cheating again, Luo Kang starts to beg for mercy like a coward after installing and cheating, and then the protagonist actually spares him, helps him practice, and upgrades him. It's simply poisonous, you know. People who watch it are in an extremely bad mood. Good people are not rewarded, and bad guys pretend to be bad and cheat and can still upgrade. It feels like the whole world is dark.