Mortal: the Story of Wang Chan's Cultivation to Immortality

There is too much nonsense in the few pictures of Wada Bu Lian Dou Fu. Don't read rz novels like Perfect World. Before the battle, during the battle and after the battle, you like to talk about a lot of things. This kind of pretentiousness and slap in the face will cause embarrassment. You should be more neat.

Where's the bottle? This treatment is not fun. If you don't take the bottle, why are you kneeling down and licking Han Li?

①The whole article has a little bit of a running account meaning. The first part was okay, but the second part was basically a jump-start. ②I still hope to write more scenes of Han Li ③The protagonist only has two wives, and the others all have concubines. Or don't accept it , do I particularly like this?

When I saw Chapter 22, I couldn't stand it any longer. The villains and supporting characters were all so smart. I don't know why the score was so high. It's okay to read as a mindless novel, but it's probably average based on ordinary people's novels. I'll give it 3 points.

Where is the author's protagonist Er Bo? It's time for him to appear. The protagonist is already a Nascent Soul.

It's okay in a mortal fanfic, but the plot of acquiring a girl is completely redundant. When I saw those two chapters, I really wanted to give up the book, but I endured it for a while and finally read the latest chapter.

Where is the protagonist Er Bo? The protagonist has already given birth to a baby. How long has it taken him to break through a small realm?

I was seventeen before I went to Hehuan Sect, and I was eighteen three years later? What the hell.

Except for a lot of nonsense like fighting skills, the rest of the writing is okay. The killings are clean and neat, neither licking nor brainless.

A book of food for mortals 🌿, book lovers who are short of books can come and read it