
As a Mortal, I, Dong Xuan'er, Am Invincible in the Human World
About This Novel
I, Dong Xuaner, am invincible in the human world. I am a bit playful, but I am a good person. You have to believe me. I heard that the world of mortals cultivating immortals is very dangerous. You have to practice the wolfberry formula to achieve the Tao of Immortality. The Red Buddha is my mother, Nascent Soul, Yunlu, and the old devil is my father. Who should I be afraid of as a second-generation cultivator? It should be a dog. I should keep the dog-headed mother-in-law. Master, the funny woman in front of everyone is a dark demon secretly. Lord Dao, let's see how I, Dong Xuan'er, became the founder of the Demonic Way (if you are a fan of Yun Fan, please don't criticize me for writing books. Recently, I have been reading Mortal Fans and opened a copy of Chen Qiaoqian myself, so I felt inspired and decided to open a bottle of my own to see how it goes. Anyway, I haven't read the Immortal World chapter to save the dog's head)
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Official(11)Scraped 20d ago
What the hell, all the female channels are taking over the male channels? I really don't understand, several female videos are replaced by male videos!
Since when did male channels have so many books about female channels?
Hurry up and update!
Brothers, I open it for free
The free update on QQ is one day later than normal ヽ(*´з`*)ノ
Needs to be improved!
The subject matter is okay, but the writing level needs to be improved. Some content sentences are missing words or typos, including this, that, and that. Some plots are too bland and there is no climax in the whole article. Especially, there is no experience in fighting skills. It cannot arouse interest. It cannot continue like this!
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The idea is good, but it's a bit awkward for readers. Read it yourself. The author has a good subject matter.
Your writing is not fluent at all. You write exactly what comes to mind, and the form and meaning are scattered.
Many people ask, single, married
This book is a little short, so it's hard to say how to get married. What if the author doesn't read it and gets crazy? I'll go (。>ㅿ<。) It's possible to say so
Will the subsequent writing style remain the same?
My thinking is so off-topic and the scene transitions are a bit complicated. It gave me a headache.
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The author found that he could not save the manuscript and wanted to send it out as soon as he wrote it, but Finally, I endured my anger~ Let's have an interaction like this! From now on, before 11:55 every night, the author of the latest chapter will comment. 👍When you reach 20, you will add one more chapter, and so on, there is no limit. I'll start next Monday. I'll save 20 chapters over the weekend. Now there are only a few to a dozen people reading. 20 Chapters will be enough for a month. There has been a small twist in the plot recently. Dong Xuan'er's Demon Master is officially launched. Don't expect too much from the old routine (๑˙ー˙๑) What will happen when Han Li meets the Demonic Master? Jiejiejie~~
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Community(0)
Official(11)Scraped 20d ago
What the hell, all the female channels are taking over the male channels? I really don't understand, several female videos are replaced by male videos!
Since when did male channels have so many books about female channels?
Hurry up and update!
Brothers, I open it for free
The free update on QQ is one day later than normal ヽ(*´з`*)ノ
Needs to be improved!
The subject matter is okay, but the writing level needs to be improved. Some content sentences are missing words or typos, including this, that, and that. Some plots are too bland and there is no climax in the whole article. Especially, there is no experience in fighting skills. It cannot arouse interest. It cannot continue like this!
How to say
The idea is good, but it's a bit awkward for readers. Read it yourself. The author has a good subject matter.
Your writing is not fluent at all. You write exactly what comes to mind, and the form and meaning are scattered.
Many people ask, single, married
This book is a little short, so it's hard to say how to get married. What if the author doesn't read it and gets crazy? I'll go (。>ㅿ<。) It's possible to say so
Will the subsequent writing style remain the same?
My thinking is so off-topic and the scene transitions are a bit complicated. It gave me a headache.
Sign in!
This is the fastest and most profitable version I've seen.
Interact with loyal readers who follow the reading
The author found that he could not save the manuscript and wanted to send it out as soon as he wrote it, but Finally, I endured my anger~ Let's have an interaction like this! From now on, before 11:55 every night, the author of the latest chapter will comment. 👍When you reach 20, you will add one more chapter, and so on, there is no limit. I'll start next Monday. I'll save 20 chapters over the weekend. Now there are only a few to a dozen people reading. 20 Chapters will be enough for a month. There has been a small twist in the plot recently. Dong Xuan'er's Demon Master is officially launched. Don't expect too much from the old routine (๑˙ー˙๑) What will happen when Han Li meets the Demonic Master? Jiejiejie~~













