
Luffy, Who Wanted to Fight Kaido, Was Sent Back to the Top to Fight
About This Novel
In Malinfando, when Akainu's magma fist attacked and Ace was about to protect Luffy with his life, he heard a voice: "Fourth gear, Elastic Man!" In the Rain Ninja Village, when the seriously injured Jiraiya was about to fight Payne to the death, he saw a bright golden light falling. The figure, with five red characters written on the white clothes behind her: "Seventh Hokage" Cape Canaveral, when Kujo Xu Lun roared decisively: "Come on, Father Pucci!", An invincible black figure blocked in front of her, and time fell into an absolute standstill. In the red well of despair, when Herzog looked at the girl in front of him greedily and excitedly, and wanted to go through the road to hell and evolve into a king, the furious king fell from the sky and vowed to send her to hell. This is a story about sending the future back to the past to break fate and create a new future. A new book has been uploaded: "Star Gravedigger", a serious science fiction, please collect it if you are interested!
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Official(38)Scraped 6d ago
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When a friend comes from afar, he must first strain his mind, strain his muscles and bones, starve his body and skin, and deplete his body. He must be whipped dozens of times and driven to other courtyards, with eight hundred sticks, and his corpse sinks into the sea.
Woohoo, the intervention settings will be erased later.
ᕦ༼༎ຶ_༎ຶ༽ᕗThis is my first time writing a book, thank you all for your corrections (If you want to modify the introduction, you won't be allowed to modify it┭┮┭┮)
I'll read it when I write about Eriyi.
The idea is pretty good and the plot is OK, but the originality ruins it.
Check the information before making the original creation. There is Baidu and a browser. You can check it. To see the Devil Fruit ability, you don't need to look at the ghosts in the R version.
The protagonist is an "orphan"
Rootless Ping wanders around the world without even knowing why, for those regrets? At most, I felt it was a pity to pull him down. I would help if I could, and I would help this group of people. I didn't even have a place to stay. How can I put it? It was very vain. The protagonist was like a tool man. He used it if it was useful and threw it away. After all, a rootless person without roots will not last long. It must be home, and it's also a goal to strive for, such as detachment and other things. I won't think too much about it. Otherwise, most of the endings will be unfinished. Come on, author. I personally feel that the general framework is still missing, and the keel that runs through the whole novel is too weak.
The plot is too long. It would be amazing if one Malinfando plot could write dozens of chapters.
Gear 4 Luffy and Akainu are equal in fistfight, and Kaido can knock out Luffy in gear 4 with one stick. Can Kaido knock out Akainu with one stick?
Laughing like crazy
It took half an hour to write ten chapters, but the protagonist only appeared twice. The rest of the time was spent stealing shit.
What's more, Eri is also the "Tsukiyomi" of the Sheqi family... There are too many involved in this. "Leave it to you, Princess Kaguya. All information entries related to our family must be replaced and deleted. They must not be leaked." Yuan Zhisheng stood up. Naturally, he could not be the exclusive administrator of the chat between the two of them. As the youngest director of the Executive Bureau, he had many things to deal with. "Tokyo hasn't been very peaceful recently." He sighed softly. ... Lu Mingfei held the phone and giggled until he raised his eyes and saw Chu Zihang's expressionless face. He was startled, and he retracted the phone into the quilt as guiltily as he did when his aunt checked his room in the middle of the night. "I can't see your screen from this angle, so you don't have to put it away." Chu Zihang said calmly. "Um... Senior brother, when did you wake up? Why is there no sound at all?" Only then did Lu Mingfei take out his phone from the bed. "Four minutes ago. I made noise when I got up and when I was using my phone, but you didn't notice it." Chu Zihang paused and his voice became softer: "Thank you."
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Official(38)Scraped 6d ago
title
When a friend comes from afar, he must first strain his mind, strain his muscles and bones, starve his body and skin, and deplete his body. He must be whipped dozens of times and driven to other courtyards, with eight hundred sticks, and his corpse sinks into the sea.
Woohoo, the intervention settings will be erased later.
ᕦ༼༎ຶ_༎ຶ༽ᕗThis is my first time writing a book, thank you all for your corrections (If you want to modify the introduction, you won't be allowed to modify it┭┮┭┮)
I'll read it when I write about Eriyi.
The idea is pretty good and the plot is OK, but the originality ruins it.
Check the information before making the original creation. There is Baidu and a browser. You can check it. To see the Devil Fruit ability, you don't need to look at the ghosts in the R version.
The protagonist is an "orphan"
Rootless Ping wanders around the world without even knowing why, for those regrets? At most, I felt it was a pity to pull him down. I would help if I could, and I would help this group of people. I didn't even have a place to stay. How can I put it? It was very vain. The protagonist was like a tool man. He used it if it was useful and threw it away. After all, a rootless person without roots will not last long. It must be home, and it's also a goal to strive for, such as detachment and other things. I won't think too much about it. Otherwise, most of the endings will be unfinished. Come on, author. I personally feel that the general framework is still missing, and the keel that runs through the whole novel is too weak.
The plot is too long. It would be amazing if one Malinfando plot could write dozens of chapters.
Gear 4 Luffy and Akainu are equal in fistfight, and Kaido can knock out Luffy in gear 4 with one stick. Can Kaido knock out Akainu with one stick?
Laughing like crazy
It took half an hour to write ten chapters, but the protagonist only appeared twice. The rest of the time was spent stealing shit.
What's more, Eri is also the "Tsukiyomi" of the Sheqi family... There are too many involved in this. "Leave it to you, Princess Kaguya. All information entries related to our family must be replaced and deleted. They must not be leaked." Yuan Zhisheng stood up. Naturally, he could not be the exclusive administrator of the chat between the two of them. As the youngest director of the Executive Bureau, he had many things to deal with. "Tokyo hasn't been very peaceful recently." He sighed softly. ... Lu Mingfei held the phone and giggled until he raised his eyes and saw Chu Zihang's expressionless face. He was startled, and he retracted the phone into the quilt as guiltily as he did when his aunt checked his room in the middle of the night. "I can't see your screen from this angle, so you don't have to put it away." Chu Zihang said calmly. "Um... Senior brother, when did you wake up? Why is there no sound at all?" Only then did Lu Mingfei take out his phone from the bed. "Four minutes ago. I made noise when I got up and when I was using my phone, but you didn't notice it." Chu Zihang paused and his voice became softer: "Thank you."
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