People Write Diaries in American Comics, and Iron Man Collapses at the Beginning

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You said to write a diary, just write a diary, but it seems that what is written here is not a diary, it is clearly a suicide note. He is not recording things, but explaining, explaining everything, not what a suicide note is.

Let's put it this way, I came to read the book to watch you write the story, not to watch the Marvel book a few times. Fans belong to the same fan. The current plot is that everyone is watching the protagonist write a diary, and respond to the future or what will happen in the present according to the spoilers in the diary. However, the protagonist has completely become a background for writing the diary. The diary next door is used as the background. Your book uses the protagonist as the background. Why can't it be half diary and half protagonist? Am I here to watch a fan, or am I here to watch you copy Marvel's plot?

It feels like the author treats people like idiots. When the future Avengers go to get the gems, why not just hold the gems there and go back to the past timeline? Why do you have to cooperate with those people?

His starting point is good. Firstly, it can give spoilers, and secondly, it can create things, but the update is slow. I feel that your book needs to be improved. It is better for the protagonist to hide behind the scenes and use a diary to create something. The things recorded in the diary can be Affect reality, create villains, monsters, and protagonists, and let heroes and villains and anti-heroes solve them. We watch the show and have fun. You can create Zerg, Void, Warhammer, Diablo, Dark Souls, Ring of Magic, and World of Warcraft. This way the story will be more exciting and sublimated. Of course, it will be easy to fail if you can't write well.

Not bad, I can continue watching it

The more you write, the worse it gets. First of all, the space-time administration of the 199999 universe is the evader Kang. He is escaping from Kang's war because the main universe only has 616. He has restarted oaa and made appearances several times and oba has made appearances all in 616. Is Kang able to manage these? There are several major multi-dimensional alliances in Marvel. The Council of Kang, the Council of the Supreme Masters, the Spider Totem Alliance. She-Hulk can never be compared to the Hulk because the origin is different. The Hulk's origin is OBA, so the timeline of Hulk and World War is invincible. The origin of Wanda is the host of the Dark Book Sithorne to go to the earth. The Red Tank is the chess piece of the Crimson Universe. The mutant Kree were also the experimental subjects of the Celestials before Marvel took the book. Except for the movie universe, most of the universe's Thanos were abducted by death, which can be seen in Deadpool Eternal. Marvel has too many pitfalls, not to mention the magic talisman in Eternal's body that killed Uncle Diversity, not to mention a few bullshit Transcendents. Before the split, they were against oaa and after the split, they even committed suicide. The fanatics, the judges of the Celestial Gods, etc. Marvel are more messy than DC.

After reading nearly two hundred chapters, the protagonist showed up at the beginning, but in the end he only kept a diary, and then showed others the diary. Spoilers, what's the point of complaining about this protagonist? After reading it, I feel that this book has nothing to do with the protagonist. At the beginning, he said he wanted to buy stocks, but the house was sold and there was no follow-up. Then he said he wanted to get Thor's hammer and then there was no follow-up. It felt like the protagonist only wrote diaries and did nothing else.

I saw on Douyin that Loki, the God of Trickery, was advancing towards Loki, the God of Story. I thought it was interesting. Are you interested in writing about it?