Writing Diary Complaints and Being Seen by Iron Man

I read the posts in the book circle, The one who suggested not having a heroine, let me I didn't want to watch it for a moment, it's not like I'm writing about a female protagonist What an end of the world! The story is good, and the heroine can better bring out the "real existence" of the protagonist. Or it makes people feel "human"... Therefore, it is normal to ask whether this novel has a female protagonist or For a supporting actress, the protagonist doesn't act from within. It's the kind of scary, dark and bottomless online novel, right? ... Suggestion: Please use "Thor" as the name of the God of Thunder! Because in future stories, we can make effective decisions with "Tony" And the distinction is clear at a glance, otherwise "Toni Tor" It is easy to get confused and read differences... (I have a glassy heart, so I read the introduction and the book circle to filter the novels I want to read)

It's great. As long as the heroine doesn't behave like a diaosi, there are many male protagonists in diary series who behave like diaosi. This one doesn't have that. It's great.

The combat power crushes the protagonist like a lump💩. The initial stage of integrating the template of the motherland only increases the power by five times. If the protagonist is already very powerful, then a five-fold increase is nothing. But the problem is that the protagonist's current power is equivalent to the power of Captain America, which is only a few tons of power. Even if it increases Even if you increase your strength by five times, you will only have forty or fifty tons of strength at most. What the hell, even in the primary stage of the motherland, you will not be so weak. "The strength alone is five times stronger than before the transformation." It's really funny. I don't know how strong you are after you increase your strength by five times. It's ridiculous! [Emot=default,42/] Let's talk about defense. If the protagonist scratches himself with a kitchen knife, marks will appear on his skin. What if it's a bullet fired from a small weapon? Then it won't be broken directly? Bleeding? Good guy, this is a citizen of the motherland. Even at the primary stage, he should not be injured by small arms. What is the result? The protagonist seemed very proud and happy when he was scratched with a kitchen knife? What the heck, you have the nerve to be proud of your ability to suppress the battle to such an extent. It really makes me laugh. What a rubbish! [Emot=default,42/]🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

Please comment, so as not to fall into the trap next time. I have read too many novels. This kind of novel makes me speechless. You have traveled through time and space with Chinese people, and it is like you are in a superhero. You are the only Chinese, and they are all Americans. If you look at it as funny, you can only follow it like a monkey. I can only say that it is awesome. Even if you time travel, you must think about it when you sit here, 19, what the 99? At that time, if you don't think about it, the United States' impression of China was invincible. I didn't even want to read it when I saw it. The second chapter of this book was poisonous and killed me.

Recently, I like to read novels where the main character writes a diary that others can see and get rewards. However, I have read a book about traveling into mixed martial arts before, which made me very embarrassed. So I like the subject of this book, but the shortcoming of this book is that it is a bit, well, I can't say bad, but there are a lot of plots in movies, which makes it a bit boring to read.

The author's combat power is the same as that of a novel about cultivating immortals. Beginner stage, middle stage of the stage, peak stage of the stage, Dzogchen stage of the stage, Dzogchen stage of the stage, Dzogchen stage of the stage, Dzogchen peak of the stage, Dzogchen in the stage of the stage, multiplied by two in the stage, stage in the stage, peak stage in the stage, Dzogchen in the stage of the stage...

What are you talking about Iron Man? Reading your diary, this is your review of Marvel. Of the 10 chapters, 8.5 Chapters are about taking everyone to watch the movie and saying that the plot is pure plagiarism. I suggest readers who have not watched Marvel not to watch it, because the plot has not changed at all. It is recommended that those who have watched it not watch it, because it is a waste of time to watch the movie again.

I feel like the entire text is limited by the word count. I kept borrowing my notebook to copy the Marvel plot. The supporting characters were shocked in various ways. Then I continued to copy the plot, and was shocked again... Speechless ヽ(＿;)ノ

Iron Man is so unlike Iron Man. If he is not kidnapped, he is just a capitalist, which has absolutely nothing to do with the sense of justice. However, in this book, due to the intervention of the protagonist, he was not kidnapped, and the Iron Man in this book is simply righteous and evil, and it does not reflect the iron man playboy and the kind of slut who thinks he has the best IQ in the world.

The biggest flaw of this kind of novel is that there is a meaningless protagonist, a protagonist who is an accessory to the system, a protagonist who has no spiritual growth, a protagonist who can only be used to make numbers. Such a lackluster, meaningless, and unnecessary protagonist is dedicated to suppressing people like Tony and Steve. Do you still expect others to agree with him? Just like Boruto, he is incombustible.