Pirates: Trainer on the Straw Hat Ship

◎The highlight is the combination of Pokémon and pirates🤭 But this article is not a Pokémon summoning flow - it is not a type that summons real Pokémon such as Charmander and Squirtle to fight with characters. The key point is that the creatures in the One Piece world (including humans, various insects, marine creatures, etc.) Can use various Pokémon moves, mega evolutions, and the Dynamax that should be available in the future, as well as the original One Piece characters' innovative use of moves, props, etc. ★The most important core setting: the protagonist's golden finger🧐 The protagonist's golden finger is a Pokémon console. It can bring people who identify with the protagonist into the Pokémon game world (that is, the Pokémon series of games that exist in reality). In this game world, the "Pokémon" that the protagonist can use to fight are the people who are brought into the game console. The machine can simply give these "Pokémon" various Pokémon moves and characteristics, and the ordinary props produced can be brought back to reality at a small cost. The protagonist himself can also use moves and characteristics, and can also obtain special abilities in the Pokémon world - the power of Viridian, the power of waveguide, super powers, etc. These special abilities can also be taught to people who are judged as "Pokémon" by the game machine. Since Goldfinger is a game console, it is not redundant to use numerical values ​​to quantify a character's combat power. However, character values ​​appear frequently in the early stage, and may be suspected of having a low number of characters🤔. However, as the story progresses to this point (after completely defeating the Yonko Aunt and occupying the Cake Island), this kind of data display has been reduced a lot in the text, gradually fading away, and is only picked out when necessary... Well, I feel that the author has handled it fairly well. Fighting in the Pokémon game world can also gain experience points and increase levels. Therefore, entering the game world and leveling up has become an important way for the protagonist group in this article to improve its strength. In the subsequent plot, the game console is upgraded, and the protagonist still has time to carry out systematic recruitment and leveling for the affiliated pirate group under his command. He can even select a real area to forcibly interfere and transform it into the game world. This function is a bit... How should I put it? ★Diversity and innovation-the "Pokémonization" of characters😍 It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into researching the setting. Transferring the setting of one work to another - this is not a simple project... It will definitely not satisfy everyone (yes, I think the author's setting is very interesting, 😔 but a reader in the comment area thought that "it is still too abstract for Pokémon fans and Haimi", I don't mean what he said is wrong, this kind of evaluation full of personal subjective feelings cannot be said to be incorrect). At the beginning, everyone in the protagonist group was set with detailed ability values, attributes, and characteristics. I think the author created a "unique Pokémon image" for them, and set their future development in depth (but it may seem a bit verbose...) Taking Sauron as an example, his attributes are steel and dragon. Later, a third attribute, ghost, was added. The attributes are consistent with the character's life trajectory in the original work. Due to the power of Pokémon in his body (setting the character to use attribute energy to use moves), some strange changes have occurred in Zoro's development in this article (the same is true for others) - for example, the power of actively stimulating the "dragon attribute" changes his appearance, like a ferocious dragon, causing the enemy to mistake him for a phantom beast devil fruit ability user... There are also weather mage Nami, insect swarm Usopp, ship elf Merry (yes! The ship is still there! Merry is also a Pokémon and can be seen) and so on. Generally speaking, the characters and abilities are relatively consistent and consistent, but perhaps due to limited writing power, there are still a few characters who appear a bit "invisible" and their characteristics are not obvious enough. 😮◎In addition, I am a little concerned that the insect swarm cultivated by Usopp has produced special individuals that inherit some Pokémon moves during natural reproduction (without the intervention of game consoles) - this objective fact means that this article sets the probability that Pokémon moves will be passed down from parents to offspring in the pirate world. 🧐I think that from this moment on, the setting of this story is finally no longer centered on the protagonist - the kind of ability system or way of governance and development that relies entirely on the special talents of the protagonist. The world view of that type of work is very fragile, and few such articles talk about what the whole world will be like after the death of the protagonist (mainly because they don't have the ability to talk about it. Once the protagonist dies, all the things that depend on the protagonist's existence will disappear, and the whole world will be in chaos. The superficial unity is not the result of the author forcibly arranging it for the protagonist). ... Although I don't agree with that kind of work, things are all about comparison. Compared with other works, it is already pretty good. It feels really good to watch it without thinking too much. Ahem, I went a bit far hahaha, 🤭 What I want to say is that if this article continues to further expand this setting, then the world view will be relatively solid and stable. ★Focus on group portraits, the protagonist is more auxiliary😃 Since the protagonist's golden finger is extremely suitable for helping his partners become stronger, this also leads to the protagonist's positioning in the article being more of an assistant and behind-the-scenes decision-maker. In the early stage, I tend to favor auxiliary means - use surfing moves to speed up the boat, open a grassy field to restore physical strength to friends and facilitate devil training - in short, in the early stage, Luffy Zoro Sanji is really better than the protagonist, and it is not the protagonist's turn to play at all. In the later stage, I also felt that I was leaning towards support, because the combination of the moves obtained by the protagonist was really suitable for support! (But if necessary, you can also tear the enemy apart with your hands) As the vice-captain, he is more meticulous in his work (or a little sinister and has a lot of scheming in his heart). He has to manage the affiliated pirate group and make some plans, while other partners are usually working hard to increase their strength (the protagonist has special treatment. After playing the gym and the championship road on the game console, he will receive achievements, and the rewards can significantly enhance the protagonist's strength...) However, due to the existence of experience points, the combat power of the protagonist and his companions soared very quickly, which seemed a bit inflated. ★Strive to portray the original characters😀 For example - Smoker, a non-staff member of the Straw Hats, a friend of the Straw Hats! [Smorg: (hard-talking. Jpg) I told you that they and I are not in the same group! The protagonist and the others made a big fuss in Rogue Town, and when they set out, they accidentally brought Smogg, the navy from Rogue Town, aboard the ship. It took a while to find out that there was a navy man on the ship... It was not good to just return the man back, so he simply kidnapped him (.) And took him with him to set off (Smoog: Hello!) Since he knows who Smoker is, the protagonist can "hook up" with him safely and boldly😘. During the voyage from Rogue Town to Alabasta, Smoker witnessed the turmoil of this magical pirate group, and gradually accepted the fact that he was traveling with pirates. Although he was still arrogant, he was very honest. When he encountered pirates, he even took the initiative to join the battle... (He also said that you are not in the same group!) On the way, the protagonist told Smoker some of the secrets of the game console, assigned him Pokémon moves, and took him to train with his friends. Of course, the protagonist does not blindly believe in Smoker. Because someone who can be judged by the game console as a Pokémon that can be brought into the game must be convinced to a certain extent. After informing him of the existence of the game console, it didn't take long for the protagonist to see Smoker in the Pokémon column - although he was still being stubborn at this time😄... Well, it's not just Smoker, there are others, but this "Smooth-tongued Smoker" is so hilarious... ■The speaking tone of some characters is almost the same😶 There are also shortcomings. The key characters depicted are okay, the tone of voice is clearly differentiated when speaking, and the characteristics are distinct, which will not confuse readers. 😄Praise the members of the Straw Hats and affiliated pirates by name. But some characters who appear less often have a bit too uniform tone when speaking... It's barely noticeable if they only say it once, but it's too obvious for those who appear twice or three times, just like passers-by. It's really awkward to look at! ■Describing settings in too much detail😶 First of all, I am very interested in the setting of the author of this article. I think it is very interesting to speculate on the author's possible future setting based on the existing information (for example, above, I think that the emergence of individuals with natural genetic moves in the insect swarm is a setting that can have an impact on the overall story), but this is just my personal hobby... After thinking about it, I think this may not be regarded as an advantage, but rather a disadvantage. Because it's so detailed that I'm a little bored🤨. The author has successively shown a large number of move settings, ability settings, etc. Although it is not as messy as I once summarized as "randomly pouring out original ideas in one breath", the amount of information released is too large and too frequent, and sometimes it is difficult for readers to grasp the key points. I believe that the author of this article is ready for a complete detailed setting - you can feel it from the in-depth development of Pokémon abilities by Zoro, Sanji, and Luffy. But there are only so many words, but they are used to store a lot of settings. Isn't it a little bit to show these to readers? I suggest that you either transfer them to the extra chapter, or not write them at all - it just refers to meaningless settings that have no sense of existence and no use in the text. But the author is really amazing😆. To be honest, I am particularly interested in the part about the settings (occasionally I get bored, but mostly I find them very interesting). The author really put a lot of thought into describing the settings. ■Becoming invincible too quickly😶 literally. Now that he has defeated Big Mom, occupied Cake Island, and killed Akainu and one of the Five Old Stars one after another... The only one who cannot be defeated is Im.

For a Pokémon lover and Haimi, it is still a bit too abstract

Finally someone wrote to follow the boat flow, keep up the hard work and update!

The idea of ​​transforming the crew into Pokémon is good, but the biggest mistake in this book is that they follow the ship and end up on Luffy's ship! If you start from scratch and combine it with your setting, it may be a good fanfic, but if you get on Luffy's ship, you have to follow the original plot completely. Although there are slight changes in the details, the overall plot is the same as the original plot. Just looking at the little highlights in your setting is not enough to support the whole book. Once the freshness at the beginning wears off, the rest will be boring! Moreover, the middle-class temperament of the protagonist group in the original work is really not suitable to be expressed in words. The more I read it, the more embarrassing it becomes!

My first fully ordered book, I hope I can write better works

There are too few updates, wait until chapter 100 is updated before reading

Is there a female protagonist? Is there a female protagonist? Have you

Look what I caught, thump thump thump, there is a Sun God Luffy, come out, Sun God Luffy

The author is great, update, update, I have read it all! ! !

No heroine? Are you sure you don't want one of such a sweet and arrogant empress?