Pokémon Breeding House Starting from Pirates

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[Detection of gradual recovery of host consciousness] [Cultivation Master System, activated. [The void store is being built. [Void rules are being constructed. [The void channel is being constructed. Constructing... Dak listened to the buzzing voice in his head and felt a splitting headache. He covered his head and opened his eyes. He seemed to be lying on a lawn, with the sound of water flowing in his ears. My vision gradually recovered, and what I saw when I opened my eyes was a pure white ceiling, dotted with a few clouds, and a warm orange light like the sun in the center. [Build completed. The severe pain in his mind gradually subsided, and only then did Dak have time to see everything around him clearly. "Where?" This is a closed cubic space, with a length, width and height of ten meters. The space for movement is only one hundred square meters, which is not very large. The floor of the room was a lawn, and Duck pulled out a piece of grass. It was real, and there was dirt underneath the grass; but the sky on the ceiling was fake.

Although the ending felt like a bad ending, this novel made me feel like I was in the story. I started reading on QQ from this video of Bilbil's Treasure of the Sea. At the end, I really, really thank the author for writing this novel! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I hope more girls are not scum, but just give those poor girls a home

To be honest, this book was quite good at the beginning, but it started to fall apart more and more as I wrote it. I wanted to know that when the author wrote the world of Pirates, the protagonist he described was still okay. But when it came to Zero: Familiar, the world began to fall apart. It would be better to say that starting from Naruto, the author became more and more uncomfortable writing this protagonist, and you wrote this world. It is better to write about Fairy Tail. It is a serious magical world. To be honest, a small anime like Zero: Familiar can be called the strongest magical world. I suggest the author to take a good look at Fairy Tail to see what the real magical world is. When writing about the world of Naruto, I don't know how the author wanted to create the main character. The more I read the character, the more awkward it becomes. It's like a novel written by two people. When I wrote about the world of Zero: Familiar, I even felt that three people wrote a novel. And the last thing I want to say is that the author probably wrote a fan novel without even finishing reading Pirates and Naruto. The two worlds he wrote about, whether it is the drama There are too many mistakes in terms of plot, timeline, and main characters. Take the key characters in the pirate world that you wrote at the beginning. They were not written out or even given directly. Anyway, that's all I have to say. All in all, this novel is quite satisfactory. In fact, I haven't finished it at all. The author's writing is too awkward and the more he writes, the more awkward it becomes.

Just think that I'm spending money to be an injustice. I can't stand it. Don't be a bully. I'm spending money to see it.

I'll go ahead and give you 5 stars for the sake of Zero's familiar. If you like it, please update soon.

First, my thoughts. Recently I saw a comment saying that I wanted to see more interactions between trainers and Pokémon. Then I thought, would it be better to use the word "group portrait"? This kind of writing seems to be very suitable for showing the changes that the appearance of Pokémon has on people's lives. Then there are many of us store clerks who don't have Pokémon and Devil Fruits to match. If you have any ideas, you can give some suggestions. I may not be able to choose a Pokémon that suits them well. For example, I think my choice of Smoker's Gas Bomb is pretty good, but Robin's Big Milk Tank is average.

Since you want to sell Pokémon, why not deal with the contradictions in the Naruto world first? You must have a lot of problems if you sell it in Konoha alone. Why sell it to 5 ninja villages together? At least we can balance it out first. Since it's a matter of not interfering with other worlds, why did you destroy Akatsuki without saying a word and leave a mess? You keep saying it's for the good of Pokémon, so why do you sell Pokémon to the still unstable Naruto world to use them as weapons of war?

A very good book, very creative and well written.