From the Ninth Grade Water God to the Lord of the Waters

I'll give it four stars. The writing is okay, but the progress is too slow. I started with the fifth level of Qi training, and now there are dozens of chapters, and I'm still at the fifth level of Qi training. The author is planning to end it with the golden elixir. The progress is too slow, and it will be boring. Do you have to write hundreds of chapters for the lowest level of Qi training?

Let me talk about my feelings. After reading it, I felt it was okay. I have read more than 300 chapters, but I didn't want to read it at first. I read it when it was free. There was no book to read. Then after reading it, I was able to read it. But at first, I was too lazy to read it because of the introduction and being framed. Then I read it when it was free. You can see it later. It's just my personal feeling. I may have seen it too much. I couldn't write who framed it for a long time after reading it. I didn't bother to read it. But this one is more exciting. It can be seen more clearly. It is very clear. It is not separated by many pictures. If it doesn't come out, I can't stand this black hand.

I said this book got weirder and weirder the more I read it. It turned out that after reading more than a hundred chapters, I didn't find a single woman.

Coming from the Beiyuan Immortal Clan, I was annoyed and upset by the heroine Zhou Luan, which made me want to abandon the novel several times. I hope this book doesn't have such mess. Even if Wang Xuanlin is an orphan, I will be happy to read it.

I didn't see how to practice in Chapter 70. You are not a practitioner. Next, you can try writing about rural life.

The protagonist doesn't have much strength, he just takes care of the overall situation and is very tolerant in the face of bullying.

The writing is too bland, there are no adventures, there are no good fighting scenes, the whole process is just dialogue.

It's okay, but it falls off a bit later on, and the pace speeds up rapidly. I'd like to see more farming content.

It feels like the writing style is awkward or even complicated. The evaluation is that if you are cultivating immortality, just write about your family according to the system of cultivating immortality. Isn't it good? Talking about so many weird things is not only unsightly but also boring. The key is that your writing style makes people feel uncomfortable when listening to the book, it is very bad and naive.

I endure it, I endure it, I endure it again, I endure it, I endure it