Become a Taoist Master by Starting from the Underworld

I felt very awkward when I first saw the story. First, the child who was trapped in a fatal situation started talking about it and called the protagonist to be the eldest brother to save him. The protagonist had no ability and pretended to be scared to death, and then he walked on the shoulder of this young child when he was dead. Later, the protagonist also knew that the Zuo family mansion was very dangerous, and then he kept passing by the door when he went home at night. When he saw Liu Qiaoer, he said that he was from a village and came up to say hello (it was said at the beginning of this article that the people in the village had been told not to have anything to do with Liu Qiaoer since they were young), so he was stalked by the dead ghost and almost died. I didn't read much after that. I felt a little awkward when I saw this. The protagonist's performance was too simple. To put it bluntly, he was a fool. He had no ability to think at all in the article!

The author's old problem is that the plot of the story is too tight, and the protagonist seems to be chased by a mad dog behind him, and he can't stop for a moment and keeps fighting monsters. Although the plug-in is very good and the cultivation level is rising rapidly, there are always challenges beyond the level. It's a pleasure to watch it once, but if you watch it too much, you'll feel tired of the protagonist. If you watch it too much, the reader will feel even more tired. So it's not without reason that subscriptions are getting lower and lower.

The plot is clever, pure talent, just practicing, no background, no power, just take things out and go out, awesome!

After reading the first ten chapters, I feel that the protagonist is a lackadaisical person, and there is a high probability that he will also be nosy and holy in the rest of the chapter.

The protagonist's parents are almost fed up and they spend a lot of money renting a house!

What do you think, author? After the evil god incident in Qinghe County, the old man from the Liu family and the earth master Lu Yizhi asked you why you pretended to be inferior to the other person when you entered the Yin realm? This part is too frustrating to watch. It is extremely embarrassing to treat someone as a grandson in the Liu family despite being so powerful and a shady person. You have to show your strength so that others can respect you, instead of just acting like a grandson. You are not a follower. You have also said that you don't care about others knowing that you have to do so much to yourself. It is really disgusting.

One of the biggest shortcomings of this kind of novel is that you want everything and practice every skill. If you read too much, you will find that there is not much actual plot except for practicing skills, and it is very tiring to read. The skills before charging seem to be within a lifetime, let alone new skills later. This This phenomenon has already appeared in this book. The protagonist does the same thing as 007, just practicing his skills every day, and there are two subversive plots in the middle to push the plot. Fortunately, the author left a way to survive. The exciting plot was put on the shelves without writing, which made me run away

Has the author changed since the book about treasure appraisal in a pawn shop? There is no priority in writing books now. There is no need for passersby A, B, B, and D to write so much. I feel that the writing is very fluent.

Be diligent! Not enough, dear 😊

The plot as a whole is average hahaha