I Became a Saint in the Prehistoric Game

After seeing a few pictures on the shelves, let me talk about the poisonous points. The main character in the front is like a girl he has never seen before, and he behaves as if he is charmed. In the back, he also goes to this girl's group, but luckily there is no swine fever, and the reasons given are reasonable. After the two bosses were cut down, I killed one and kept the other as a pet. It looked poisonous at first, but it was easy to deal with. The pet can provide experience and give a follow-up clue to the cave, which is okay. You don't need to look at the economic system, it's collapsing to no end. The same goes for the data. The main reason is that after it was put on the shelves, the data before the doubling was taken out and watered down. The panel is also a lot of water, especially many things that have nothing to do with the protagonist are taken out and watered down.

It is said that it is not a game, but other people are called players, not fellow Taoists, not people, but players. It's not a game, but the name of the organization is the guild, and the leader is called the chairman. This is how poisonous points accumulate bit by bit.

The writing is really bad, the writing is poor, the logic is poor, the plot is poor, the economy collapsed from the beginning, one star. The only thing I can add one star to is that there are not many people writing about this topic nowadays.

Forcibly adding drama, insisting on forcing trouble, being a dog, most people are not interested in watching it at the beginning.

Four stars before release and two stars after release. It was like that before, a normal person with some brains, but later he developed a supreme magical power and started to have a sea of ​​shit, right? Prices are collapsing so much that I can't even see it. I feel like a dead fish. I don't know what I am doing day by day. Sometimes I pride myself on being kind, and sometimes I am inexplicably "killing decisively" ; He is greedy for the benefits of killing people and refining souls, but he also pretends to be innocent and makes excuses for himself; one moment he pretends to be a pure white lotus, and then he starts to breed pigs; in the front, there are so many magical powers and magical weapons that are incredible, but in the back, the Qi training is everywhere, even for everyone in the ninth level; there are too many flaws, just like what the previous readers commented: the level of this book is one star, because the subject matter is rare.

It looks good so far, but there are a few words of advice. First, don't release Taoist equipment too quickly. Before you can become a loose immortal, there are supreme Taoists, ninth-level and tenth-level flying swords. Is it reasonable to drop equipment that can only be dropped by immortals? , Are there no conditions required for these equipment methods? Is it possible to activate it with so much mana? Second, don't have a CP too early. If you have someone you like, you should confirm the relationship in the middle and later stages. You can separate a few times and reunite a few times. This will enrich the plot without making people feel abrupt. It will happen naturally and naturally, instead of confirming the relationship at the first meeting. This will make readers have less expectations. Third, you don't need to get the final benefit every time you click on the plot copy. You can be a little frustrated and regretful, which makes it more realistic and reasonable. Fourth, the ninth-level and tenth-level flying swords like those in Shushan should be made more rare, preferably rare, unique, with some background, similar to the spirit consciousness of the weapon, and look more high-end, rather than dead objects mass-produced like industrial products. Fifth, there can be trade unions, but they cannot be dominated by trade unions. The great power belongs to oneself, and only the majority acting alone is king. That's all.

Don't like messing around, multiple heroines. Lesbians can develop, I'm speechless. And that beautiful girl picture is a failure. If you say this is trouble and still refine it, shouldn't you ask the Patriarch to resolve it? Just to get a few more girls, right?

It slipped away. At the beginning, silver was mainly used, and the purchasing power was so strong. When I felt the need, I directly turned silver into gold. You bought a lot of 250,000 battleships, and then bought an unknown 200,000 battleship. Then the gold directly turned into immortal coins. Why didn't you just use spiritual stones? They have all cultivated themselves and have changed three times. At first, it seemed like they were rubbing shoulders with Shushan? Similar to Shushan? Is it becoming a disaster now? A flood of game data? My head was buzzing, I slipped away, and I stopped reading the free ones.

Girl, girl, girl, girl, the pet is also a girl, a running account, the values ​​​​collapse quickly, I feel sorry for me, I bought the latest one at once

In this book, I saw that the protagonist and Chu had no ambiguity at first, but Chu was written as a lesbian. I didn't even consider Chu as the female protagonist, but then I suddenly stopped reading it later? ? ? Just accept it, I was originally a harem party, although it was very sudden, but it is not a poisonous point for me, but the author, did you go crazy, and changed the article and stopped accepting it. When you accept a girl, you have no chance of turning back. If you accept it, you can only bite the bullet and write it. What is the difference between not accepting it and giving it away? You have two heroines. If you have two heroines, you are not a harem. What was not a poison has turned into a highly poisonous one. I suggest that the harem party should not read it. It is really poisonous and kills you.