Starting from the Two Realms, Controlling Beasts and Cultivating Immortals

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Chapter 211 Foundation Building, the author is definitely a genius. I heard that those who are exempted from the upper limit are those with poor grades. Maybe this is the reason. I have long thought that novels about building the foundation of heaven and flawless Qi training are all rubbish. They are completely written by the author who does not want to be like the traditional immortal cultivation novels, and then he writes it himself. There is often a phenomenon in this kind of novels, which is that countless resources are used but the cultivation speed is as slow as a dog. There is an obvious problem with the rhythm of the novel, and when you look at the back, there is almost no expression of the hard-earned foundation laid in the front. In fact, I saw this novel very early because I flipped through the catalog before and it was only when it was put on the shelf that my cultivation level improved one level. Now I have come to take a look at it for free. Sure enough, it is not what I expected. If a novel like yours is not popular, who will be? Normally, this kind of immortal cultivation novel should have 100 chapters of foundation building, 250 chapters of golden elixir, and 400 chapters of Nascent Soul. As for your novel 211 Foundation Building, how many chapters are you going to write to become an immortal? Can you keep writing? Eunuch is a matter of time.

Let's make a brief comment. If you are cultivating immortals in two realms, it means that the resources are very abundant. In addition, the protagonist's talent is also good, so the realm should not be suppressed. Moreover, the world of immortality written by the author has no pattern at all. It feels like a trap. It's not a fairy tale at all. It's more like a masked, urban novel. And the way you describe it, beast control is not like beast control, it is basically separated from this. The title of the book does not match the content at all. Urban cultivation can be said to be simple and has not experienced any killings. The other world traveled through can give the protagonist all these advantages, such as thinking about the mortal world and killing and eliminating harm. But you didn't write it out at all. What you wrote was so confusing that you didn't even know what you were practicing?

Not to mention other things, the names of the exercises are worth learning from 99 fantasy fairy tale authors. Many authors think these are not important, but in fact they are extremely important. They are related to the underlying logic of the novel world. There are many exercises, elixirs, elixirs, talismans and other things written about them that have very few names. Some authors are lazy and just use the same name for skill elixirs and just simply taste them. The levels are different, and the various attributes of the exercises are gone. The most outrageous ones I have ever seen are the elixirs that have appeared, the spirit-gathering elixir. From Qi training to foundation building, there are no other elixirs. If the underlying logic is not constructed, it feels like the world is empty. These things are all things that build the style of a world. I don't know why they eat this bowl of rice without paying attention.

The idea is good, but the plot is very awkward

A very good novel about cultivating immortals from two realms, which is rare to see.

The writing is too complex, the writing style is poor, and I can't create a single character. There are talents and opportunities, but the result is still the same waste, I don't know what I am doing. While emphasizing talent and doing things at the same time, you just don't practice well.

When you use the techniques and secrets of the Second Realm, you feel that the levels are asymmetrical. It feels a bit confusing. Especially the way I call my spirit beast is so nice, it's a bit uncomfortable. Nowadays, there are still times when a little poison is released. I said before that I shouldn't save people randomly, but now I have to save people again. You've slept too much while sitting down, right?

I regret it, it's too late. It doesn't matter that the pace is slow, but in the end, the protagonist has no shortage of talents and resources, but the pace is still so slow, and then in the end it is so useless that it can't even achieve the most basic level of Shuangjie Invincible. Forget it, give it up. If you give it up, it will be in vain.

The reason for missing one star is that the level is improved too slowly. From the beginning to the present, it took more than 170 chapters from the 7th level of Qi training to the 12th level of Qi training. So it will take 180 more chapters to reach the peak or limit of foundation building? The following Golden Elixir, Nascent Soul, and Transformation God require 700 chapters? The plot is actually quite good, but your Qi training is really slow to improve your cultivation level. With such a big plug-in, your cultivation is still so slow. Your level improvement in the early stage is so slow. It will only become more and more difficult to improve your cultivation level as you go on.