Dao Wu Locks the Heavens

It doesn't look good in person, there are many bugs, the more I write, the worse it gets, and it's inexplicable.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author! The protagonist looks like a seeker! Not the kind of protagonist where a stallion kneels down on a girl! He's not the kind of protagonist who likes to show off and slap in the face! It's fun to watch!

G feels like it's not about a socialist country. On the contrary, it is like the Republic of China government

I haven't read it yet, I just read the introduction and table of contents. To be honest, your introduction mentioned Dragon Snake and Yang Shen, as well as Zhu Tianwen. Later, you mentioned Honghuang. What architecture do you plan to adopt? Refining Qi and transforming Qi into God? Then you really won't be able to write long like this. Although I haven't read the content yet, I can roughly guess that I practice in any system. Author, you must know that this is Zhu Tianwen's biggest failure. In all astronomy, the most taboo thing is to practice any system, and the result will be different. You can choose the divine machine system, which is good, because the divine machine system has structure, setting, and theory. The settings and logic are perfect. The lower limit is low and the upper limit is high. Ordinary people can practice cultivation without eating spiritual roots. However, the most important thing is to choose one, or to be a monarch, minister, and envoy, which is the main practice system and which is the auxiliary practice system. Here, Wo suggested that astronomy like yours is dominated by the eternal life system and assisted by the prehistoric energy refining. The reason is simple. The immortality system does not consume energy settings. Any system of energy can be used for practice, the difference lies in the efficiency of practice. Because the essence of the eternal system is to devour. Science fiction world, magic world, fighting spirit world. All vitality, profound energy, etc. Can be used for practice, because the elements that make up the world view are all the same. Sound, light, heat, electricity, yin and yang, five elements, wind, thunder, ice, light and darkness, etc. This will help expand your thinking. Don't stick to some single world. You can also write more. As for the Ancient Refining Qiliu, Shenji has a book called "Buddha is the Tao", which is very classic. It is also very familiar to us, and we are better able to write things. The most important thing is to assist the eternal life system in practicing. The early stage of the eternal life system has little increase in life span, while the Qi practitioner can cultivate a little immortal aura in his chest, and the aura will be immortal. The lifespan is endless (it seems so, but it is still more than what was added in the early stage of the immortality method). The immortality system consumes too much time, resources, etc.! I think you seem to be stuck too, so you might as well try my suggestion. In addition, looking at the catalog, you have stayed in the Dragon and Snake world for a long time, and the level of the Dragon and Snake system is still a bit low. If you are the Galaxy Emperor after the derivation, then I have nothing to say. Mind system. That's ok too. Moreover, it can be derived from dragon and snake. They are both a kind of divine machine architecture. They can complement each other and will not conflict with practice!

The author writes leisurely and doesn't get banned

Just because this introduction is well written, you can give it a try and read it.

I feel like the protagonist's opponent is so smart

Two pictures a day! Now one! ... What are you doing

Is there no heroine? The protagonist asks that there not be women all along the road?

It is best to use Dragon Snake, Qing Yu Nian, Jiang Ye, Prehistoric, and Conferred God. This way, the force value goes from high to low, just like walking on a ladder, and it is not easy to be too fragmented, and it can catch the heat.