The World Begins with Hong Fist

First of all, the protagonist has a double standard, and secondly, the supporting actress managed to disgust me. Even someone like me, who doesn't like black people, felt unfair for him. He gave the supporting actress face, stayed behind to let the woman breathe, and allowed her to step down. Moreover, the supporting actress was completely crushed and beaten. They gave her face to surrender, but the protagonist said that she could not interfere in the game. But because it was a woman who had an accident, it was difficult to explain. I was surprised that there were a lot of famous people involved in the accident. She was the only one who had the privilege. The protagonist told the woman from the audience that she was black. He directly bites the black man, knocks him to his knees and makes him lose face on the competition stage, and then proudly stands in front of him and admits defeat. This is the first time I read a novel about avenging injustice for black people. You can read this book, it makes me sick

Please, kill someone to separate the ink marks, okay. I almost died from poison.

In the previous few worlds, from Ip Man to Xiao Ao, it is obvious that the author has put his heart and efforts in the right direction. You can feel that the level of the novel has changed from food to fairy grass. If it can be maintained, it may not be possible to confer a god in one book, but at least it is the best among the best! It's a pity that from the beginning of Shuiyue Cave, especially from the moment when people travel through the ending of Swordsman, I felt a little thump in my heart and had a bad feeling! Sure enough, starting from Shuiyue, the plot rhythm dropped sharply, from fairy grass to weeds. This is also a common problem in many books. The writing is very good in the early and middle stages, but in the later stages, the plot collapses into a mess! Authors like to create original works based on other works. This is actually a good thing. It shows that the author has his own ideas and pursuits, but this is also difficult, even more difficult than pure originality! The reason is that the original plot based on the original work must be better written and more dramatic than the original work. Only these original plots can be considered successful! If the writing is not as good as the original work, it will directly lower the rating in the readers' minds, and then they will think that the author is too smart, so he might as well just write according to the original work! If your originality is good, readers will praise you; if your originality is poor, readers may yell at you! Starting from the Shuiyue chapter, although the drama is reduced, it is still a half-lived story, but a Chinese ghost story begins to collapse. The original plot is neither a fairy tale, nor a Chinese fairy tale, nor a ghost. Instead, it has a sense of déjà vu in the prequel of Yangshen, and there is also the intrusion of the reincarnation of the main god space! This plot is so bad that I feel like the author has changed! That's outrageous!

There is a lot of foreshadowing in the front, but this one is a bit long, and the characters are not well laid out. Why is it not good to choose Dongfang Bubai and Feng Qingyang? Dongfang Invincible has been making soy sauce. .

Some people say racial discrimination, but I don't think so. It's the protagonist's freedom to be a good guy or a bad guy or not to help. It's just the character setting that the protagonist needs. As long as it's not too overdone and doesn't look too eye-catching. However, I have not seen any such excessive behavior so far. Some people say that Jin An Jin Hua Jin cannot be understood, which proves that you have not read novels about Chinese martial arts, and that your novel knowledge is not deep enough. I think it's very thoughtful to take people through time travel later. It's normal for the protagonist and supporting characters to grow up and travel together. If a person becomes invincible by fighting and killing in time-travel, it will become a mindless and cool article. The main god space is also divided into teammates. However, there is indeed suspicion of Shui Zishu in Swordsman and Legend of the Spirit Mirror, although I have no evidence.

You double-standard dog. I didn't warn the man with a bad leg before and watched people being beaten. Now I remind others of a woman. With such a petty attitude and such awareness, how did he become a grandmaster? It's disgusting. It's so poisonous.

Come on, there is no woman in my heart, draw your sword, God of Nature

Forehead! ! The protagonist's character of not liking women is a bit bad. There is only one kind of person who does not need company, and that is the dead. What's the use of living without someone by your side? It will only make you hate life more and more

The writing is average, 80% of people can't finish the first world, the plot is too dragging

Recommend, give five stars, don't be afraid of the author being proud