Dreaming About the World, Embarking on the Path of Spiritual Practice

The plot is good and the ideas are clear, but there is a problem with the world selection. It's already 2024, and it's outrageous that you are still writing The Swordsman and The Legend of Heaven and Slaying the Dragon. Zhu Tianwen has already written too much about the world of Jin Yong's martial arts. There are not even one thousand but eight hundred books starting with Jin Yong's martial arts. Even if your writing is good, it will be nothing in front of these overflowing homogeneous worlds. The first one is Xiaoao, the second one is Yitian, the third one I guess is Tianlong, the fourth one may be Tang Dynasty Shuanglong, and the fifth one may be Fengyun. Just looking at this catalog makes me want to vomit. If I really want to continue writing about the world of martial arts, it will be useless even if the Platinum Master comes!

Everything must be explained by technology. It is suitable for you to write science fiction articles and spiritual cultivation. Then it seems very uncomfortable to insist on relying on technology.

It was okay in the early stage, but Swallowing Starry Sky started to fall apart. This is a jump to see what is written in Dou Po Cang Qiong. It's been in vain, no wonder there are no reviews, and no one will read it at all. It's time to persuade him to retreat as soon as he starts swallowing the starry sky!

Why does it become more and more complicated as it goes on? How about the protagonist who was well written in the beginning? The World Fight was written too hastily and it ended all at once. After it was over, I went back to my own world and found that I had ascended the dimension. Then I couldn't leave. The protagonists in my low-dimensional world had no golden fingers. If they all died, the protagonist would really die in the high-dimensional world. This went around and around, and I re-wrote the first world again. It was really dizzying. . . . . . The strength was so strong in the beginning, but the writing was not very exciting. Later, how about writing about how low-dimensional people become ordinary people? Well, let's not talk about the author's writing of characters, writing methods, etc. The content of this story suddenly feels like aesthetic fatigue.

All I can say is that the start was not very good. At first I thought I was going to learn physics, chemistry and biology to improve myself, but in the end I was looking for ways to make money. Traveling through the first world, the beginning is very difficult and the food is not decent. The protagonist can catch fish just by the river in the village. Are the villagers stupid and don't know how to catch fish? It would be better to write it so that the protagonist can't find anything to eat, ends up eating that meal, and suffers a life of misery. You catch fish every day, which makes the villagers look stupid.

There is nothing to write after chapter 350, so I will just repeat the previous world and plot. It is better to just end it. Then there is a set of scientific theories to guide martial arts training. You have already finished writing something new, can you still spit it out and swallow it back again and again? The backend is really disappointing.

Very nice, but updates are too slow

What kind of person is the protagonist? For what he gets, he will definitely be given equal and excessive rewards. What he gives to others, or what others ask him to give, does not require anything in return. A kind person does not live in reality

I don't like giving away girls. I have money and power. I don't enjoy it. I don't like women. I don't know why I live. I don't feel happy.

How did you get such a high score? I have read four chapters. The first chapter is a permanent certificate, and the rest are bullshit. What is the purpose of a time travel that takes so long? Moreover, the words are like a basin of shit, one basin after another, never ending.