
The Reincarnation of the Heavens Seeks Immortality
About This Novel
Zhang Yao believes that if you want to live a comfortable life, you must first have money, secondly, be able to fight, and most importantly, be able to live a long time. Practice martial arts first, then learn Taoism. Everything is just to seek immortality. The moment Zhang Yao achieved eternal life, he was the biggest winner.
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Official(38)Scraped 21d ago
Rubbish. It's not even a cool article. It's just nonsense.
A person who doesn't practice internal skills very much. Relying on internal martial arts and not practicing martial arts for a few days, you have basically reached the status of a second-rate martial artist. What the hell is that? How can someone write a martial arts novel if he doesn't even understand that if he doesn't practice martial arts, he will be in vain? Isn't it good for you to write about the city?
It's just a bunch of stuff that makes people sick.
It's really nc. It's so uncomfortable to watch.
The protagonist gets beaten every time. It's so annoying, it doesn't look pleasant.
Is this rating true? ? ? ? ? Brushed, right? What did the protagonist become a genius without explaining anything?
Can the author make the transition clearer? Is it a system or a magic weapon, or a supernatural power, or rebirth in other worlds after death, martial arts can also break the void! It's hard to do it when you suddenly went to another world like this.
AI writing can't connect the front and back
Was it written by AI after Chapter 31? There are instantaneous transitions, one paragraph after another, and I can't connect the previous one.
The time-travel message was inexplicable, and I suddenly traveled through time, leaving me speechless...
I didn't like it, I didn't go into details about the time travel, and I didn't like the way the protagonist was portrayed. I can't stand watching the Heroes Convention. Abandoned
What the hell are you trying to persuade someone to quit in the first three chapters?
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Community(0)
Official(38)Scraped 21d ago
Rubbish. It's not even a cool article. It's just nonsense.
A person who doesn't practice internal skills very much. Relying on internal martial arts and not practicing martial arts for a few days, you have basically reached the status of a second-rate martial artist. What the hell is that? How can someone write a martial arts novel if he doesn't even understand that if he doesn't practice martial arts, he will be in vain? Isn't it good for you to write about the city?
It's just a bunch of stuff that makes people sick.
It's really nc. It's so uncomfortable to watch.
The protagonist gets beaten every time. It's so annoying, it doesn't look pleasant.
Is this rating true? ? ? ? ? Brushed, right? What did the protagonist become a genius without explaining anything?
Can the author make the transition clearer? Is it a system or a magic weapon, or a supernatural power, or rebirth in other worlds after death, martial arts can also break the void! It's hard to do it when you suddenly went to another world like this.
AI writing can't connect the front and back
Was it written by AI after Chapter 31? There are instantaneous transitions, one paragraph after another, and I can't connect the previous one.
The time-travel message was inexplicable, and I suddenly traveled through time, leaving me speechless...
I didn't like it, I didn't go into details about the time travel, and I didn't like the way the protagonist was portrayed. I can't stand watching the Heroes Convention. Abandoned
What the hell are you trying to persuade someone to quit in the first three chapters?













