At the Beginning of the Game, the Murong Family of Tianlong Will Fight Against All the Heavens

First, those who have read the original work have a rough idea of ​​where the opportunity lies for the protagonist to travel through Tianlong, such as Wuliang Mountain (even if Li Qiushui has a trap), Deaf-mute Valley, etc. Moreover, the protagonist also has basic Murong family special skills that can be practiced. Whether you practice them along the way or improve them with golden fingers, you can always practice something. The result? Thanks to Zhang Boduan and the inheritance of Lu Zu, an ordinary modern person can think of himself as a genius after passing through time and space? I want to think about the golden elixir method, I want to cultivate immortality, it's funny, I haven't even practiced martial arts well, I just want to go so far, laugh to death, you don't just write about the world of Tianlong, superficial, arrogant, stupid, not many good qualities, the common superiority and self-deception of the time travelers is completely set up. . . Second, if you don't know how to describe feelings, don't write about them. It's so embarrassing. . . Third, in a place with spiritual consciousness and attracting attention, those small actions are really embarrassing. The clever tricks can occasionally promote the plot. If you write too much, it will be forced to surrender. . . Finally, the protagonist travels through the heavens. Later, you can set how powerful the protagonist is, whether it is a fusion technique or any innovation! However, can we forget about being first, second and third? In this initial world, we just want to live forever and fly into the sky to escape from the earth every day? This is funny! In the Zhuxian world, there are immortal methods to practice, but you still want to lay the foundation for Tianlong's method? To get in shape? Fusion? Change? What a big heart and no brains! Only a few worlds? Is there nothing left? The protagonist is so powerful. In Tianlong, he helps the world to upgrade. Here, he is delusional and funny.

I don't know how to do anything, I want everything, I obviously have a golden finger, but I act like a fool and don't know how to study the function of the golden finger. Even the founder of alchemy can't teach me, and I don't know how I survived decades in my previous life? Like a fool

I give it up, it's really not good to watch, the writing and plot look like it was written by a second or third grade elementary school student, yet people are still paying to read it! !

Is it possible for a human to write this kind of novel? It's like a clown🤡 The most useless protagonist and the most unintelligent time traveler. Dog poison.

I didn't even read Tianlong or Zhuxian, so I jumped directly to one person. It gave me the feeling that if you can't write well, don't write and waste time. In the first two worlds, not only to become a boss, you must at least have the ability to compete with the bosses. As a result, I was so controlled that I didn't even dare to say anything.

The protagonist is not smart but does not know it. This is the root cause of the protagonist's frustration.

I feel like the protagonist was okay in the first few chapters, but why did he suddenly become romantic again in the prehistoric era? It's normal to be rich and infatuated when you first arrived in Tianlong. Zhu Xian devoted himself to the road to find Lu Xueqi as his Taoist companion. The exchange of lives was so unforgettable that the person behind him and the fox demon all missed Lu Xueqi. But in the prehistoric era, why did you suddenly become infatuated again? Don't you feel sorry for Lu Xueqi anymore?

Nothing, nothing, nothing, nothing, nothing, nothing, speechless

What did you write? Too rubbish, right? Learn from this, learn from that, at what age do you start learning, and after more than ten years of learning, you are still a person who cannot even beat Murong Fu? Why travel through time?

The protagonist is really a disaster