
Mortal's Beginning Becoming Doctor Mo
by Boy Coding
About This Novel
Traveling into the legend of a mortal cultivating immortality, he became the master of the protagonist Han Li's Qixuan Sect, Doctor Mo! And he had just made the protagonist Han Li's good friend Zhang Tie into a puppet! How to play this? And the ghost Yu Zitong in me is still thinking about plotting to seize the body! Giant Mo looked at the wary Han Li in front of him and expressed that he was really panicked! I'm afraid that Han Li, who carries the aura of the protagonist, will kill him! Fortunately, when I traveled through time, I brought a plot supplement system with me. So... Giant Mo took the protagonist Han Li and began to manifest his saintship in the world of immortality! PS: Pay tribute to Wangyu, pay tribute to "The Story of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". This is a story written from a mortal to a Taoist ancestor. The update time will be very long. Readers can read it with confidence (fifty-seven chapters are gradually getting better, and one hundred chapters have entered the main text!) Book Friends QQ Group: 1061229316 [Qidian Official Authorized Fan Fiction] [Signed "Yuewen Group Works Collaboration Authorization Agreement"]
What Readers Think
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Official(34)Scraped 1mo ago
Writing is okay
There are very few people writing fan fiction about mortals cultivating immortality, and I've barely seen a few of them. You're the best writer, come on. If there are more updates in the future, you will be indispensable for rewarding and voting.
water
It's not just ordinary water. It's like reading the background story. There's too little main line.
It's poisonous
Author, why do you have so many backgrounds? We read the plot, not the background. After watching it for most of the day, I watched a bunch of useless plots! We are looking at the protagonist, not the other backgrounds. Just one or two, there are a lot of backgrounds. Others are water, but you are always the sea.
Already a eunuch
Damn it, this author couldn't see clearly what he was reading when he was watching "Mortal Immortal Transformation", and I saw that many people said that Han Li was very mentally retarded and naive in the early stage. Whoever said a good word about him left happy tears and moved tears because of concern. I have also read Immortal Transformation, although I haven't finished it, but Han Li was not so retarded in the early stage. Although the word "retarded" does not sound good, I really can't think of anything else that is more in line with what this author wrote in the early stage of this book.
Author, the biggest mistake in your book is to let Han Li take over.
Have you ever seen a person who didn't inherit his memory? Not all of them, but at least I can remember some of them. You must know that in the original work, Han Li knew the plot when his body was taken away.
Hahahaha, this Doctor Cheng Mo is interesting😂, and Han Li, Cheng Daluo, is looking at you😱
Very good
It feels good, better than recommended, the plot is okay, I hope you won't stop updating it, come on! There are only a few excellent grassroots authors.
New book "Ten Star Gods"
I'll hang my head on this one for now. Write a new book for a change. Take a look if you are interested~
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Community(0)
Official(34)Scraped 1mo ago
Writing is okay
There are very few people writing fan fiction about mortals cultivating immortality, and I've barely seen a few of them. You're the best writer, come on. If there are more updates in the future, you will be indispensable for rewarding and voting.
water
It's not just ordinary water. It's like reading the background story. There's too little main line.
It's poisonous
Author, why do you have so many backgrounds? We read the plot, not the background. After watching it for most of the day, I watched a bunch of useless plots! We are looking at the protagonist, not the other backgrounds. Just one or two, there are a lot of backgrounds. Others are water, but you are always the sea.
Already a eunuch
Damn it, this author couldn't see clearly what he was reading when he was watching "Mortal Immortal Transformation", and I saw that many people said that Han Li was very mentally retarded and naive in the early stage. Whoever said a good word about him left happy tears and moved tears because of concern. I have also read Immortal Transformation, although I haven't finished it, but Han Li was not so retarded in the early stage. Although the word "retarded" does not sound good, I really can't think of anything else that is more in line with what this author wrote in the early stage of this book.
Author, the biggest mistake in your book is to let Han Li take over.
Have you ever seen a person who didn't inherit his memory? Not all of them, but at least I can remember some of them. You must know that in the original work, Han Li knew the plot when his body was taken away.
Hahahaha, this Doctor Cheng Mo is interesting😂, and Han Li, Cheng Daluo, is looking at you😱
Very good
It feels good, better than recommended, the plot is okay, I hope you won't stop updating it, come on! There are only a few excellent grassroots authors.
New book "Ten Star Gods"
I'll hang my head on this one for now. Write a new book for a change. Take a look if you are interested~













