Mortal: Immortal Road to Immortality
by The Name Cannot Be Simplified
About This Novel
Mortals cultivate immortality and change their destiny against heaven. Reincarnated into the world of mortals cultivating immortals, Qin Zhuang realized the difficulty of cultivation. Fortunately, God was kind to him. Although he didn't let him pick up the Heaven Palm Vase, it also gave him an unexpected surprise. The story begins with Qin Zhuang snatching a mysterious mirror...
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Official(20)Scraped 2d ago
This is not a cool article, so read it carefully!
You have been frustrated along the way, and the cutest female apprentice has been written to death, which is even worse than the protagonist Han Li. You might as well write a new book instead of writing a fan novel. What is the point of being a fan of yours?
Not only is there such a thing as erysipelas, there is also a golden elixir that can search for souls
If you want to cultivate immortality, you should cultivate immortality. I have always had some lustful thoughts and some not. Not interesting. . .
Too much bullshit. If you are still in the golden elixir stage, you should consider the matter of Daozu. If you have other big tricks, you can ignore the small bottle, but you only have a mirror that doesn't know the depth, and you still have inner demons and forcefully make up the plot.
The writing is good, but the various props in the first few chapters are a bit ridiculous, and have their own consciousness, and are very weak, or very tasteless, weak golden fingers. It is probably to have an original heroine, not to moisturize the sea of stars, the routine of being afraid of Han Tianzun, shouting about cause and effect, almost like a eunuch protagonist, stopping at talking and reminiscing about the past.
I have an idea, not bad
The writing is pretty good, it has its own ideas, and it's fine as long as it doesn't conform to the same stereotypes of ordinary people, especially the disgusting harem and the constant conflicts with the original work.
This novel feels like it was written for myself, not to make money. I don't even know the basic settings, and the plot has nothing to do with ordinary people. It feels like a plot from more than ten years ago.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Too much bullshit and you have to explain yourself
Hi, the mobile phone number of last season is mine and not.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(20)Scraped 2d ago
This is not a cool article, so read it carefully!
You have been frustrated along the way, and the cutest female apprentice has been written to death, which is even worse than the protagonist Han Li. You might as well write a new book instead of writing a fan novel. What is the point of being a fan of yours?
Not only is there such a thing as erysipelas, there is also a golden elixir that can search for souls
If you want to cultivate immortality, you should cultivate immortality. I have always had some lustful thoughts and some not. Not interesting. . .
Too much bullshit. If you are still in the golden elixir stage, you should consider the matter of Daozu. If you have other big tricks, you can ignore the small bottle, but you only have a mirror that doesn't know the depth, and you still have inner demons and forcefully make up the plot.
The writing is good, but the various props in the first few chapters are a bit ridiculous, and have their own consciousness, and are very weak, or very tasteless, weak golden fingers. It is probably to have an original heroine, not to moisturize the sea of stars, the routine of being afraid of Han Tianzun, shouting about cause and effect, almost like a eunuch protagonist, stopping at talking and reminiscing about the past.
I have an idea, not bad
The writing is pretty good, it has its own ideas, and it's fine as long as it doesn't conform to the same stereotypes of ordinary people, especially the disgusting harem and the constant conflicts with the original work.
This novel feels like it was written for myself, not to make money. I don't even know the basic settings, and the plot has nothing to do with ordinary people. It feels like a plot from more than ten years ago.
There is no system that I like, it must be given a five-star rating
I don't like systematic reasons, the protagonist is like a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly.
Too much bullshit and you have to explain yourself
Hi, the mobile phone number of last season is mine and not.
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