Mortal: Immortal Road to Immortality

You have been frustrated along the way, and the cutest female apprentice has been written to death, which is even worse than the protagonist Han Li. You might as well write a new book instead of writing a fan novel. What is the point of being a fan of yours?

Not only is there such a thing as erysipelas, there is also a golden elixir that can search for souls

The writing is at the top of the list for novels. Generally speaking, I can accept it even if I change the settings a bit. There is logic, and the plot follows the logic and there is nothing wrong with it. If you want to become an immortal, just cultivate it well. The protagonist should be made to have ideals and beliefs, and he must reform and cultivate immortality for the sake of his beliefs. Realm, you want to take the public examination, you want to poke fun at all the sect monks who have families, why the sect monks from the cultivating family are not worthy of being your fellow disciples, it's just wrong to go up and kick you without offending you, after looking at it for a long time, it does smell like that As I got better and better, I started to feel something was not right. I had the symptom of changing from a pleasant article to a disgusting article. I took the time to read other people's comments. I would like to thank the reader who spoiled the story about the death of Narcissus and let me get out in time. Otherwise, I would really scold my mother. The author is I'm a bit of a literary youth, and I feel it, but the difference is that this author is very hidden, tricking people into killing him. I originally wanted to trick more brothers into joining in to be disgusted, but when I thought about it, I felt unhappy if the book's rating was too high, so I helped the brothers who read the comments first.

Too much bullshit. If you are still in the golden elixir stage, you should consider the matter of Daozu. If you have other big tricks, you can ignore the small bottle, but you only have a mirror that doesn't know the depth, and you still have inner demons and forcefully make up the plot.

If you want to cultivate immortality, you should cultivate immortality. I have always had some lustful thoughts and some not. Not interesting. . .

This novel feels like it was written for myself, not to make money. I don't even know the basic settings, and the plot has nothing to do with ordinary people. It feels like a plot from more than ten years ago.

The beginning was okay. The back is simply garbage among garbage.

This book is more disgusting than some nanny articles😐😐😐😐

The writing is good, but the various props in the first few chapters are a bit ridiculous, and have their own consciousness, and are very weak, or very tasteless, weak golden fingers. It is probably to have an original heroine, not to moisturize the sea of ​​stars, the routine of being afraid of Han Tianzun, shouting about cause and effect, almost like a eunuch protagonist, stopping at talking and reminiscing about the past.

The writing is pretty good, it has its own ideas, and it's fine as long as it doesn't conform to the same stereotypes of ordinary people, especially the disgusting harem and the constant conflicts with the original work.