
Mortal: Beginning from the Chaotic Sea of stars to Become the Taoist of Immortality
by Prison Song
About This Novel
Li Ran traveled to the mortal world and became a disciple of Man Beard. He relied on his destiny to practice Taoism for many years, and finally ascended to the fairy world and gained true immortality!
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There is a female cultivator named Bai Suyuan in the True Immortal Realm. She possesses the Yuehua Immortal Body and has innately awakened seven Immortal Apertures. She has cultivated to the True Immortal stage and opened the seventh Immortal Aperture without any bottlenecks. She is in the late stage of becoming a god at the age of fifty and breaks through to the True Immortal at the age of a thousand. Han Li became a True Immortal only after he was more than 10,000 years old. He has become a younger brother to this plug-in palm sky bottle without bottlenecks.
As plain as water. Skipping and rewinding does not affect reading.
Not bad, not bad. It looks good. I love watching it. I hope to take in Mei Yi, Song Yu, and Barbarian Beard in the future. Let's see if we can take him to ascend with him. Qing Yizi is also good. If something happens, he will really do it. Come on, author!
It looks good, but there are no six paths behind it. Xuan Gu, Mrs. Wen, please come to Tiannan.
The current few chapters are a bit confusing. For example, if you don't understand the prices in Tianxing City, you can simply write that you have inquired about it beforehand, and you can ask about the price in a serious manner, and the one-on-one answer seems to be very weak. One is the living ring, and then the teleportation array, or you can write it down and see how other people operate it, so you have an idea. Questions like this can be dealt with in one sentence. After all, it is not recommended to write down the facts in such detail in fan fiction. As for why I ask these questions, because these have been described to some extent in novels or animations, there is no need to repeat such trivial matters. Of course, this is my personal opinion.
Doesn't the protagonist have any other golden fingers besides having no bottleneck?
It's not enough. When will we update it? Or what is the main character's magic weapon?
It's okay, I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, please give it a try, author.
It's good to write from Chaotic Star Sea, at least there's not a bunch of people there, like Little Green Ping, Nangong Wan and the like. . . .
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Official(13)Scraped 2d ago
There is a female cultivator named Bai Suyuan in the True Immortal Realm. She possesses the Yuehua Immortal Body and has innately awakened seven Immortal Apertures. She has cultivated to the True Immortal stage and opened the seventh Immortal Aperture without any bottlenecks. She is in the late stage of becoming a god at the age of fifty and breaks through to the True Immortal at the age of a thousand. Han Li became a True Immortal only after he was more than 10,000 years old. He has become a younger brother to this plug-in palm sky bottle without bottlenecks.
As plain as water. Skipping and rewinding does not affect reading.
Not bad, not bad. It looks good. I love watching it. I hope to take in Mei Yi, Song Yu, and Barbarian Beard in the future. Let's see if we can take him to ascend with him. Qing Yizi is also good. If something happens, he will really do it. Come on, author!
It looks good, but there are no six paths behind it. Xuan Gu, Mrs. Wen, please come to Tiannan.
The current few chapters are a bit confusing. For example, if you don't understand the prices in Tianxing City, you can simply write that you have inquired about it beforehand, and you can ask about the price in a serious manner, and the one-on-one answer seems to be very weak. One is the living ring, and then the teleportation array, or you can write it down and see how other people operate it, so you have an idea. Questions like this can be dealt with in one sentence. After all, it is not recommended to write down the facts in such detail in fan fiction. As for why I ask these questions, because these have been described to some extent in novels or animations, there is no need to repeat such trivial matters. Of course, this is my personal opinion.
Doesn't the protagonist have any other golden fingers besides having no bottleneck?
It's not enough. When will we update it? Or what is the main character's magic weapon?
It's okay, I haven't seen any poisonous points so far, please give it a try, author.
It's good to write from Chaotic Star Sea, at least there's not a bunch of people there, like Little Green Ping, Nangong Wan and the like. . . .









