Cultivation: the Longer You Live, the Better Your Talent!

Originally, the writing was okay at first, but when I entered the city, I started to write randomly. Shouldn't it be better for the protagonist to go to the mountains and become a bandit in this hellish start? Okay, you go into town and buy steamed buns with copper? Do you want to read what you are writing? A group of villagers whose families were affected by the disaster can no longer survive, right? How can they still have money to give these children if they send them away? Tens or hundreds of coppers? Okay, you can give it as you say. After the protagonist came out of that tiger, he spent money to find a place to live, and spent money to buy a bow. [Emot=default,02/] A group of 10-year-old children running around in an ancient city? The protagonist also pulls people's heads to teach them how to bow? Do you want to hear what you wrote is a crazy thing? I've read thousands of books about this plot, and it didn't even make me lose my mind in the first dozen chapters.

A child who was sold returned home after a successful career and worked hard to provide a good life for his family. His brother engaged in prostitution and took dozens of concubines. His father, who was 70 years old, still played with women, gave birth to children, and raised his brother and a large family. How could a disgusting person, a time traveler, have such abundant emotions?

After reading it, I went to the comment section and found that no one liked it very much. The main reason is that the protagonist's life is too miserable. He was deceived when he went to the town. He had an income (bow skill) and was oppressed by the land. After finding a piece of land to cooperate with and stabilized, he was also oppressed by a gang (Sanhua Gang). After being oppressed by the gang, he was admitted as a child student. Before the examination, he refused to be recruited by the upper-class family ( Recruiting the protagonist as an archery instructor), being oppressed (alienated, ostracized) by the upper-level families in the team, being oppressed by the officialdom (taking sides) after passing the Juren exam, switching to martial arts, there seems to be no particularly difficult plot, after being promoted to immortal, he went to the fairy world, and was intercepted by the foundation-building boss at the beginning. I found that my wife was also squeezed out by the shanmen. She found a place to live, and was kicked out again. Then I took the alchemy certificate test and joined the alchemy sect. There was an internal split. The protagonist did not stand up and was squeezed out. Dozens of tasks were given every month to suppress the protagonist. Later, he defected to the splinter group. I went to the Dan Sect. There was a competition between the two sects for the position of successor. The protagonist passed, but was hacked again. The position was replaced and given to another opponent. He was completely tortured. The protagonist found a way out and wanted to go to the big sect (Tai Xuan Sect), but he was also rejected. He was rejected two or three times. In just 200 chapters, the protagonist has gone through a lot of hardships. In general, the protagonist in a cool novel will become rich after being abused, and will abuse him back severely to express his previous depression and make people feel comfortable. Most of the time in this book, the protagonist values ​​peace and will not exclude his previous opponents. The only one the protagonist actually killed in this book is the Zhu family, which has not yet been destroyed. But it doesn't stop me from liking this book very much. What I saw was that the protagonist was born in a humble age, with no background and no resources. He relied on archery skills to survive in a small town. If he had income, he would be jealous of others, so he found a backer and had land, but later the land did not have enough backers. , So he found a gang, but the gang's backing was not enough, so he became a child student. The officialdom was dark, and ordinary people could not afford to pay tuition fees from child students to civil servants. The protagonist became famous in one fell swoop through the lantern festival. He solved all the lanterns on the boat in two days and became the well-deserved Lu Jieyuan (number one scholar). The list was opened three days later, and the imperial court was forced to give the place to him under pressure (the candidate was appointed by default, but the protagonist's reputation was huge at the time, and everyone thought he was a well-deserved number one. If he was given the title to someone else, the reactionaries would use it to rebel, so the protagonist was given to An Tianxia) The abuse of the protagonist is a game between the interests of all parties, and the protagonist's fame is also a game between the interests of all parties. The intrigue of the interests of all parties is very exciting. The protagonist's mentality is also very positive, with no complaints or anger, and peace is the most important thing. His wife wants to quit the sect and needs to pay 30,000 yuan in tuition fees (she is not allowed to leave). Later, when the money is collected, she doesn't have to pay (not having to pay means that this person is a useless person in the sect = humiliation). Normal people are often ashamed when faced with humiliation and lack of ability. At that time, the protagonist saw the bright side of things and saved at least 30,000 yuan (this mentality is very righteous, I like this mentality very much, I believe that I will be able to get back the situation in the future), if it is a normal cool story, the protagonist will be very angry, and then directly fight back, with the help of cheats, the sect will kneel down and beg for mercy. This is another kind of cool story, I also like it. When faced with the Dan Sect's business volume that far exceeds that of normal people in a month, the protagonist can see that he can learn more things, and only leaves when he can't learn anything new, turning frustration into his own growth. I like this mentality very much. Generally speaking, I like this book very much, so I wrote a review for everyone's reference. When I read this book, I saw that the protagonist faced various difficulties and setbacks and overcame them with his own efforts. After overcoming them, he did not bully others. He still valued peace and developed himself. The bustle of the world is all for profit, the bustle of the world is all for gain, human beings are wise in the world, and it is not just a man who is angry and has blood splashing ten steps, but strives for strength, and peace is the most precious thing. Mortal enemies are because the interests are ultimately irreconcilable, so they must be eradicated (Zhu Family) A book can be seen from different angles. There are 1,000 Hamlets in the hearts of 1,000 readers. Only if you like this book will you know if you have read it.[Emot=default,64/]

How should I put it? The author's ideals are very full, but the reality is very skinny. In a novel about rebirth of immortality, if it is in a sect of cultivation, it would make sense if the protagonist's IQ is online and he can lead the children to progress together and take care of him. But the author wrote the mortal chapter in such a miserable and hierarchical dynasty background. The protagonist has no background resources and only relies on gold fingers. How can he have so many energy resources to take care of the progress of the boys in the same village? There is also an emotional scene with the heroine Pumpkin. During the process of the protagonist's examination for merit, other wealthy officials, nobles, nobles and landlords look down on the protagonist? Don't have the resources? Forcibly showing the protagonist's full emotional bond? Overall, the plot in the later stages is really unsatisfactory. With such a big background laid out in the early stage, and the God stepping on the horse and sending wisdom to force the children to play house in the later stage, Shui De thought it was writing a historical novel, and cultivating immortals was like child's play.

The plot is procrastinating and extremely toxic. The protagonist has absolutely no thought circuit as a normal person. It's just like the kind of forceful intelligence reduction after time travel. It's poisonous. Don't watch it, brothers. Listen to others and eat enough.

Are you a fool? You've traveled through time, and you can't even catch fish? ? ? I'm really speechless,

Even if you suppress the protagonist, there is no need to suppress him like this, right? Ever since the protagonist started to practice Qi, it has never happened once. Are you disgusting? You can still be like this with cheats. I thought you were writing about passers-by A, B, C and D.

It's extremely poisonous. Let's not talk about the rubbish above. Once in the spirit world, a foundation builder actually wants to force the two protagonists' old lady friends to be concubines. This is really forceful. Even the empress who is traveling with her has taken a fancy to two mortal rubbish old ladies.

Well, in fact, the most painful part of all immortality stories is the junction between the mortal chapter and the immortality chapter. Once you get into cultivating immortals, a lot of the chapters start to become clichéd and not as interesting as for mortals. The previous efforts made in the mortal chapter could not even reach the level of the immortal chapter. This makes readers uncomfortable. I hope the author can handle it well.

After reading three chapters, I found that the protagonist is an idiot. One bone is usually used for martial arts training. Does the protagonist want to use it for studying? 2. The protagonist's family doesn't even have enough to eat and they still study? Poor writing doesn't mean you don't have enough to eat.