Xiu Xian: When You Do Things to the Extreme

I deleted the original text and re-edited it. No matter what, this book is a very good source of food. The flaw is that the heroine and the plot are single. I think Lingbao and Tongyi can be written, but it cannot take up too much space, because if you write about Unity and Lingbao Mecha over and over again, it will only make people feel aesthetic fatigue. Also, the heroine has given me the feeling of being very awkward since the first heroine. The heroine is rarely described, but I think it is unreasonable to live and die with the protagonist whenever something happens. If you say that the heroine is willing to die for the protagonist because of her admiration and kindness, I will believe it. Because the heroine and the hero have almost no emotional scenes with each other and they can't let go of each other. I think it is unreasonable because the heroine is just a passerby to the protagonist. Let's talk about the issue of mechas in the fantasy world. The original intention of Lingbao is a kind of care for the younger ones from the seniors. They don't want them to die on the way to pursue the road due to accidents. It is also a tool for protecting the road and a weapon to explain one's own principles and principles in advance. It is not a necessity on one's own path. What I want to say is that not every world has to go to technology. You can write about the impact of the improvement of other protagonists' skills on the world. Under the influence of the influence, you can discover your own secrets, or use your own five internal organs to connect the heaven, earth, mountains and rivers, improve your own bloodline and merge with other bloodlines to make yourself stronger. These are all possible because in these fantasy worlds, you can break through the mirror and soar to understand the Tao. Some people can be reborn directly with the help of a trace of soul or a drop of blood. Every time a world ends, don't you find it boring to write about the unification of spiritual treasures? (Secondly, if you think that what I said about merging bloodlines is bullshit, just pretend that I didn't say the above)

It was fine at the beginning, but it became more and more confusing later on. For example, the recent description of a five-element magic weapon, whether it is refining or using, was repeated over and over again. Then there was often a question mark or an exclamation mark in one sentence. There are also countless emotions about the realm skill magic weapon mecha. If you think about it in this way, I will give the author a suggestion. For example, one hundred thousand mechas are made up of one hundred thousand magic weapons. Why don't you just introduce the name and function of each magic weapon? How many words does a magic weapon have? It's not easy to write millions of words

A dream butterfly is stuck in a dream and can't come out. There are 10 chapters in the main world and 50 chapters in the dream. It can't be said to be bad. It just feels a bit like going out to the main god space to upgrade the world.

***Weared it for 20 years. ***It will be like this in 100 years, garbage.

In the world of Taoism, hundreds of billions of people have jointly developed techniques for a thousand years, but they still haven't come up with the technique of transforming into gods. It's so fucked up that it's a dog's fault.

As someone who has been reading cool novels for 16 years, I felt so disconnected. I was skipping through it, and the more I read, the more confused I became. I even forgot who the male protagonist was. I downloaded the copy as soon as I downloaded it, and even put on a vest. Isn't that confusing enough? In summary, it is tasteless to eat and it is a pity to throw away the type, hay

The first hundred chapters are okay, but the rest is purely about water, just like Jue Wa. The author also gives reasons for his behavior, which is high-sounding.

You already have golden fingers, but you don't want to practice martial arts? It has been more than ten years since I awakened my past life memories. In the past ten years, I have only been fishing, eating, drinking, and drinking. Then I have a disguise, and I am so good at blindly practicing without being able to disguise myself. Don't you know how to practice martial arts blindly?

The latest world is too slow. The protagonist is re-cultivating after all, but it's not right that his cultivation is so slow. The main world would have cultivated to a higher level long ago if it had that time. Just mop it hard and water it hard.

The flood is flooding, it's too watery, please give me more.