My Clone is on the Other Side of the Starry Sky

I read ten chapters of this novel and then looked at the table of contents. Nowadays, novels always make pig's feet small. The author said that pig's feet started to be a businessman at the age of 12, and the common people could not survive the last years of the dynasty. How can you go into business if you can't even grow a hair? Pig's feet are farmers' children and they don't have money. Don't talk about how awesome modern people are. That's nonsense. Modern people's time travel is just for their knowledge. It's useless for you to have knowledge. It's okay if you are in your 20s when the pig's feet appear in the first chapter. After all, after more than 10 years of hard work, the last few chapters describe the pig's feet as being up to 17 years old. The logic is really bad.

First of all, the title of this book and the protagonist system are not consistent. It is a false accusation, because the system of this book is really insignificant. I originally thought that it was a clone helping the protagonist to practice. The result is a soul-piercing, eating jelly beans and swallowing the starry sky. The kind of planet theory Secondly, there are a lot of skips in the plot at the beginning, which leads to big problems in the logic of the plot created later. First, the protagonist is an ordinary person who traveled through time and is also the son of a farmer. How can he march and fight to manage the city? You said using the system? There is no system. It only controls other cultivation levels. Fighting and other battles are all the protagonist's own thoughts. This setting seems unreasonable to people who read it... Also, the system in this book is too watered down, which may have something to do with the setting at the beginning. It is nothing special except for helping the protagonist's cultivation speed In fact, the beginning of this book should not start with the rebels, but with the rebellion.

Do you, a time-traveler, have such a low imagination? It's okay if you don't know anything, but you can't even guess? When you write that the protagonist guesses what these things are, and then asks the aborigines questions, combine the above and below, then you can think for yourself, why do you always ask the aborigines to know what those things are?

In a world where great power belongs to oneself, one plays political tricks and sells dog meat. Moreover, your political strategy is not very good, let alone the brains of people with cultivation are many times stronger than ordinary people. Just for you, a time traveler (with a cultural and historical background of 5,000 years, and the protagonist has only worked hard in society for a few decades) to engage in intrigues with people who have lived for tens of thousands of years, it seems that there is something wrong with your brain. (Otherwise, why do you think those system novels are so popular? How can you compete with those old villains without cheating? To put it bluntly, if you are a loser in writing novels, if you really have any wisdom, you won't write novels here.) Secondly, the training system is also very boring, really boring. There is no feeling of immortality at all, only prostitution, robbery and killing.

I'm very angry. This author's works are always pretty good. It's reasonable to be honest about the protagonist's age, but it's hard for me to understand what kind of weapons he uses. Did someone maliciously leave a bad review?

It makes me sick at the beginning. If you write a magical western fantasy, it's okay at the beginning, but forget about fairy tales and martial arts. It's nondescript and disgusting.

What I wrote in the early stage is very speechless. I don't build the city myself, and let a group of insurrectionary troops work hard. Later, I focus on construction. The problem is that I am not the boss, and I don't have a good relationship with the boss. What's the point? After the blind guess, I will write about the city being taken away, the boss is dead, and I start to work alone. This routine is like taking off my pants and farting, and running into the crowd. It is brainless and embarrassing. The plot is messy. Can I write down what the protagonist wants to do? I knock here and there, and IQ crushes others everywhere. Looking at the results, it is thankless to just do my best.

The War of Ten Thousand Clans was the predecessor of the War of Three Clans. After countless years of fierce fighting among all the tribes in the world, only the three tribes of gods, ghosts and monsters were left. It was at least tens of thousands or even more than a hundred thousand years ago. In other words, the Emperor Tian at that time did not have the ability to suppress all races?

It's beautiful and exciting, with a hint of the Yellow Turban Uprising of the Three Kingdoms of the Eastern Han Dynasty. If you keep this style and writing style, it won't become a divine book but it will also become a fairy herb! Strongly recommend everyone to read, come on ✊ come on ✊ come on ✊

There are so many bad reviews, are they just fake? I feel that it's pretty good in every aspect, but the pace is a bit fast and not enough to read. I've reached the end after more than 500 chapters. It would be better to add more dungeons and plots.