
I Live Forever in Dayu
by Do You Want To Eat Sweet Potatoes?
About This Novel
How many lifetimes can it take to build a country with a humble body? As time goes by, mountains and rivers change, seas and fields change, but I remain unchanged. ... [Note: This book does not follow the "traditional stream of immortality cultivation". There will be no different immortality from the ordinary to the world of cultivation, giving readers a different reading experience. ]
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Official(24)Scraped 23d ago
The writing is very good, but it goes too far to describe the darkness
This book is very good, otherwise I wouldn't want to write a review. The author tried his best to describe darkness, and he really did it. But what shocks the heart countless times is not the darkness, but the fact that there are people in the darkness who do not merge into the darkness and even become light. Internet articles don't seek such high goals, but they don't end up in a dark place. In fact, it's right to describe the protagonist who has been living in obscurity. Living in troubled times and with the weakness of family members, being obedient is indeed a good choice. But the handling from Uncle Dashan's death to forcing Cai Sao to pay back the food was really rough. (First of all, let me talk about the same logical mistake that many novels like to make, which is to sentence others for crimes that have not happened. What does it mean? Just like in the article, Uncle Dashan came to steal things and hurt people with sharp weapons. The protagonist replied what would happen if I was not a warrior. But this assumption is not established. If the assumption is established, all laws must cancel the sentencing standards for completed crimes and attempted crimes. Therefore, it is generally not applicable in current law. We will not go into details here unless there are some extremely special circumstances...), And then the protagonist kills Uncle Dashan through his own influence, and then uses the "very reasonable" logic of "paying back debts, it is natural" to make Cai Sao repay the protagonist's food. To put it simply, it is just to shock the people in this alley. Is there any essential difference between the protagonist's approach and that of Brother Hu? No, through the influence of his own warrior, he beheaded Uncle Dashan, and then he knew that a woman who had no power to restrain a chicken, whose wife had just been beheaded, and who had two children had no food, yet asked for food with extremely reasonable reasons? Regardless of the modern mature legal system, even in the Qing Dynasty the law had relevant protective measures. At this time, the vegetable sister-in-law could postpone the return, that is, she would pay it back as soon as she had food. Taking a step back, I would like to ask readers who have carefully read these two chapters of the novel a question: If the plot is like this, there is really nothing the vegetable lady can do. The two children are about to starve to death, and the protagonist and a warrior are getting closer. Please ask yourself, does your conscience not hurt? Going back to the beginning, the author tried his best to describe darkness, and he did it. But what shocks the heart countless times is not the darkness, but the fact that there are people in the darkness who do not merge into the darkness and even become light. But it is a pity that in the author's description, the protagonist is already a member of the darkness, and he is just the same as Brother Tiger in the article. They are both weak bullying the weaker.
You, Sanniang, have described quite a lot.
I heard your plan of coveting other people's bodies in m78 Nebula?
I found a bug. I am a first-level divine warrior and I can't get started even if I practice a machete. Do I still need a modifier?
Author, can you please adopt my suggestion?
The author remembers that the protagonist's immortality has one of the abilities of paying tribulation points to rejuvenate and continue to age. So the author can let the protagonist choose how old he is to be rejuvenated. If possible, I thought of a cunning operation. Generally speaking, many trustworthy disciples of sects are raised from childhood or infancy. In that case, the protagonist can revert himself to a child and sneak into the sect. Moreover, when the protagonist encounters an unbeatable enemy and is chasing him, he can turn back into a child, so that he can avoid being chased by the enemy and even sneak attack the enemy.
Dear author, do you have any manuscripts saved? More updates? How many more updates
Update, update, author, update quickly
ha
Yes, Wen Chaogong's writing style and some literary background can be expected to be great. If it weren't for the bad times now, I could have become a great god directly after reading two books.
The writing is okay, not mindless.
It seems like very few people are watching. Author updates, I will follow up again
The subject matter is great, good luck to the author! I believe the author will make this book more and more exciting.
The beginning is a miserable history of suffering. The protagonist sees his family and Goldfinger. He is hopeful and motivated. In addition, it is a modern person who thinks about it and has no wisdom. This is very good. It is also very exciting even if it is slow-paced. I look forward to the follow-up development.
very good
The writing is either mindless, or there are too few words, which are not enough to read. I hope you don't have to collect them one after another, and don't write it like a stallion. That's fine.
What do you mean? If you don't want to write, it will be a mess. I spend money to read your book every day. This is how you repay the readers.
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Official(24)Scraped 23d ago
The writing is very good, but it goes too far to describe the darkness
This book is very good, otherwise I wouldn't want to write a review. The author tried his best to describe darkness, and he really did it. But what shocks the heart countless times is not the darkness, but the fact that there are people in the darkness who do not merge into the darkness and even become light. Internet articles don't seek such high goals, but they don't end up in a dark place. In fact, it's right to describe the protagonist who has been living in obscurity. Living in troubled times and with the weakness of family members, being obedient is indeed a good choice. But the handling from Uncle Dashan's death to forcing Cai Sao to pay back the food was really rough. (First of all, let me talk about the same logical mistake that many novels like to make, which is to sentence others for crimes that have not happened. What does it mean? Just like in the article, Uncle Dashan came to steal things and hurt people with sharp weapons. The protagonist replied what would happen if I was not a warrior. But this assumption is not established. If the assumption is established, all laws must cancel the sentencing standards for completed crimes and attempted crimes. Therefore, it is generally not applicable in current law. We will not go into details here unless there are some extremely special circumstances...), And then the protagonist kills Uncle Dashan through his own influence, and then uses the "very reasonable" logic of "paying back debts, it is natural" to make Cai Sao repay the protagonist's food. To put it simply, it is just to shock the people in this alley. Is there any essential difference between the protagonist's approach and that of Brother Hu? No, through the influence of his own warrior, he beheaded Uncle Dashan, and then he knew that a woman who had no power to restrain a chicken, whose wife had just been beheaded, and who had two children had no food, yet asked for food with extremely reasonable reasons? Regardless of the modern mature legal system, even in the Qing Dynasty the law had relevant protective measures. At this time, the vegetable sister-in-law could postpone the return, that is, she would pay it back as soon as she had food. Taking a step back, I would like to ask readers who have carefully read these two chapters of the novel a question: If the plot is like this, there is really nothing the vegetable lady can do. The two children are about to starve to death, and the protagonist and a warrior are getting closer. Please ask yourself, does your conscience not hurt? Going back to the beginning, the author tried his best to describe darkness, and he did it. But what shocks the heart countless times is not the darkness, but the fact that there are people in the darkness who do not merge into the darkness and even become light. But it is a pity that in the author's description, the protagonist is already a member of the darkness, and he is just the same as Brother Tiger in the article. They are both weak bullying the weaker.
You, Sanniang, have described quite a lot.
I heard your plan of coveting other people's bodies in m78 Nebula?
I found a bug. I am a first-level divine warrior and I can't get started even if I practice a machete. Do I still need a modifier?
Author, can you please adopt my suggestion?
The author remembers that the protagonist's immortality has one of the abilities of paying tribulation points to rejuvenate and continue to age. So the author can let the protagonist choose how old he is to be rejuvenated. If possible, I thought of a cunning operation. Generally speaking, many trustworthy disciples of sects are raised from childhood or infancy. In that case, the protagonist can revert himself to a child and sneak into the sect. Moreover, when the protagonist encounters an unbeatable enemy and is chasing him, he can turn back into a child, so that he can avoid being chased by the enemy and even sneak attack the enemy.
Dear author, do you have any manuscripts saved? More updates? How many more updates
Update, update, author, update quickly
ha
Yes, Wen Chaogong's writing style and some literary background can be expected to be great. If it weren't for the bad times now, I could have become a great god directly after reading two books.
The writing is okay, not mindless.
It seems like very few people are watching. Author updates, I will follow up again
The subject matter is great, good luck to the author! I believe the author will make this book more and more exciting.
The beginning is a miserable history of suffering. The protagonist sees his family and Goldfinger. He is hopeful and motivated. In addition, it is a modern person who thinks about it and has no wisdom. This is very good. It is also very exciting even if it is slow-paced. I look forward to the follow-up development.
very good
The writing is either mindless, or there are too few words, which are not enough to read. I hope you don't have to collect them one after another, and don't write it like a stallion. That's fine.
What do you mean? If you don't want to write, it will be a mess. I spend money to read your book every day. This is how you repay the readers.
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In another world, the protagonist Goldfinger obtains luck by surviving disasters and upgrades with extra points. The protagonist is relatively stable Recommended




Gou Daoliu's longevity essay is a masterpiece and worth reading!




Personal grass jelly (completely obtained - personal) Over the weekend, I read Sanjiang as a habit and was attracted by this book. I read it in one sitting. Gou Dao lives forever. But the author made a little innovation, that is, immortality is not passive, but active. You need to spend luck points, activate skills, and then rejuvenate. I think this is good. You don't have to hide around or put on makeup. When you get older, it's nice to refresh your look and you can grow old with your loved ones. The writing is mature, not like a newbie. ---- There is a system, calamity points, survive or avoid calamities, obtain, and then upgrade skills. ---- Reasonable, well versed in dog ways, ten in strength, seven hidden and three exposed, gray martial saint + dark blue plus points. Don't cause trouble, even a little cold-blooded. But he is also not weak-minded, calculating petty accounts, and will take action when his strength is overwhelmed (99% of the time). ---- I wrote about a good sister, and then started a few chapters about the daily life of a game of poker. It is outrageous to have the style of a courtyard house, with war and chaos, pig trotters going to the black market to sell medicine and buy food, and secretly eating them at home...




Average It's not a dark genre. The protagonist is a good scholar. He has two parents and a younger sister. The minor point is that he is better than the widow next door.













