Reincarnation

I had this experience with a grandson: At seven years old, you enter elementary school. On the day you entered school, you were bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. Thirteen years old, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the aura of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet "the strong ones in the junior high school realm. Even the weakest junior high school strong men, their strength is definitely not matchable by you. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy chips! It's so scary. So you make up your mind to enter the junior high school realm. At the age of sixteen, you have achieved the junior high school realm. Through years of study, Study hard. You no longer look down on your classmates at the same level. The usual high school level is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the realm of university. Those who fail will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Dao. It's almost difficult. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. In their eyes, your girlfriend who has been in love for four years is like an ant. The family promised your girlfriend to a young man from a big family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You only remembered that Lihua Daiyu had made a three-year appointment with you. You recalled the shame you experienced that day in elementary school. The veins on your hands were roaring. When I return, I will stain the sky with demonic blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you choose the Internet. From then on, you joined a big company and spent your time studying on the toilet. From then on, you discovered a shocking secret and started your own business. , Encountered dangerous situations. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. Three years later, the situation is calm, do you think he will come to the woman's home? At this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter. She had refused many blind dates arranged by her family in the past three years. Now she was almost at her limit. The sun was about to set. Is it just a disappointment? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's house. The mother-in-law's face turned slightly - - Change, their family has been in business for many years, but in the end it is just a small branch of the family. She has never forgotten the voice of Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, but this voice is different. Suddenly something came to mind, and his face turned pale. This is impossible. Even if I try hard for half my life, I can't do it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are all right. A man's voice came out. Suddenly, the house was silent. The mother-in-law asked cautiously where the residence was. The mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding. Needless to say, a year later, a man named Ma with glasses was riding. - A penguin visited. After some greetings, you were invited to enter the new map Zhengdao League (Internet Conference). When you entered, you found that there were about dozens of people present, and they all had unfathomable abilities. You could hear that I had no interest in money. I had not received a salary in a month. I was blind, and I didn't know whether it was beautiful or not. You couldn't help but be stunned when you recalled what you saw along the way.

It was fine in the past, but when you enter the sect in the third life, it becomes disgusting and illogical. The family members bully the common people at will. Dabi can also use foundation-building things. What will happen to the common people who grow up like this? ? ? The sect does not cultivate disciples, but cultivates enemies. When civilian disciples grow up, the first thing they do is to kill their family members. It would be good if the sect develops like this and does not get wiped out. What you wrote like this is logical, brother. You can bully civilians but there is a limit. Dabi cannot be more than one level above. Otherwise, it would be over if there was no direct family competition. Can't the eye talent of pig's feet be detected? If you continue to write novels like this, they will collapse. Ten years ago, novels were great if they were written like this. Now you can see the results for yourself.

I thought it was a mortal stream at first, then a trash stream, and later an infinite stream; the setting is confusing and complicated, the main plot is unclear, the branch plots are written randomly, and the character creation is too rigid; there is really no need for a behind-the-scenes destiny in the end. It feels like the author just writes whatever comes to mind, and he wants to cultivate immortality and play the infinite stream. The result is that nothing is written well. Alas, it's just like the new sky in a hundred generations, I feel a bit collapsed in the middle period, and then I just let myself go in the later period...

There is a problem. The protagonist has a family and their family is very good to him. They are willing to help and save money to bring food to help him practice. However, the protagonist has never shown any intention of helping his family. He gets meat and bones from hunting. If he can't eat them all, he sells them and doesn't give any of them to his family. Later, a pack of wolves attacks the village. The protagonist inquires about how many family members were killed by wolves the next day, and then ignores them. Aren't you afraid that his family members will die?

The setting in the first three chapters feels confusing to write and read! At the beginning, it is written that the protagonist is reincarnated to the age of 12 and awakens his memory, and there is no sense of time travel. Then the next paragraph writes that this is a reincarnation under the protagonist's independent control. Then I wrote that the protagonist has relied on the panel to farm for several years! Later, I said that the two skill slots on the panel are very precious, and you need to choose carefully. Then I wrote that these two skill slots can change skills at any time, and the removed skills will not disappear. The removed skills are just temporarily unable to rely on the panel to upgrade, and the skill effects are always effective. In this case, do you still need to choose carefully? Isn't this just about using whatever skills you want to master? Is there anything I need to be cautious about? Then follow the description of the skill training settings on the panel, and it becomes even more confusing to read! First, it is said that skills have two situations: "attainment" and "result". The higher the attainment, the faster the practice speed. The result is the level that the skill has reached (such as which level). This is not difficult to understand, but the author did not reflect this attainment (to put it bluntly, it is proficiency) on the panel. As a result, this level is not reflected on the panel. Then on the panel are the special effects of skill level and additional practice speed bonus. The question is, what does this skill level represent? I haven't read the following content, so I guess that this skill level is linked to the special effect of the practice speed bonus. For example, level 1 adds 20% to the practice speed. The higher the level, the better the bonus effect. But this is my guess, and it took me a while to figure it out, so I say it looks like the setting is messed up. It is better for the author to directly reflect the proficiency and level of the skills on the panel, and then mark the special effects of the skills later. In short, the expression will be clearer!

It doesn't feel any better to watch the depression, and after more than 200 chapters, I started to stream infinitely again, and the time police came out. I am reading a novel about cultivating immortals, right? The author also licked his face and said that most of the other novels about cultivating immortals were good at the front but not good at the back. As a result, your own novel was not so good at the front. I kept reading stupidly, hoping that the rest would be good. But suddenly two people who corrected world history came out and I was poisoned and died!

If the first life is a cultivator who prefers free living, then the second life will be an urban academy style. It can be understood that the style of Douluo Continent is similar. The first life is more free, and the second life is a team style. It is the same as the previous one, and there is nothing to see. There is no need to watch it from the second life on, it is the same old routine.

I was still somewhat interested in the first life, but the second life was really not that good. There was too much research in one period of Qi training, and the more I looked at it, the less interesting it became. I couldn't earn resources to improve my cultivation. If my cultivation level was high, I couldn't do research.

It's too confusing. I feel like the author wanted to write that everyone is a creator, but he himself applied things from Xiu Xian, so the writing was messy. It was too old to contain his own things, and it was not written well.

It's a pure brush. I really wonder where this 8.5 Came from.