Mortals Cultivate Immortality: Wang Yu Wears Books and Becomes the Taoist Ancestor of Reincarnation

Excellent product. The author has definitely studied the original work. Even the author, why do you suddenly have free meetings? The book I bought with money, if you compensate me with a few more copies, I will forgive you🐶

The protagonist does not have a little green bottle. What I want to see is the protagonist's more arduous path to seek truth, not Pang Hongfu, whose cultivation speed is no less than that of the original work. I want to see the real reincarnation of Han Li. Han Li couldn't get more foundation-building pills, couldn't build the foundation, and then used the Black Evil Cult to demonize the foundation. With the help of the seven sects, he obtained the extremely dazzling inheritance, killed people and took treasures, and was hunted down across the star sea. Because there was no thousand-year-old herb, I killed Qi and Xin, obtained their inheritance, and then studied hard on my own. For example, building a foundation at the age of 35, forming a core at the age of 170, and breaking through when stuck on the death line.

The book can still be read. It's just too unpleasant. There are batches that cannot be admitted. It seems that the protagonist is fake and noble. Small green tea like Zi Ling. It can only entertain people with sex. Be a concubine. Either you ignore her. Or penetrate her hard. Give her resources for free. Also wiped her butt. Too licking. Then I felt that Little Green Tea's character was not to my liking. Just do what is called parting ways. The resources are brought by strong winds. Is your job as a nanny for free? This doesn't penetrate her hard. Too turtle. Don't just test people's hearts at every turn. The human heart cannot stand the test. Whether the test results are good or bad is meaningless. Moreover, the criticism of female cultivators is not a scourge. Yuanyin is not poisonous either. Come early and enjoy early😓😓

It's well written, but I don't know why, but it just feels boring.

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The author's tone is not trivial, but it is not interesting. He seems to be interesting. What does this mean compared to the original text? It's depressing.

The author has read Yuan Ji, and his writing style is very good. He writes about various opportunities of Yuan Ji very... Well, he is very thoughtful! When I read this book, I felt very immersive and at the same time a little inconsistent. How should I put it? I just felt that everything the author wrote was too smooth. Many characters in the original book were inexplicably obedient, as if everyone was surrounding the protagonist. I feel that the author still changed some settings for the characters of Yuan Qi, and also It has some of the character traits of the characters in Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, but some of the author's own ideas have been added to it. I feel that the IQ of each character has dropped, but not too much. This makes it less mortal, and the feeling of the dark world of immortality is gone. I understand. Otherwise, I would not be able to write it at all. In fact, I don't understand why the author didn't write cheats or system plug-ins. In the world view of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, to be honest, I feel that even if the time traveler had foresight in the past, some opportunities may not be available. All the plans you write rely on the cooperation of others. What if someone else has a sly mind and discovers it, or has a dark heart, and is not so kind? In fact, there should be no need to write your book after the completion of the pill, because there are too many resources needed later, there are no plug-ins, and there is no vial of the original chopsticks. If you want to continue writing, the author must create some additional resources. It would feel inconsistent to create too many additional resources. Those of us who have read the original chopsticks cannot believe it. All the opportunities in the original book have hidden opportunities, and you can get them smoothly. In fact, saying that the pill is knotted is an exaggeration. Building a foundation is difficult, but what a coincidence. As soon as you enter the door, you can meet the ancestor of the pill formation, who is also the number one pill formation in the Yellow Maple Valley, and then you can admire you as a little Qi practitioner. How can it be such a coincidence? People originally set up that they don't like handsome male cultivators, so why do people give them a chance if they feel ordinary. The logic is not fluent. You are not a disciple of the pill formation, and you have not even built a foundation. To be honest, they will not go there for the foundation building pill. The author has always been so creative and hidden in opportunities. Can he replenish the resources of the original chopstick vial to become a god? What to do in the spiritual world? If it happens once or twice, it's fine. If it happens too much, it's really a drama. How can it still be considered human fiction? Why the Queen of Nascent Soul is boring is the inevitability of the author's setting. Nowadays, the Skyfall start, and the waste material flow setting are not popular anymore. I feel that you can't write well later. There is no point in bringing in more original opportunities. The sense of substitution will become weaker and weaker as you write. There is no vial, and there is no golden finger. It is true as you said at the beginning. Needless to say, how can Han Li do it without the vial in the Immortal World Chapter? I want to say It works, maybe there are many opportunities, but these opportunities have not been written. Under such conditions, if the original author Wangyu writes this fanfic, it probably won't have a sense of substitution. After all, 90% of people who read mortal fanfics want to read stories with vial timelines. In fact, there are still many people who don't recognize the fairyland chapter. If the author thinks it makes sense, you can consider it. I still suggest that the author re-open a new book. This one won't be so tiring to write if given a little cheating. In fact, the last one you wrote was quite good, but the third transformation of San Gong and Zhong Yuan were superfluous. Please pay attention to this poisonous point, and can you be more realistic about accepting female partners? There is no need to accept female supporting roles with poor qualifications and no golden fingers. Unless you explain at the beginning that they are only included for fun, other authors have no serious problems. I'm here for this book first. I'll see you next time, mortals. Finally, I hope that the author will get better and better, make more money, and be in good health.

The more I write, the better I get. I don't know how I got the high score.

It always feels like there is no little green bottle, but you have to open some new plug-ins for him, otherwise, to be honest. This is the case with Han Li. Without plug-ins, I would probably have to work hard to find resources, and I wouldn't be able to stop for a moment. It is impossible to shut down the country for decades at a time because the resources are simply not enough. At the same time, it is estimated that there will be a killing battle with more circles than cylinders. If there is no one behind you, you will probably fall sooner or later. Besides, you don't have as many resources to aid Han Li as you did to aid Han Li. How can you take orders and condense Nascent Soul so quickly? You can take those resources step by step. Slow down, you can't keep up with the times at all, and those resources are probably going to leave you. After all, Han Laomo took orders in the early 100s, and condensed the Nascent Soul in the early 200s. This is already cheating, but you are not cheating. I guess you can't do painting again, you are more than 500 years old. Condensation of Nascent Soul, not to mention various butterfly effects. Some of them you can't just copy the original works without any thought.

The greatest charm of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality lies in three aspects: first, the plot setting, second, the character of the protagonist, and third, the pursuit of truth that cannot be hindered by all difficulties and dangers. What you wrote on these three points is not outstanding. What is outstanding is that the timeline and data are carefully combined and the details are taken care of. However, it is of little significance...