My Projections Are All the Roots of the Holy Spirit
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Xu Jun awakens the golden finger that projects the other world. Name: Xu Jun Age: 7 years old Cultivation: Man and sword unite Talent: Holy body of swordsmanship, clear sword heart In the final exam of the martial arts course in the second year of high school, Xu Jun relied on his new understanding of the unity of man and sword to rise to the top of the class and the top three in grade. In the next year, he entered Xiantian, opened the gate of heaven, and transformed into an immortal! After the college entrance examination, a hundred swords formed a picture, a thousand swords formed a formation, and a generation of swordsmen rose to prominence. Huh? Every time you cross a big realm, is there another projection? Name: Xu Yi Age: 5 years old Cultivation: None Talent: Holy Body of Pixiu Name: None Age: 0 years old Cultivation: None Talent: Holy Body of Thunder, Wood Affinity I am the most talented person in the Immortal Alliance for tens of thousands of years. I am the best swordsman, the best thunder cultivator... Yes, I am the first person in history!
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Official(52)Scraped 2d ago
Chapter 71 says, "In order to solve the calamity cultivator during the Qi training period, even Jindan Zhenren will rush to take action, and will do divination, stargazing, and time retrieval regardless of the cost." As a result, in Chapter 75, in order to find the murderous demon cultivator, students in the innate realm are used as cannon fodder. The author really slaps himself in the face!
Overall average level
World view description: inferior Description of the protagonist: inferior (the protagonist is 18 years old and has no 18-year-old mentality, and the text is purely the protagonist's filthy and low-level inner monologue) Logic of the work: Inferior (the logic is extremely contradictory, is it suspected to be a cool article? First: for some reasons, it was said that it was not good for the Natural Academy to draw the pie, but later because of the resources that the other two academies could provide, they ran to be a dog for the Natural Academy) The intersection between the protagonist's emotions and the characters in the text: extremely poor Plot description: Poor (rigid plot triggers, unbearable horror, poor background description)
In fact, the beginning is okay, and I have read more than 300 chapters. Then I directly bought all the remaining chapters. Tmd Then I started writing about the female protagonist, and I almost vomited while reading it. You can write about a female protagonist, but when you write about a male protagonist, he turns out to be a dog-licker. The agreement signed before in the secret realm is winner-takes-all. ***If the female protagonist loses, the male protagonist will have to beat up the one who wins. What a bloody plot, I will vomit directly after watching it. It's so disgusting, it's still an old author.
Decreasing intelligence, no brains
He is obviously the protagonist, but he has to create a sense of deja vu as a brainless villain.
An author who is more than 20 years old can definitely read what he writes, and the word count and update quality are guaranteed to a certain extent, but it is still readable. . . It's just too cliched and too old-fashioned. . . That way we can keep up with the trends four or five years ago.
Not good. Can you help dad? Can you help dad? Goodbye.
I was embarrassed by the settings. The description was meaningless. The sword ring sounded once and twice. I really couldn't understand it. Can you pretend to be a master just by holding a speaker?
It's not as good as a running text, it's a mess, and the reading experience is terrible.
I'm running out of books, and I can't bear to read Chapter 28. Can you make an outline before writing a book? Damn, I can tolerate other poorly written ones, but your protagonist feels like a pure villain, and in terms of combat power, only the principal is innate, and the main character in the competition only has two innate talents from the past. As a result, your school appears again. Do you think the readers all have elementary school experience or something? It was so poisonous that I came out of the water and sprayed it.
There are no comments, how can you have the motivation to write more than 1 million words?
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Official(52)Scraped 2d ago
Chapter 71 says, "In order to solve the calamity cultivator during the Qi training period, even Jindan Zhenren will rush to take action, and will do divination, stargazing, and time retrieval regardless of the cost." As a result, in Chapter 75, in order to find the murderous demon cultivator, students in the innate realm are used as cannon fodder. The author really slaps himself in the face!
Overall average level
World view description: inferior Description of the protagonist: inferior (the protagonist is 18 years old and has no 18-year-old mentality, and the text is purely the protagonist's filthy and low-level inner monologue) Logic of the work: Inferior (the logic is extremely contradictory, is it suspected to be a cool article? First: for some reasons, it was said that it was not good for the Natural Academy to draw the pie, but later because of the resources that the other two academies could provide, they ran to be a dog for the Natural Academy) The intersection between the protagonist's emotions and the characters in the text: extremely poor Plot description: Poor (rigid plot triggers, unbearable horror, poor background description)
In fact, the beginning is okay, and I have read more than 300 chapters. Then I directly bought all the remaining chapters. Tmd Then I started writing about the female protagonist, and I almost vomited while reading it. You can write about a female protagonist, but when you write about a male protagonist, he turns out to be a dog-licker. The agreement signed before in the secret realm is winner-takes-all. ***If the female protagonist loses, the male protagonist will have to beat up the one who wins. What a bloody plot, I will vomit directly after watching it. It's so disgusting, it's still an old author.
Decreasing intelligence, no brains
He is obviously the protagonist, but he has to create a sense of deja vu as a brainless villain.
An author who is more than 20 years old can definitely read what he writes, and the word count and update quality are guaranteed to a certain extent, but it is still readable. . . It's just too cliched and too old-fashioned. . . That way we can keep up with the trends four or five years ago.
Not good. Can you help dad? Can you help dad? Goodbye.
I was embarrassed by the settings. The description was meaningless. The sword ring sounded once and twice. I really couldn't understand it. Can you pretend to be a master just by holding a speaker?
It's not as good as a running text, it's a mess, and the reading experience is terrible.
I'm running out of books, and I can't bear to read Chapter 28. Can you make an outline before writing a book? Damn, I can tolerate other poorly written ones, but your protagonist feels like a pure villain, and in terms of combat power, only the principal is innate, and the main character in the competition only has two innate talents from the past. As a result, your school appears again. Do you think the readers all have elementary school experience or something? It was so poisonous that I came out of the water and sprayed it.
There are no comments, how can you have the motivation to write more than 1 million words?
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💛Grain and grass I didn't expect it to be a new book by a great god. I think, don't read this book at the request of a great god. Then it is just food and fodder. If you look at it from the perspective of a great god, be benevolent and wise.
If you don't expect too much, I saw it on the shelf and just looked at the story and writing. It's actually okay. It's a good solid food. Genius invincible flow, multiple small world genius projections, golden fingers are very strong, and the rhythm is okay
In fact, this subject matter is difficult to write about, but the author's previous writing was okay. After it was published, it became more popular, especially the setting of Sword Cry. It seemed to be a setting that could improve the world view, but in the end it turned into a failure. It is difficult to explain.
Very invincible and a lot of fun. I am the most talented person in the Immortal Alliance for tens of thousands of years. I am the best swordsman, the best thunder cultivator... Yes, I am the first person in history!
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