I Use My Supernatural Power to Prove Immortality

The protagonist traveled through time and was brainwashed by his own emotions. He has always been the one being exploited. He has been squeezed out and has a sense of identity. The outside world is not good. This is true. It is also true that your family is bad. It is worse than bad, right? As the one who was cultivated, it is normal for you to have a sense of identity. As the one who is oppressed, you have developed a sense of identity. Absolutely, it does not mean that you are a villain, but the family has nothing to invest in you except the exercises. Even the exercises were contributed by your parents. Your parents are also the ones who are oppressed, so why do you identify with it inexplicably? It's not the family that needs you, it's you that needs the family. Are you out of your mind? Without you working as part-time workers, your ancestor would take over the pills and your uncle would prepare to rent a foundation. Don't you think about who provided their resources? Those masters who concentrate on cultivation and don't care about worldly affairs, their resources come out of the ground, right?

How is the writing? I won't comment, but the image and personality of the protagonist in this film are very failed, and they all rely on golden fingers to lead them away. In a world of cultivation of personal power, even if it is not this kind of world, it is similar to reality, the character of the protagonist can only be said to be terrible. The first point is that the protagonist in the article is portrayed as an ascetic cultivator at the beginning, and there is a brother in his family with better qualifications than him, and then his family basically focuses their resources on training his brother. The protagonist expresses understanding. These may seem like nothing, but the reality is that the protagonist's cultivation resources are completely non-existent. Compared with a brother with the same qualifications who he has appeared in, there is no comparison at all. I don't understand this. The protagonist is a really good person, and there is no competition for resources. To be honest In other words, I think no matter how talented his brother is, he should fight for what should be normal resources. The true love between brothers is not mutual humility. The fight that should be fought will not affect the feelings of the brothers at all. After all, they are brothers, and they are not the kind of superficial, hehe, who will give you two swords behind the back. Fighting for it based on your own efforts and strength is a healthy competition. If you have the resources, it proves that you deserve it. But the protagonist does not have it at all. This can already explain some problems. The second point is, let's take a look at the first few chapters. Compare the protagonist with his clan brother who has already appeared. The protagonist can take a look at it and think about the image. Then I will talk about what I think is the younger brother of his clan than the protagonist. The younger brother of the protagonist is more able to use his own advantages and resources than the protagonist. He also practices very hard, and he is also good at playing to satisfy his own heart. Note, I said that he also practices very hard and is not a simple playboy. I feel that this person's psychological setting to awaken supernatural powers is much more reasonable than that of the protagonist, but the main point The fact that Jiao is able to awaken supernatural powers depends on luck, which is incomparable. He knows what reality is better than the protagonist, which is power, so people don't care about the protagonist's intrigues and go directly to find known opportunities. What is the protagonist doing? It's a stumbling block for him, and it's ridiculous. If you compare these people, does the protagonist bring the present into it and treat the family as a company? In fact, most of these people are already domestic slaves similar to our ancient serfs. The protagonist and his apprentices are equivalent to the status of the master's family. I can only say that it is ridiculous to submit to their masters and direct managers in front of this group of people.

The male protagonist can be said to be a false virgin. The worst thing is to see good people being killed. Especially Chapter 30 was really disgusting. It was nothing. Just write that you look ugly. That's fine, but why do you want to add some self-emotional drama later? I was really disgusted.

I can only say that it is average. The names of magical powers are reversed. The names are vulgar and vulgar, and the martial arts king has magical powers. Isn't the emperor the emperor's magical power, not the military god? This is one of them, and there is painting? You have a golden finger, and you still want to draw, oh no, this is a magical power, tsk tsk, There is no golden finger for time travel. You have to use supernatural powers to appear. Are you saying that you can't print it directly with supernatural powers? You also draw blood. I am speechless. You also draw a jade seal. Hello 6. I said before that I can draw and practice. When will I be able to draw, I can draw a jade seal.

What Goba world view. . Dare to start a family in the foundation building stage. A family like the protagonist's would be wiped out dozens of times a year. . Why, are all the Jindan monks kind? Are there a lot of training resources?

Oh, I killed most of the people and saved my younger brother, but then I touched the corpse and let my younger brother take the bulk of it. This book is really **

The setting of the first-class spiritual field and first-order spiritual rice in the opening chapter is too inappropriate, and its value is not worthy of its function! According to what the author wrote, 10 acres of high-quality spiritual land, ripened once every two years, can yield 30 stones (3,000 kilograms) of first-level spiritual rice, worth 300 spiritual stones. Even if it is framed and lost, what impact will it have? Can a first-level spiritual rice worth 300 spiritual stones still frustrate a family that earns more than 10,000 spiritual stones every year from its spiritual fields alone? The author should add the setting of "there is a price but no market", that is to say, the value of this level of spiritual rice is set by the cultivating sect, but it is not sold in the market at all, or it is not accessible to small families and casual cultivators. These affiliated families are actually farming for the Immortal Cultivation Sect, so as to comply with the setting that the family cannot afford the damage to the first-order spiritual rice. Also, the value setting of the spirit fox is inappropriate. Its overall value is only worth 20 spirit stones, which can help monks break through the bottleneck in the early stage of Qi training. As long as the young monks in the family break through the middle stage of Qi practice, they can become family fairy seedlings and obtain more resources to cultivate. So, can the protagonist's family and the twelfth brother's family not be able to afford this 20 spirit stone spirit fox? I can afford the Qi Gathering Pill, but I really can't spend 20 spirit stones to buy a spirit fox to raise the starting line for my descendants. Is this setting appropriate? To reiterate the original words, either it should be set to "price but no market", or the value should be raised. Otherwise, would this be worthy of the word "opportunity"? In particular, there will definitely be a lot of opportunities written about later in this book. In order to avoid loopholes, don't easily link the value of opportunities to spiritual stones, otherwise the writing will appear nondescript!

After reading a little bit, it's not as bad as many readers said. Speaking more objectively: 1. As for the previous content, readers said they judged it themselves and felt that the protagonist's image was not well created. They said that the protagonist's ability to awaken supernatural powers was entirely due to luck. I think there is still an element of hard work, and it accounts for a large part. There are some things that you may not get if you work hard, but if you don't work hard, you will definitely not gain anything. If you say that you work hard and then add some luck, and finally achieve your own achievements, and then others say that you rely on luck to set the tone for you, I don't think you will be convinced. Objectively speaking, luck and hard work account for half of this thing. Without hard work, there is no premise, and without luck, there is no ending. It is also said that the protagonist is scheming with his clan brother there, and there are also people who speak for his clan brother. For this kind of reader, maybe he lives in a rich family environment, so he still has a sense of substitution for the clan brother's character, so he feels "I am like this myself. Isn't it normal for such people to exist?", And then they will feel that those who work hard should be suppressed by people with resources like "us", let him know the social environment - hard work cannot compare with choice, and resources! For this kind of readers, I can only say that they have different ideas and positions, and we can't talk about it together. But you can't say that from this perspective, you can speak for all readers, or negate all the results of your hard work. You can think about it in your own mind and say it with your mouth, but your background will be shown in the post you make. 2. The second thing that is easily criticized is the magical power of the protagonist. To be honest, if you explain that the magical power of the protagonist has something to do with his time travel, then I still believe it, because Bole, I really doubt that it is a fairy tale from another world. Is there such a word? Shentong's name is Bole Xinyan. To be honest, I don't even understand how you came up with the name of this magical power. Did you give him a name after you came out and felt it? The protagonist's magical power can be used to copy other people's magical powers for his own use. The copied magical power is like a pain in the ass. It gives me the feeling of being a joke. It's not your fairy world. Why are you playing such a bad joke? Very humorous? You, the author? ! 3. As for the setting of "hardship comes after hardship", I think it's a bit too much. It's okay. The protagonist is blessed with double happiness. After suffering a lot, it's okay to have a small burst of luck. However, after arriving at the mission location, two more seedlings who can awaken magical powers were found. I really felt that the luck was too much. Although you have a magical power that improves the protagonist's luck, to be honest, taking him too seriously and deliberately setting it like this will lose the freshness. Although the luck brought by the unawakened magical power on the minor supporting character is good, it is nothing more than that. Otherwise, why has she not been promoted since she was a maid? And he copied the magical power of this maid. After the magical power is obtained, the effect will be much reduced for immortal cultivators, and it may only be able to play a marginal role, the icing on the cake. But it is just the icing on the cake. I think it is the icing on the cake. It makes the protagonist feel like winning a lottery. He wins one after another, and then goes to a certain place to buy a lottery ticket and wins two more. Oh, I really feel that. , Really, I really don't know how to evaluate it. Maybe the author wanted to write it this way. Anyway, for an old reader like me, when I saw this, I felt a little strange. You are still an old author. Alas, no wonder writing a refreshing article feels so satisfying. It keeps being fun. Invincible writing is like this. I don't mean to be sarcastic, it really feels a bit unreasonable. I won't talk about the price system, because if I really want to talk about the economic system, I think 90% of the novels in Qidian novels have fucking problems with the economic system. In the financial crisis, everyone feels that their money is not safe, their spiritual stones are not safe, and various currency crises... In a sense, such a financial system is not easy to write about. No wonder there is barter, no wonder there is a market. Isn't this obvious? Does it mean that the financial industry has collapsed? At this time, there are almost no banks in the world of cultivating immortals, because they are so disadvantaged that they dare not save money in them)? It makes your head hurt. If you want to learn these things, why don't you write nonsense novels (to be honest, when writing novels, you will inevitably write about international relations and financial trade between countries. If you can understand these thoroughly, write comprehensively, and write about the economic system completely, I think you will have no problem becoming a financial analyst). You can do stocks, you can do finance, what kind of hardships will you suffer as an author? 4. I don't know what to say. I feel like I've only read this little bit and commented so far. Maybe if I read more, I will comment more, but to put it bluntly, this book is a bit difficult to read. It's not that the content is not good, but the content is okay, but the plot has a few problems, and the character creation is a bit weird in various aspects. Other than that, the setting is okay. I think you can read on. If you don't use your brain, I can objectively say that you can still read it.

The cheat is quite interesting, but the limiter is very strange. The author should have set the limit first and then the cheat, since he just wants to draw anyway. After reading Chapter 20, I couldn't stand the powerful chess player who practiced Qi. The writing was not strong enough, the description was redundant, and the mismatch between strength and character made this villain look extremely disgusting. That's it. The setting of stealing magical powers is quite interesting, but it's just too narrow-minded. Raising horses is the right way. It's really boring to steal people.

Just write a story, write a story, and express your own opinions vigorously. It's really disgusting. It always reminds me of my past life. How good my past life was, come and explain it to me.