Great Sage Tongtian

I have never seen a novel that disgusted me so much. I'm not the kind of writer who abandons a piece of writing as soon as it doesn't look right. I really like the subject matter but the writing is extremely painful. From the beginning, the whole article is a long-winded explanation. I have to write half a chapter to explain everything for fear that others will not understand it. Who reads this type of novel and cannot understand it? The ending part, from entering the fairy world to the big boss in the fairy world and finally going to the outside world after the battle, is less than 80 chapters, right? Forget it, forget about the foreshadowing you laid before. The final book is really full of loopholes, and the preface does not match the follow-up. I wonder if you were busy writing a new book at the time, so the book ended like this? Especially the family and friends whom he protected so much. He had always said that they were the most important in the past, but in the end, during the final battle, he threw away the fairy weapon that contained his family and friends and was beaten to nothing. In the end, he didn't even mention it, and he detached himself and went to fight with other big guys outside the territory? Forget it, let's not talk about it, it's a waste of my data

There is no family affection, and there is no excess. There is nothing but chance and killing is boring.

The old bacon pretends to be tender, and the little leopard is really small. Those who wear human skin and do bad things are really considered the best in the world, and those who kill people will always be killed. Demons practice kung fu, devour human blood, and fight with heaven. Why should heaven let him down? Is it also a crime to fail to achieve results if someone is killed if he has the right to do so? Or the world will send you to death, I am so willful that I am afraid of no one! Isn't it beautiful!

Yes, yes, but don't always write about Jianghu events. Occasionally, you can write about family warmth, family affection, and simple villagers.

Chapters 7 and 8 are not overly explained when fighting. Sometimes they are cut off from beginning to end. From chapter 60 to chapter 230, objects and characters are explained all the way. If you say you want to explain it, just explain it. You just ramble on about an item for 4 chapters, then when you get to the main topic, you just go over it, and then continue to explain the next item. It's so damn speechless.

This book is quite nice

You can become friends with someone who randomly kills innocent civilians, so why don't you watch this protagonist?

I have a pair of iron fists that can blow your head off. Do you want to give it a try?

The IQ of the protagonist decreases as the person goes to the end. This book summarizes that the IQ of the protagonist, supporting characters and villains decreases as the person goes to the end. People who have realized the Tao and are at a higher level than you can actually beat you, who are at a lower level and have not yet realized the Tao. Did the protagonist realize enlightenment in the last chapter or was someone reminded him?

One eye between the eyebrows, and a silver wolf dog beside him! Is this going to follow Erlang Shen's route? 🤔🤔🤔🤔