Hp: the Age of Mythical Wizards

Alas, it's the heroine Hermione again. . . Let's bring in some novel characters. A fantasy plot like the Elves of Azeroth would be fine in Return of Magic. Why bother nailing the heroine who is so bad in other books😂

It's so poisonous, so poisonous, and the plot seems like an 8-year-old kid playing around. How can such trash be recommended? Really not worth it

The protagonist can obviously use simpler methods to solve things. He has to be troublesome. Simple things become complicated.

Brothers, run quickly, it's poisonous

You may really not be suitable for writing a book. The character you write is very holy. If someone uses Avada Kedavra on you, how do you hide it for him? When you get Voldemort's Horcrux, you don't want to hand it over to Dumbledore. You want to handle it yourself. You are purely trying to count the number of water words. Don't you know that there is something called the Flashback Curse? You have been wronged and just put up with it. Even if someone wants to kill you, even if it is not her subjective idea, I really can't figure it out. What position do you have to hide it for her? You are really a holy mother who is willing to be slandered in front of others. Not only a holy mother, you are also very stupid. After using the death curse, people can only kneel down and beg you not to poke him out. You are still touching yourself there. You are really hopelessly stupid.

Professor McGonagall's basic character is serious, but in your case it has become sentimental. Just emmm

Can't you write a good story? You have to add some bad jokes. If it's not funny, you'll be forced to quit.

The protagonist is a pure loser. He is not afraid of making things big, but he is afraid that they won't make a big fuss. He is rubbish.

This book is purely sadistic. At the beginning, Harry and Ron inexplicably beat him up. Snape shouted for veritaserum and even prepared to cast a curse. Then, the twins threw a big shit egg in the women's bathroom and knocked him unconscious in the women's bathroom all night. Oh, and he was trying to help Ginny, who was a complete stranger, hide the big melon that almost killed the protagonist. I can't understand that writing this kind of book is just trying to disgust readers.

Too Holy Mother, aggrieved, abusive to the Lord, uncomfortable to see