Hogwarts: Starting with the Snakehead

Fanfiction is actually a very labor-saving writing direction, with ready-made characters... Even if you use time travel, that means you don't have to make up the story now, you just use a new perspective to participate in the event, or observe the overall situation, bring out the attitude of the new character, and gain the halo of the protagonist... Pets are also a good point to collect and control, but after seeing Harry's father's stag drawn, I felt it was a bit clumsy. Too many things were mixed together. Even in order to make readers have a natural affinity for the drawn animals, the names of the original works must also be included. I think if you draw a few dragons, a few snakes, or three snakes, it is better than drawing these. They are tangible, their origins cannot be explained, and they are even anthropomorphic enough to speak directly. , Instantly blurred the focus of the article. I was expecting the plot to advance. After seeing the stag, I kept thinking about how to round it out. After they began to communicate and talk in an anthropomorphic way, I felt that the group portrait was too facial makeup. You can feel the coldness of the snake in front of you, but it was not successful. There was no actual thing that stood out. It was just pure coldness and naked desire for power to be the boss. These things are too flat. The characters in the original work have little original flavor, and the original characters cannot stand up I think you could even copy the original text chapter by chapter and change it from Slytherin's perspective. It would be a much better selling point than this. Only then did I remember that there is a system~ Well, it's mainly because I've been chasing it for a few days and I've been crushed by this deer's draw. Come on, give it up.

After reading the author's last book, I found that both of them were messy and disorganized. He especially likes to compromise. I guess in daily life, he is a man who kneels down and licks girls when he sees them. There is nothing more loser than this in life.

I don't know what the author is thinking during this holiday period. I added a bottle of procrastination. It can be foreseen that the next one will be a nanny article. I am here to persuade everyone to quit.

If that deer still likes people, one more point will be deducted.

The imaginative design is pretty good, and the changes in the magical world are quite interesting.

It's great. I love watching it. It's been a long time since I've seen a Hogwarts fanfic that appealed to me so much.

I really ran out of books to read, so I read this book. I had already reviewed it once. I didn't want to review it at first, but I saw so many typos and wrong paragraphs and sentences at the end. Didn't you, the author, read it yourself? Don't you even read the comments? You have never corrected it. There are so many wrong words, and some sentences in some paragraphs are wrong. Obviously many people have commented on you. Why haven't you corrected it?

The characterization is quite restored and there are basically no major problems. Goldfinger is too strong, I usually call this kind of speed run (first-year professor opens at 55, second-year Dumbledore, hello, third-year Tom, don't run away) The combat power is not broken. If Golden Finger is strong, he is not invincible, but there is nothing he can do to suppress his combat power. The plot is quite good, but there are no details, that is, there is no heroine, no daily life, just development. There is nothing wrong with giving 85 out of 100 points.

I like it very much. Please update it soon. It's really interesting.

It's a bit lacking. Please update.