One Person: Fusion with Akainu, I Will Become Evil!
About This Novel
Zhang Yuchen, who accidentally traveled to a world of one person and started as an orphan, originally wanted to spend his life peacefully with his sister in an orphanage! But on this day, all this was broken by a group of all-sex people. His sister was killed. At the critical moment, Zhang Yuchen awakened the Akainu system! As long as you carry out the justice you feel in your heart, you will gain justice points. The more justice points you have, the more abilities you will gain from Akainu! After that, Zhang Yuchen completely changed. What is justice? I am justice itself! Facing the Four Madnesses of All Sexes! Not only was Zhang Yuchen not afraid, but he was extremely excited! Now that they're all out! Then it melts together! Two heroes? Melt! Melt! I was worried that I couldn't find you, so I delivered it to my door! Face the all-out attack! Zhang Yuchen: Who said this is all bad? This whole sex is awesome! Hurry up and give me the justice value! Zhao Fangxu panicked: Old Heavenly Master, your Heavenly Master's Mansion has such a disciple! Don't you care? Zhang Zhiwei: I care? I'm afraid that Zhang Yuchen will be melted by me one day! Gong Qing: Daozhang Zhang, I will give you the acting head of Quanxing, please spare my life! But under Zhang Yuchen's "just execution", Quan Xing, whom the company had been unable to do anything about in the past, actually surrendered to the company obediently! Zhang Yuchen: I think a few of the ten guys have been very aggressive recently! Grab a few and have fun! Lu Ci: Taoist Zhang, Wang Ai ordered us to do everything, but it has nothing to do with me! Wang Ai:···
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Official(12)Scraped 6d ago
Let me just say one thing. The company of Nadutong doesn't know the origin of the protagonist. This is unreasonable. There was a rumor within Quanxing that they would rather mess with the King of Hell than the protagonist. So it's unreasonable for Dutong not to know at all.
I don't understand the protagonist's train of thought at all, nor the author's train of thought.
They were all talking about absolute justice, but they were still whining and letting two of them run away. Then Xu San Xu Si written by the protagonist is also true. I feel like I have no inner autonomy and I believe whatever I see.
Would a veteran like Lao Zhao do such a thing?
No one knows the main character. How could I rather mess with the King of Hell than meet the protagonist? Who passed it?
My sister was killed hundreds of years ago. It's really pitiful to be a relative of a time traveler.
The writing is terrible and the main character is too awkward.
Since I am writing a fanfic, the author should read the original work carefully.
It's like I'm sick. The currency exchange rate is so expensive. It's very similar to what you wrote.
There aren't many correct things here. Are you really good at writing about everything else? None of these people have written anything right. If you can't recognize someone, just search online.
The author's book needs major revisions. Chapters 2 and 3 say that the protagonist is known to everyone, but later it turns out that the company doesn't know the protagonist, and the four crazy people don't know the protagonist either. He is conflicted. Don't underestimate the company! After all, it belongs to the management, and in the first few chapters, everyone knows about Quan Xing, but in the end, Quan Xing's four crazy people and the acting head don't know about it. It's really inconsistent. This is the author's first time writing a book! If you have time, write a rough outline first, and then follow the outline in detail when you write later.
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Official(12)Scraped 6d ago
Let me just say one thing. The company of Nadutong doesn't know the origin of the protagonist. This is unreasonable. There was a rumor within Quanxing that they would rather mess with the King of Hell than the protagonist. So it's unreasonable for Dutong not to know at all.
I don't understand the protagonist's train of thought at all, nor the author's train of thought.
They were all talking about absolute justice, but they were still whining and letting two of them run away. Then Xu San Xu Si written by the protagonist is also true. I feel like I have no inner autonomy and I believe whatever I see.
Would a veteran like Lao Zhao do such a thing?
No one knows the main character. How could I rather mess with the King of Hell than meet the protagonist? Who passed it?
My sister was killed hundreds of years ago. It's really pitiful to be a relative of a time traveler.
The writing is terrible and the main character is too awkward.
Since I am writing a fanfic, the author should read the original work carefully.
It's like I'm sick. The currency exchange rate is so expensive. It's very similar to what you wrote.
There aren't many correct things here. Are you really good at writing about everything else? None of these people have written anything right. If you can't recognize someone, just search online.
The author's book needs major revisions. Chapters 2 and 3 say that the protagonist is known to everyone, but later it turns out that the company doesn't know the protagonist, and the four crazy people don't know the protagonist either. He is conflicted. Don't underestimate the company! After all, it belongs to the management, and in the first few chapters, everyone knows about Quan Xing, but in the end, Quan Xing's four crazy people and the acting head don't know about it. It's really inconsistent. This is the author's first time writing a book! If you have time, write a rough outline first, and then follow the outline in detail when you write later.
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