One Piece: Enma's Self-cultivation

Let's count it as three points, mainly because the protagonist's overlord color and domineering energy have not yet been awakened, and he immediately becomes entangled in the overlord color. And the protagonist doesn't have a stupid goal, right? What do you want to do when you travel through time? Do you want to dominate the world or just be an idler? Or what is the purpose of becoming stronger. No goals whatsoever. Just like what Cao Cao said, he has no ambitions.

The writing is okay, but the plot is too scattered. After at least 40 chapters, I still haven't seen the protagonist's direction in life. I only see that the protagonist wants to cause destruction in the world. As for why it is necessary to destroy, it is because the world is like this. The protagonist has no idea of ​​​​life, just like a brainless person. The strength aspect is also very unclear. Shouldn't the excitement in the early stage be a step-by-step improvement in strength? The author briefly mentions the top strengths of XX in the new world, and then there is no display of combat power.

After reading a few chapters, the writing is a bit poor and I have no desire to continue reading.

Okay, it's very well written. Keep up the good work.

A rare piece of war and pirate fan fiction that you must try. The author's writing is good, there's no big problem

When I was 7 years old, it slipped away and reminded me of a book about the 8-year-old Moonlight Wife.

I started writing without explaining anything at the beginning. No wonder it's so rubbish.

The Daemon of Khorne? This name is more or less a bit different

I think it's okay. At least I've been chasing.

The name of the protagonist is a good one, really, there is no sense of substitution.