Following the Pirate Journey of Enichi Kuni

The Holy Mother of One Piece... Makes me feel tired after watching it

Since the previous chapters made some readers feel that the experience was not good, I re-imagined the plot and now it has been revised. Interested readers can turn to Chapter 6 to take a look again. There are more and more comments, and there are many opinions that I think are very good. Thank you everyone for your guidance and support. I will read every comment, but I don't know how to reply to some, so I haven't been able to reply to all my friends. I would like to apologize to everyone here. But I did read it, but I couldn't reply to everyone because I was not good at words. Above.

The navy who committed evil crimes was let go in the end, and even asked someone to teach him how to breathe. It was so disgusting. His ability to live in peace and contentment was only taught by someone casually. Why? I haven't seen anyone casually giving him an unparalleled sharp knife. Super dog-licking virgin, it's so anti-human. There are no such people in this world. If you are willing to give me all your wealth, then I agree with you. What's even more disgusting is that he deliberately loses in the fight, and before losing, he teaches all the swordsmanship he has learned to a stranger. It's disgusting to treat a stranger to such an extent🤢

This book is well written, and the character of the protagonist does not ruin the original work. Starting from the first chapter, I stayed up all night and watched it around 6:30 in the morning. But starting from O'Hara's plot and betraying the navy, I suddenly lost interest. I skipped through a few scenes and couldn't stand it anymore. Of course, I only speak for myself. Anyway, good luck, author, and goodbye.

A compassionate character is not suitable for a protagonist. And Jiguo Enichi's character is too soft

I just finished reading this novel today. The fighting aspect is very attractive, but in terms of emotions, I feel... Regretful. I don't understand why. Most of the fan fiction I've read writes about friendship and family very well, but becomes constrained when it comes to love. When I first started writing it, I still had some expectations, because I thought it was well written, could be lengthened, and could make up for the regrets of Ji Guoyuan's love relationship. But when the author said it was just a taste to quench my thirst, I was, well, quite disappointed. However, this may contain factors that are more difficult to write. After all, I just read it and have never written it before, so I can't understand it. Overall, it is a good book and not too long. I hope other readers can read it. I also hope that the author can continue to use his strengths and make up for his shortcomings in the next book.

It's pretty good to watch, but the emotional scene in Peach Rabbit is not good

To be honest, Enichi Tsukuni's talent is really unbeatable among pirates.

It can't write a good plot, it doesn't want to have a main plot, and there is no emotional drama. The content is the same in every edition. It's a common problem among Pirates fandoms. The readership is very low. Most Douluo fanfics have thousands of comments. It would be good if a Pirates fandom breaks into double digits.

Love to watch Support more updates The writing is very detailed and the writing style is also good.