Uchiha God of Muscles

The setting for the protagonist is so 🐂, and then there is no need for a substitute, there is nothing you can do to defeat Shisui, and Shisui doesn't use a kaleidoscope. Didn't you open the 6 doors without any damage? Didn't you beat Kai? Why did Shisui stand still like a bastard? If you're afraid of losing your combat power, don't set it up like that. Otherwise, start writing it from when the protagonist was a child. Don't go straight to the complete body. If you're afraid of losing your combat power, you can only beat the nameless person. When I hit Obito, I caught him for 2 seconds, not to mention killing him. After all, there was a delay of Izanatsuki, Madara had used it, so Obito would be fine, but you just cut off both of Obito's hands, and Izanatsuki was useless and you let him run away? With both hands broken, he can't use ninjutsu and can only use Sharingan. However, Obito will reveal himself when he uses Kamui to run away and suck himself in. Does this allow him to run away? He ran away without even using Izana prostitute? He also said that he wanted to educate Itachi, saying that he had no education before because he had no strength, but now that he has a substitute, he wanted to teach Itachi and modify his personality. Then as soon as he started to improve, he told him, you wish Uchiha and Konoha would fight and die together. Do you have a split personality? I only have one word to comment on this 6

Recently I have seen two big poisons, and most people really can't handle them. And they're all very controversial. The first one is the one who has Hinata in his roots. To be honest, I read so many Naruto fanfics, and you are the first one to write about Hinata in the root. Guess why people don't write. They don't dare to write. Just afraid of controversy. There are too many secrets in the roots, and Hinata is someone he cannot fully control. With Danzo's character, he would never be dragged into it. And Hinata happens to be an investigative ninja, so the basic nature of Hinata is not high. The second one is that you write how awesome your physical skills are, but your speed is basically about one or two times that of ordinary people. It doesn't match your body's defense and attack power at all. And don't brag about how strong Jiu-Jitsu is. In our ordinary world, Jiu-Jitsu can only be strong if there are rules. What's more, in the ninja world, there are no weird ninjutsu. What to do if you meet Orochimaru. Joint Orochimaru said I have? Shuiyue, I'm sorry, I can turn into water. It's fine if Kaguya's joints are broken casually. I don't know what Substitution Technique is, but I don't know what one-hand-one-foot formation is. You can't write about people in the ninja world from an ordinary person's perspective. They can do many things that we ordinary people cannot do.

Can you make the book more readable by deleting negative reviews? Write it well. If you are gentler and cut off the characters, it will collapse beyond repair. Some books start with a god and then collapse into a mess.

What I hate the most is this kind of novel that doesn't kill the plot characters, and once they kill them, it doesn't write the plot. There are various restrictions on the protagonist. The more I watched, the more upset I became.

Orochimaru is Danzo's bodyguard? Scratch it, scratch it, make up the number of words. . . . . . . . .

I won't give him any points. The protagonist has traveled through time since he was a baby. His family at least gave him some help when he was weak. Then he said that Uchiha's demise had nothing to do with him and only cared about his sister. If you have been abused by your family, I can understand it. If you are a grudge against a grudge, you are really awesome.

His force value is erratic. It takes a lot of effort to turn around in the first second, but he can punch hundreds of punches in the next second. He has perfect control of his body and cannot even catch up with the teleportation technique. He also practices joint skills hard when the enemy has various substitutes and is in a state of virtualization. The battle process basically relies on being beaten. His behavioral tendencies are also inconsistent. He seems to be quite playful at first, but then he finds all kinds of garbled excuses to protect the plot. He stirs up trouble in the front, but when he really wants to make a fuss, he suppresses it again. Even if you have the ability to stand in, you don't need to rely on your stand in. Then why do you keep using your muscles and not be afraid of relying on your muscles?

Although there are some problems, I can still read it at the beginning. Later, I started writing about politics. The problem is that the author is not suitable for writing about politics. He does not have the political level to write hard, and the more he writes, the more boring he becomes. Isn't it good to write good articles and push them forward?

Shouldn't the God of Muscle be aboveboard, just like a mouse doing small tricks behind his back? The protagonist has no ideas and just wants to see people die. He doesn't care about anyone except his sister's life or death (and there's no plot about the deep love between brother and sister)? It's not that it can't be done. Can you explain the reason? Do you want to say that the protagonist is a born bad guy, a pervert? The image of a madman created is not complete. When he was reborn into the Uchiha clan, he said that he hated Itachi for destroying the whole clan, but he also planned to design the death of the whole clan.

It's not too much to write more about Yitong! Kiss