One Piece: Transform into the Eight Great Demons!

I saw it in the daily guide on the homepage. The One Piece in the title and the Eight Demons in Jackie Chan's Adventures are both elements that I like very much. The protagonist's image and temperament are somewhat similar to Luffy's. He is very nervous, naive, and very principled. The style of painting is very consistent with the original comic, and it also fits the image of One Piece in my memory. It has nothing to do with plotting or fighting for hegemony, it is just an adventure story. I think the author Big D has done a good job on this point. He did not just use the shell of One Piece to install a story about killing monsters, upgrading and harvesting. I am currently reading it.

One Piece fanfic, complete story, no female protagonist. Personal evaluation: early stage (8.5/10) Late stage (5/10) In One Piece fanfic, the protagonist is not a human, but a 1500-year-old statue made of historical text. Because of the Renren Fruit-Phantom Beast Species-the demonic form changes into a human form, he creates the eight demonic powers through imagination and learning*. The fruit of 1500 years of understanding and understanding is the golden finger of the protagonist. The story takes place in the very early days, when Luffy is about to meet Red Hair, and there is almost no Straw Hat plot unless he is following the boat. Highlights: The author of this book is obviously a super fan of Semicircle. It can be seen from his new book "Super Martial Arts Tokyo", a fanfic about Kenshin Bladega, that the author has a very deep understanding of fighting works such as "Bazeya" and "Fist Wisdom". Compared with ordinary numerical confrontations, he is better at describing the confrontation between "Tao" and will between two strong men in a struggle. Because of this, the author is very good at describing duels with people with strong self-will, such as Fujitora, Golden Lion, Barrett... Each of them has written extremely exciting duel plots. At the same time, in order to match these strong men, the protagonist's character is also quite unique. As a rough stone that has been sleeping for 1,500 years, the protagonist has pure curiosity and desire to explore the world. As the purest person, the infection heals the people around him, bridging a large number of tragedies and regrets in the original work. Poison points: Corresponding to several extremely exciting duels, I think the biggest problem in this book lies in the narrative rhythm. The plot in the first half of the book is quite exciting. The stunning duel and decisive narrative form an extremely exciting beginning. However, after the end of the Seven Waters Chapter... As the plot unfolds step by step, the rhythm of the entire book seems to gradually escape the author's control and become weird. The first is crazy repetition: the author likes to state the plot at the end of the previous chapter from a different perspective at the beginning of the next chapter, and finally settle on the same sentence. It is true that this method of repeating the same plot with different perspectives can enhance the sense of storyboarding and picture. However, if this method is used in some less important scenes, the amount of information is too low, and the narrative rhythm begins to become cumbersome and seems to be too many words... Secondly, there is the question of what the protagonist is doing. Later in the article, the problem of losing the perspective of the protagonist often occurs. You know, according to the setting, the protagonist of this article is quite powerful, but in the description of the article, there is always a feeling that the protagonist is standing next to him but doing nothing. Personally, I think this is because the author did not write the protagonist's action line clearly, and there are too many supporting roles. And the most critical thing - rhythm: the rhythm of the book is completely unbalanced in the later period: the three generals, the marshal, the five old stars, and the four emperors, these superpowers that should be written more have fewer plots than the last, as if the author no longer wants to write or does not know how to write. It can be seen from the speed at which the protagonist awakens the eight demons: when the reading progress is 60%, the protagonist has awakened six demons, but the last two demons suddenly awakened between 90% and 100%... Summary: The book is exciting in the early stages, but mediocre in the later stages, but it's still worth reading.