Pirates on Top of the War: I Will Stand in the Sky

Is Garp dead, is the crane dead, is the blue pheasant dead, is the yellow ape dead, is the red dog dead, is Cyborg dead? What's the use of stabbing a good person to death? You have to know that Sengoku is with Garp, and his behavior is dovish. However, in this position, he can only obey the orders of the Five Old Stars, so he abdicated early. It's such a fascinating setting. If you stab the red dog to death, it will be more effective than stabbing Sengoku to death.

Nowadays, it seems that the pronunciation has been unified as "Zanpakutō", but when I was chasing the series, quite a few subtitle groups translated the subtitle name as "Zanpakutō". Here are a few pictures to avoid calling me nonsense. Therefore, as a fan of ancient times, I have been led into a pit. After some readers reported this problem, there is no way to modify it. Moreover, in translation, "soul-cutting knife" is a kind of free translation, which is not wrong. Even if you search this term on Baidu now, you can still find relevant results. I can't accept it. I can only say sorry. After all, the author himself does not have the authority to directly modify the published text content that has been published for more than a week.

1. After reading the first few chapters of this book, you can rest assured that it is a relatively good sand sculpture fanfic. 2. Kuzan's transformation is a bit too fast. You can modify it a little. For example, in the previous article, you changed the original justice a little. Be more leisurely. You don't want to be shouting about youth one second and the next second there will be a wave in the footwashing city. Super double. 3. The most important point is that if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write about your protagonist. One moment he just met Robin, and the next second he regards her as one of his own. He may sometimes see the characters he likes in anime and have a crush on Robin. But based on the character you described in the previous photos, it is impossible and unnecessary for him to take the blame. And the emotional scenes you wrote are true. Xiaobai is really good for no reason, without any suspicion. 4. Regarding the description of the Revolutionary Army, it is okay for the protagonist to know the dragon. I think it is very reasonable. You have no problem asking Robin to join the Revolutionary Army. But why do you think a lazy person will talk about a spark that can start a prairie fire? If one day Sabo and Long have a disagreement, Sabo may not listen to Long. No matter how lazy Kuzan is, he still uses revolutionary beliefs and his own different understanding of you to exert force. So even if she later becomes a lazy general, she is still on the way to catch pirates instead of brushing pirates. The protagonist's character of never leaving the door, I think she is not suitable for revolution. 5. Regarding the golden finger, I can describe it in a little detail, or I can make a special chapter to talk about it. You can even write it in what the author wants to say, because there are many people. He has not watched Bleach, so he pays more attention to the fan settings about the Zanpakutō. Secondly, the Zanpakutō, especially the production of Devil Fruits that can be used by others is a bit buggy. Let's not talk about how many Devil Fruits can be produced by absorbing Devil Fruits. How many Sanpakutō are enough for you to use? Goldfinger is somewhat buggy for others to use. If you let a girl under 15 years old control a town regardless of success or failure, this setting is already a bit over the top. 6. Still the same sentence, Robin is so good with the protagonist for no reason. Although I know she is the heroine, Robin's character has changed and it is a bit unacceptable all of a sudden. And the protagonist, how should I put it, feels like a dog-licker. Robin has seen all the love and warmth in six and a half years. Once he comes back to the protagonist, nothing happened. This is directly related to the world government playing Infernal Affairs. It's really ridiculous. Brother, I really can't stand it anymore. It's easy to say this. The setting of the heroine is really ridiculous. It's just like those urban novels. I saw 60, almost 70, of this heroine. I really don't want it. There is no trace of Robin at all.

Are there any book friends who have read for 40,000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

I should also add a label. This is a harem story. I don't really like reading this kind of story.

Are there any book friends who have read for 10,000+ hours? Let's have a round of mutual relations

Author... (Grudge) No reply to comments No reply to questions Meow! There isn't even any updates about the author's assistant! Cracked... I*, you will lose me if you do this Woo woo woo

It's not bad, but there is one flaw. The author made the protagonist's physique too weak. As a result, there are many pitfalls. For example, the foundation of the One Piece world is physical strength and physique. If these two are too weak, no one will be strong. However, the protagonist does not seem to be exhausted. It's like saying that mages have infinite blue but the author never explained why.

If you don't kill the pirates, kill the navy fans first. It's a common operation. Have you watched too much of One Piece? I can't tell what justice is

Japanese, anime. See if it's okay. It's Sakura's ability again. Don't like it anymore.