
Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Li Immortal Clan
by Lu Buzi
About This Novel
The rest of the world, the four seas of Kyushu, Xuanzong's spiritual gate, fierce monsters and monsters Opening pulse, clearing Qi, building foundation, golden elixir, Nascent Soul... Li Jiangxian has a mysterious body and can rely on the monks' residual thoughts after death to practice, and use his mediocre three spiritual root qualifications to cut through thorns! Kill powerful enemies! Step by step, lead the Li family to seek golden proof of nature and aspire to the top of the immortal path! ... [Family Cultivation] [Farming Style] [No System]
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Official(4)Scraped 8d ago
Author, it's a bit difficult to write 10 words. Also, the novel is not well written. Bad review.
Author, what should I say? I don't mean to be picky. Just after resolving the family crisis. I feel like the expansion of the plot map is really a bit confusing. (I don't know if it's my personal feeling. Anyway, that's how I feel). Then the place started to get involved in the fights between the aristocratic families. I didn't get the breaking point of the plot here. It felt like it was forced to explain just to change the map. He was suddenly recruited, and then he got a small opportunity, and then he created his own skills, and then he stole Xuanwu blood, and then he got into a fight with a noble family. The jump is too fast😈. I was really confused in these chapters. It's really discouraging. Certainly. Your writing is really good, and your sense of family is very warm.
Chapter 3: You can obviously open your pulse, but you are delayed by the task, so you might as well not write about Zhu Yuan Perfection in the first place.
It's amazing at the beginning (for those who have read Xianjian), but it's average in the middle. It's not like I could read it in one sitting after reading Xianjian before.
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Official(4)Scraped 8d ago
Author, it's a bit difficult to write 10 words. Also, the novel is not well written. Bad review.
Author, what should I say? I don't mean to be picky. Just after resolving the family crisis. I feel like the expansion of the plot map is really a bit confusing. (I don't know if it's my personal feeling. Anyway, that's how I feel). Then the place started to get involved in the fights between the aristocratic families. I didn't get the breaking point of the plot here. It felt like it was forced to explain just to change the map. He was suddenly recruited, and then he got a small opportunity, and then he created his own skills, and then he stole Xuanwu blood, and then he got into a fight with a noble family. The jump is too fast😈. I was really confused in these chapters. It's really discouraging. Certainly. Your writing is really good, and your sense of family is very warm.
Chapter 3: You can obviously open your pulse, but you are delayed by the task, so you might as well not write about Zhu Yuan Perfection in the first place.
It's amazing at the beginning (for those who have read Xianjian), but it's average in the middle. It's not like I could read it in one sitting after reading Xianjian before.









